SS: Fatal Desires *UPDATED* (Epilogue: Page 45) #Thread 3 - Page 7

Sanju...

@Sanju...

Senior Member

Posted: 9 years ago

after ages an update..

it was SUPERB!!

lovvd the way it turned out..

d emotions , drama .. all good!

continue soonish!

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bria

@bria

Goldie

Posted: 9 years ago

after such a long time...but i 4give u as u gave such a awesome lengthy update...

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Qurat-ul-Ain

@ainanwer

Goldie

Posted: 9 years ago

Awesome update dear really nice

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859835

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

god bless u my buddy my sweetheart biwii 🤗 u said write uhardwork n write an chapter for us to entertain us make us happy n for me its realy important to atleast write a line so one could feel their mehnat got safal ... i gave almost an speech on it 😆 well i got little bit emo hope u r fine biwii ...n what to say on update its just out of this world .. romance passion drama everything we want n Rishbala ahem ...☺️ their tharkey fans favrt part 😳🤣 Rk u r in lovee dude accept it n Madhu u too beta;) lovedd it my ro... cm bck shoon plzz

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revti21

@revti21

Goldie

Posted: 9 years ago

Atlast u updated...awsome update...

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SreeRK

@SreeRK

Goldie

Posted: 9 years ago

Superb..The RK-Madhu love each other like crazy..loved the update

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Julie

@4ever4love

IF-Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

where do I start??

I am liking the changes in RK. He is thinking more about Madhu and trying to not give her the wrong idea about why he is back. I also like how comfortable he feels though the life style is completely foreign for him. It shows how important this relationship is to him; how important Madhu is to him.

I also liked how you brought their age difference into this chapter. Madhu does not care about it but there are subtle differences in their views which I liked.

OH, I love the title of the chapter, Possessiveness. It was perfect for this chapter. From both sides, Madhu and RK's.

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