Originally posted by diyataarey
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Omggg...
Amazing OS Leader...π
I almost felt like crying :')...
You see , what i like about your writing is that it is mature...
You know what you have to write and you oen it down beautifully...
You have got an amazing vocabulary as well..
Now i'll tell you how that makes a difference..
When you use one particular word quite a few times it becomes repetitive...
Then the paragraph doesnt seem right..
But if you have a good vocab then you jse the synonyms and the writing becomes attractive
And your writing is just full of new words .. it helps me build myself as a writer as well thanks :P
Now coming to the story.. it was so awesome..
I am mad for emotional stories.. i have earlier mentioned as well.. i love to cry..
And this story .. the pain which Ranveer had .. you described it so well.. it made me sad..
It made feel the pain he was going through..
And the way you described Panchi was perfect.. !
Her bubbliness .. her loving nature.. <3
And in the end.. when she was reading the diary.. i cant tell how impatient i was feeling..
I actually looked down slightly and say the words in blue..
I smiled..
She loves him too!!
Omg leader this is jus like a fairytale!
Its just wow.. :')
Keep Writing Leader..
Lots of Love,
Diya.
Diya..you made me wait but your review was soo fulfilling that me wont complain at all.. Thank you my rofl queen...
Mature..was it?? Thank god it was...π...n thanks for telling me that...
n babe that vocab bit ... π³... that is precious to me... you are already very good with words n m just super happy that I could contribute in some way to it
Did I sach make you cry...aweee... but me just glad that you could absorb the story at its fullest.
Impatient kiya tujhe???...π...
This was a fairytale cause Rahi are the stuff that fairytales are made of ... so tried to make everything picture perfect..
Diya you just made me smile more n more with this review of yours...n made me soo satisfied that I cant even tell ya...love ya loads girl..THANK U