RaHi SS: When Love Takes Over..Part 2/Page 9 - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuras_Rule

Comment Edited on pg 5 😃


Replied sweety😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: --Akshu--

Loved it
The bond of everyone was so amazing
Nonu-Moti concern
Kiya getting late they all playing in the pool
It was a fun part
The last part let's see who this "he" is

Cont soon :*


Hey Akshu🤗
Thanks a lot sweety
I am glad u like it
will try to continue soon
Love u sweetheart
Muhahh
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shammukh

hayee i loved this part the most :::

Panchi excitedly hug him..: you are the best Nonu"...He hugged her back.."Anything for u moti"

good fun with suspense at the end. 

how i am missing TBP :(

plz do continue asap.


Hey Lopa dear🤗
Thanks a lot dear
I am so glad u like it
will surely continue soon
Take care
Muahhh
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Posted: 9 years ago

Still waiting for your comment ðŸ˜³
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kriti094

Firstly sry for being sooo late
i was super busy with exams
but now i m finally free n i m so glad u r writing an ss on rahi
Just read d intro n first ch
loved d buddies beach masti
i like d way nonu cares for his moti
n yipeee i guess rv aa gaya apni moti ko bachane
plz updt soon


Hey Kriti dear🤗
No need to be sorry babes
I am glad u like it
means a lot 
will surely update soon 
Muahhh
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kitze

hi geet

amazing start
beach toh meri bhi fav hai
kisha were so fun
rahi toh so cute esp rv
pure tym i was smiling
n those guys in the car
par ab no tension 4 kian unka heros jo aaya hai😉
update soon


Hey dear🤗
Thanks a alot dear
I am glad u like it
will surely continue soon
Muahhh
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anjali1805

Geeet...i m finally here...bhagwan ka bhala jo yaha ka net chal pada..yippie...
so comin to the update...
it was freakin awesome...sachchi mein amazing...
nonu was cho chweet here...so caring and me totally loved it...
and our angel...as usual amazing...and these to together obviously make the most beautiful pair on earth...
starting from the start till the beach part was so much fun...
yippie all the buddies the beach fun and the perfect song was in total all perfect...
me loved the way u depicted our caring nonu...
hayye yeh ladka jaan le lega meri...sachchi...meri death iske hatho hi honi hai...
and the last part...honesy it was my secret wish ki panchi ko gunde tang kare n rv bachane aye with all dishum dishum n he super tensed...
so thank u for giving us that...
me super duper eager to read the nxt part...
and love u for this amazing part...
muahhh( how i missed this)

P.S. I am very very sorry for being late...kaan pakadti hun..sorry..
pls continue soon..


Anjali..Finally you are here🤗
really missed u sweetu
and don't u dare to say sorry
I can completely understand

awwiiee
I am so glad u like it babes
Really means  alot
will surely try to update soon
Lots of Love
Muahhh
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anjali1805

And yes i forgot to say...
eagerly waiting for the love story to start...
n since u r the write so i am sure its gonna be beautiful...


Awwiiee
that is so sweet of u babes
Love u My filmy queen
Muahhh
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Posted: 9 years ago

Thanks a lot guys for supporting me with your kind words...It means a lot to me...😳


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Edited by sweetdesire - 9 years ago
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Hey guys🤗...How r u all? So as you all can see that finally I am here with the second part of this SS...I know I am terribly late🤢 and seriously I don't have any particular reason for that..So I just want to apologies for this delay...Now, Without any further delay here is the second part...hope you all like it😳

 

Recap


One of the Boys went and held Panchi's hand. Before Panchi can try to free herself a Guy came.

 

Guy: Leave her..Right now!!

 

Panchi and Kiya were shocked to see him there.

 

 

Chapter 2

 

 

'Nonu''..Panchi smiled looking at Ranveer...Both girls got relived to see him there.

Boy1: nahi chodonga?kya kar lega?

 

Ranveer punched him on his face. Other boys also joined and start fighting. KD got out of the car and called the cops. After a while the cops came and arrested those boys. Ranveer got a cut on his hand, it wasn't that deep but it was bleeding.

 

Kiya: Ranveer you ok?...aur tum yahan?

RV: yes Kiya? I'm fine! Actually madam (pointing at Panchi) apna phone meri car mein bhool gayi thi toh socha dedon..

Panchi: Thank you Nonu!

RV: you are welcome moti.

Kiya: agar tum time per nahi aate toh pata nahi kya hojata?

RV: don't worry hum aagaye hai na?...mein tum dono ko ghar chor deta hoon!

KD: arey Ranveer tere haath se khoon nikal raha hai..

RV: kuch nahi hai..its ok

Panchi: Mujjhe dikhao? (Asking worriedly and looks at his hand) ab jaldi se ghar chalo , Mom  tumhe dressing kar dengi..

KD: haan Ranveer chalo..I will drive

RV: Ok chalo.

 

They reached Panchi's  house and tell the whole story to her mom..once she was done with dressing on Ranveer's hand she thank them for saving girls life.

 

Next Day in Imperial collage of communication

 

All six of them are standing in the corridor and were talking about what had happened last night.

 

Sheeba: agar mein wahan hoti na toh ek zor ka chata marti un logo ko..

Piddi: chata marti (he imitated her)

Sheeba: oye tu kyun hamesha beech mein bolta hai? (said it while punching him on his arm)

Piddi: ouch..maarti kyun hai?

 

Before they could continue the argument, Ranveer changed the topic.

 

RV: guys, guys hum class ke liye late ho rahe hain!

Panchi: arey haan?new professor remember?

KD: haan jaldi chalo warna late hojyenge

 

They go to their class and take their seats, Panchi was sitting between Ranveer and KD and Kiya was sitting between Piddi and Sheeba so they don't fight. The professor wasn't there yet, but as soon as he comes all the students greets him.

 

Students: Good Morning Sir and Welcome

 

Ranveer whispers in Panchi's ear: To hell..

Panchi: Nonu! Behave...

 

Prof: Good Morning students I'm Anirudh Jaitley, your new Journalism Professor.

 

He explains them his class rules and regulations and he gave them free time, as he was busy making guidelines for them.

 

Kiya: he doesn't look strict..

Piddi: chalo acha hai? (He sighed)

 

They talk for a while and then the bell rings.

 

Panchi : Mujhe library jaana hai..so I'll join you guys later?

RV: library kyun?

Panchi: kuch books collect karne hai,exams ki studies ke liye..

RV : oh haan?mein bhi chalta hoon..Mujhe bhi kuch books lene hai!

KD: theek toh phir hum log tumhara cafeteria mein wait karte hai..

Panchi and RV : ok..

 

Ranveer and Panchi went to the library. Panchi was trying to reach for a book that was on top of the book shelf suddenly she losses her balance. She closed her eyes in fear of falling down but was surprised to find herself in air, she opened her eyes slowly and saw Ranveer holding her. He saved her from falling. Ranveer was staring at her...he was mesmerized by her beauty. She was looking Beautiful. They both were lost in each other's eyes,  after a minute they came back to reality, as they were interrupted by the Librarian.

 

Librarian: you guys need any help?

Panchi was now standing properly.

Panchi: : n-no ma'am its ok...

Librarian: are you sure?

RV: ye-yes ma'am?

Librarian: ok..good luck (she smiled at them and left)

RV: good luck??

Panchi: for what?

RV: whatever chalo..

 

Ranveer and Panchi both were feeling awkward after what had happened 5 minutes ago. They signed out some books and made their way to the cafeteria. While going they were thinking about the incident.  

 

Ranveer to himself... "woohh, what was that?? She was looking so beautiful...I've never seen her like this before!!..Omg what am I thinking?? Yeh mujhe kya hogaya hai??..she is My moti..My best friend.. Focus Ranveer?.Focus.

 

On the other hand Panchi also thinking on same line.."Awwiee..he looked so cute..His smile, love his dimples, his eyes are so adorable...Gosh yeh mein kya soch rahi hoon??.. Why was he staring at me like that though? Whatever I...we are best friend...Right...I need to focus!

 

They reached cafeteria and joined the gang. Everyone was talking but Ranveer and Panchi were quiet...they were still feeling awkward.

Piddi: ok I have to ask you a question...What can you put in your right hand but not your left?..KD bhai batao iska answer?

KD: nahi pata be ...tu hi bata de.

Piddi: it's simple: Your left elbow.

This time everyone laughed except Ranveer, even Panchi laughed. Ranveer was still lost in his thoughts.

 

KD: hey Kiya tumne Ms. Maya ka project start kiya?

Kiya: Nahi ..lekin aaj zarror karongi!...and Ranveer please aaj kahin nahi jaana bohot kaam hai..

KD: haan yaar Ranveer..mujhe bhi 2 projects complete karne hai aaj.

Sheeba: projects toh hum sab ko karne hai,better hai ki hum aaj kahin nahi jaye..

 

Ranveer wasn't listening to them.

 

Panchi: Nonu!!...Nonu!! (She shook him) Ranveer?!

Ranveer came back to reality.

RV: hun? What happened?

Piddi: kahan kho gaya tha tu?

RV: k-kuch nahi..aise hi

KD: Anyways..hum yeh keh rahe the ki aaj hum kahin ghum ne nahin jayenge..

RV: kyun?

Sheeba: oye tune suna nahi kya...hum sabko hamare projects finish karne hai!

RV: theek hai..mujhe bhi kuch notes complete karne hai(he smiled)

Panchi: ab toh exams ke baad hi ghum ne jaa sakte hai!

KD: haan..bohot saari preparations karne hai..

 

The Bell Rang and they left for their classes. This time they were in different classes. Sheeba and Panchi are in same class, Ranveer and KD had same class, and Kiya and Piddi had same class.

 

After college they met at the college gate. They wished each other good luck for their projects. They don't have college for next two days, coz they were having exams after these two days. They decided to meet at Panchi's house the next day for group study, so that they can study together and ask each other questions.

 

Waiting for your reviews Guys !

Edited by sweetdesire - 9 years ago