Hold my hand - FF Final Chapter pg 60 - Page 35

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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 8 :

Glad that Arti nd her baby is out of danger . The concern for Arti and baby is written well...what I like more is you are  trying to bring in slowly Yash's past which is good...good update Kate.

Moving to nextπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 9 :

Quite interesting to know Yash's past but mostly the pranks they played together...Arpita-Yash. The best part was  - Arti keen in helping Yash and loved her honest thoughts. Appreciate how you write scenes to help the story to move on.

Good job Kate ⭐️


Wishing you a very happy and successful 2015 πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update kate dear...  πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘
Happy New Year cutiee  πŸ€—
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved the suspension u have in arpitha's story.nice update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update. Love the ease and comfort in which Maan was able to express himself to Geet,Fab job as always and looking forward to what is in store next
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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely update
so finally aarti and the baby is out of danger
aarti comes to know about yash past because of her mil
her mil planned to bring yash and aarti close
but think arpita is still alive as her dead body was not found it was just belonging
yash was so naughty in his college
poor guy got a earful because of some stupid prank of yash and arpita
lovely update
waiting for the next update
please update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: Shashi1984

Wish You a Very Very Happy New Year Kate.

Superb update. Aarti came to know about Arpita and made Yash to share his pain with her. Waiting for Yash to share how he fell in love with Arpita. Curious to know what exactly happened with Arpita. Gayatri hoping for them to move on in life and helping them to come closer. That's nice.

Thank you so much Shashi and wish you the same dear.
 You will get to know how Yash fell in love with Arpitha soon but Arpitha's case would be a mysterious one for sometime.
Gayathri will try her best to play cupid. Will see whether she succeed?
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: kmfan_2

Happy new year Kate!

Wow wow ...lovely update!
I love this naughty Yash!

Beautiful...waiting to see what he says...

Thank you so much dear.
Yup Yash was naughty and mischievous and he got a partner in crime for that. That was Arpitha.
Will try to update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: sara1990

awesome update

please update soon


 
Originally posted by: annirogc

nice part.. loved it.. update soon

Thank you so much dearies for the encouragement.πŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: Folla

thanks for the PM dear amazing update and iam so excited to know if aarpita steal a live 

Thanks Folla.
Arpitha is still a mystery. 
So you have to wait till it unfolds.πŸ˜‰