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Posted: 9 years ago


Three Carnations


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She kept her palm on his, squeezing it lightly.

"It's alright, Ro." She said managing to earn a small smile from him.

His family life has not been worth cherishing, in fact, was loaded with too many problems from fights to arguments and from slaps to shedding tears. Today, like any other day, Rohan sat on the terrace of the building and she on his side. That's why maybe he loved his place - the cool breeze and her - would never fail to soothe him.

He leaned in closer, forgetting for a second his problems, but her phone rang.

"It's complicated."

"Spare me the horror, please?!"

Rohan said uninterested, as she shed loads of tears over a stupid book character who died at the end.

"You are an emotionless, stone hearted chicken, you know?!" Kamya said still pouring tears.

"I'm vegetarian, so you can call me soya-bean instead of chicken." He said with a serious face, which made her chuckle.

Both went silent for a minute, looked at each other and then burst out laughing. Laughing for no specific reason

"The fact you won't be able to hear her cute little laugh anymore,"

"RO!! How the hell, do you solve this blob of shit?!"

Kamya scrunched up her nose in disgust, referring to the sum of algebra.

"You seriously couldn't solve this?"

Rohan smirked as he easily solved the sum, Kamya had been brain crashing for 10 minutes.

"Yea, shut-up"

Kamya scrunched up her nose, again.

"Or the way she scratches her adorable little nose."

He tucked the loose strands behind, giving him a clearer view of the shimmering skin of hers under the moon and the twinkling stars. His hand held her neck pulling her close, while the other rested on her waist. He leaned in slowly, and kissed her lips gently while her hands rested on his chest tugging at the blue shirt he wore. He could feel her smile in between the kiss.

He left her after he felt her getting breathless, and kissed her already red cheek.

"The kiss that takes your breath away is now, just a memory."

"Ro? If I'd be dead any-day, what would you do?" Kamya asked as she closed the book she was reading, which probably had some people dying, the reason she asked.

"Party!" Rohan said concentrating on his PSP.

"Okay."

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"Hello? This is the last number that had been called from the mobile that is probably of one of the three people dead in the car accident near Lonavla. If you could please identify the three bodies found at the local hospital here, that would be great"

Rohan stood there dumbfounded.

Nevertheless, those bodies were that of Kamya & her parents.

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"The girl you loved with so much passion and spark that it could ignite the universe, is now dead."

"Will you really party after I die?"

"Why do you think I would be lying?"

"Okay." Kamya went back to being silent again.

"Rohan, move on after I die, okay?" She said after a minute's silence.

The answer was a NO, not from him, but the life ahead.

"But you know in your heart, that she would want you to move on"

He opened the gates, and moved in front with three carnations, her favourite, in his hand.

He closed the gate behind, which left a loud irritating sound because it had turned rusty over years.

Switching off his mobile phone- to ignore the en number of phone calls- he went and sat uncomfortably in his suit, beside her grave.

"To keep going, to never lose hope"

He dropped the three carnations on her grave, each one symbolizing its own meaning.

Red carnation for Love,

 yellow carnation for Illusions and Hope &

 the white one for Eternity.

He sighed and went back after shedding some tears. He after-all, did party, as said, with his tears.

"Because Hope. Hope is what she stood for."

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"What makes life valuable, is that it doesn't last forever."

-Gwen Stacy (The Amazing Spider-man 2) 

Edited by Jhanvi_TaaRey - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Author's Note: 

Hello everyone, 
Another OS. 
I started writing on my recent favorites, but like always, ended up writing on TR. (Taani-Rey) 
But I had to change it to a Neutral OS because Ananya doesn't read on TR😆
She's the one who suggested the name "Kamya". And I came up with "Rohan". 
And she also decided their shipping name. 😆
Kamya + Rohan = KaHan =D
I had thought of an emotional OS but then thought of some light hearted moments too. 

The bold red lines are taken from the movie The Amazing Spider-man 2. 
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Like. Comment. Criticize. Suggest. 
Love y'all. 


Edited by Jhanvi_TaaRey - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
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It's short but I love you. <3 I would have missed out on such an amazing piece of work if you had written on the other couple mentioned. 🤣

The light-heart moments were really sweet and made the impact of the OS greater for me. <3 It was so damn sweet, their fights and their love. :')
The Amazing Spiderman lines are so good :O And it fit in perfectly.
And the ending about the party. DAMN, you know right where it hurts. -_-
Amazing OS <3 I loved it :')
Edited by ARandKJFan - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
janhvi ,
it was seriously ethereal...
i fall short of words to describe how much i luvd it ...!!
n the lines from the movie were seriously like an icin on the cake ..
made me nostalgic...
jst luvd it darling !!
keep writing more 😊 

-Aishwarya ❤️ 
Posted: 9 years ago
It  was beautiful. Simply beautiful. Loved it
Posted: 9 years ago

This was so beautiful. The quotations fit in so perfectly. It was relatively short, but that did not make it any less amazing :)
Posted: 9 years ago
OMG!!
heartwreckingly beautiful!!
what I loved abt it??
The way u managed to bring out d various emotions
the soft teases, the comforting gestures
Unconditional love...
yet a sense of loss ...of realisation. That all gud things come to an end
yet life goes n we move on
beautiful!!
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