ronnie... tum toh aaj update karne wali thi na?? u updated yesterday nite and i was like.. u knw?? gonna strt my spamming program but you.. u updated..
and aaa! *i'm crying*
i'm not first.. mujhe pata nahi tha.. that ur gonna update yesterday nite!! 😭 😭 😭 😭
aur i missed the chance..
ahhu ahhu ahhu..
hey.. ahhu ahhu se yaad aayi.. kaafi hot update hai..
matlab you know?? teri yeh ff mein rk ke baare mein padte hi mujhe kuch hojaati hai..
hmmm.. *kuch kuch hota hai*
and tum describe karke kyun nahi likhi hai.. just keh diya made love??
i wanted well described hot update..
chal.. from next update ur gonna write continuous hot updates.. 😉
hehe.. joke kar rahi thi..
update was really good.. thnk god it's long..
and haan.. mein yeh kaise bhool sakthi hun??
for that "leader of ronnie's spamming group - Aaru" title..
so sweet of you... 😊
and jaldi update karna..
i'm getting mad here.. aati hun to check u've updated or not.but u'll not.. and i'm pissed off..
Update Review:-
mood swings strted for madhu i guess.. she took lot of time in selecting.. and what was that??
deep back red dress woh bhi Mr. Kundra.. the hottie ke saamne..
is she trying to seduce him??
and in pub.. where u described that evry girl there coming and asking for a dance and small talk.. its too good.. u knw we gals drool over him..
and yaah... he is powerful a d you proved it for the tenth time in this update.. that fighting scene was not lengthy though but was well written..
and i loved priyu.. she is cute and cares for madhu... good friend..
and after that.. i didn't expect them to make love.. wooow..
ur an unpredictable writer... i never though they would do that.. it would be even more good if u would have gave a brief description of that love making scene.. haha...
nooo precap???? 😲
jaldi update karooo 😡
Edited by Aaru4DVD - 9 years ago
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