RaHi SS: When Love Takes Over..Part 2/Page 9 - Page 5

Posted: 9 years ago

GEET AMAZING UPDATE DEAR🤗

BEECH SCENE WAS JUST LOVELY I ALWAYS WANTED A CUTE BEECH SCENE FOR RAHI AS THEY GAVE FOR KISHA BUT THAT RAHI DATE WAS ARUBT BUT U FINNALY FULFILLED MY WISH
I M SO HAPPY ☺️
& OFFCOURSE LOVED CARING NONU YAAR HE WAS SO ADORABLE GIVING INSTRUCTION TO KIYA HOW TO TAKE CARE OF MOTI
& KISHA MOMENTS WERE MAGICAL, KISHA KE BEECH SCENE YAAD AGAYE
NEXT UPDATE RV GONNA SAVE HIS MOTI ⭐️
UPDTE SOON CAN'T WAIT😃
Posted: 9 years ago
oww what a start it was great...
ahhh i cnat understand hindi😔

ufff this hero can be ranveer😳

waiting to read more

great work and thanks for pm
Posted: 9 years ago
Wow I loved the way you are writing BUDDIES <3
Carry on loving it
Sorry for late commenting
Posted: 9 years ago
Your late lateef is not very late..I guess😆
Hilaaa😲😲 unexpected
Ok this is my pov 😆:
You included alot of Kiya ⭐️⭐️⭐️
You included Yara 
You included Kisha🥳
And KiAn 😳
Ohhhwieee!!!🤗
And Rahi were cute as usual😃😉
The Yara part at the start⭐️ Kiya Mrs. Late (Lateef😆😆😆)
Kisha beach scene soo adorable!
The KiAn scene 😉😉 <3
I loved it a looottt! 😳 Sachi 😉
Update soon😳

Posted: 9 years ago
Loved it
The bond of everyone was so amazing
Nonu-Moti concern
Kiya getting late they all playing in the pool
It was a fun part
The last part let's see who this "he" is

Cont soon :*
Posted: 9 years ago
hayee i loved this part the most :::
Panchi excitedly hug him..: you are the best Nonu"...He hugged her back.."Anything for u moti"

good fun with suspense at the end. 

how i am missing TBP :(

plz do continue asap.
Posted: 9 years ago
Firstly sry for being sooo late
i was super busy with exams
but now i m finally free n i m so glad u r writing an ss on rahi
Just read d intro n first ch
loved d buddies beach masti
i like d way nonu cares for his moti
n yipeee i guess rv aa gaya apni moti ko bachane
plz updt soon
Posted: 9 years ago
hi geet
amazing start
beach toh meri bhi fav hai
kisha were so fun
rahi toh so cute esp rv
pure tym i was smiling
n those guys in the car
par ab no tension 4 kian unka heros jo aaya hai😉
update soon
Posted: 9 years ago
Geeet...i m finally here...bhagwan ka bhala jo yaha ka net chal pada..yippie...
so comin to the update...
it was freakin awesome...sachchi mein amazing...
nonu was cho chweet here...so caring and me totally loved it...
and our angel...as usual amazing...and these to together obviously make the most beautiful pair on earth...
starting from the start till the beach part was so much fun...
yippie all the buddies the beach fun and the perfect song was in total all perfect...
me loved the way u depicted our caring nonu...
hayye yeh ladka jaan le lega meri...sachchi...meri death iske hatho hi honi hai...
and the last part...honesy it was my secret wish ki panchi ko gunde tang kare n rv bachane aye with all dishum dishum n he super tensed...
so thank u for giving us that...
me super duper eager to read the nxt part...
and love u for this amazing part...
muahhh( how i missed this)

P.S. I am very very sorry for being late...kaan pakadti hun..sorry..
pls continue soon..
Posted: 9 years ago
And yes i forgot to say...
eagerly waiting for the love story to start...
n since u r the write so i am sure its gonna be beautiful...

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