Hey! It's superb. It's true. What we get easily we do not value it. Yash had gotten all but he rejected his happiness. What Yash had done in the past was wrong and now he will have to work hard to win the heart of Aarti. Now at least he will be able to play Palak by the relation of Uncle. She will be definitely become cupid in bringing Yash and Aarti together. Loved it.
Thanks for the PM. Will be waiting for the next...
D unexpected Gift s interesting Maha....Radha's anger,Palak's cuteness,Rani's kindness nd Yash's Suffering r wonderfully sketched...Waiting 4 Aarti's official entry....
Fantastic presentation of the story without naming the mother as 'Arti'...the build up of story of his negative past with the changed present is beautifully written. Cute moments need not be ARYA alone...it can be emotions between Palak and Yash...it can be Rani and Palak...or it can be the room of his wife and kid which brushes and soothes his ruined past...the longing of being accepted is FELT.
Maha...👏...this is surely going to be rocking and the best of your collection. I may be late in reading but cannot be ignored... your effort is appreciated...to entertain us thru ur writings..keep up your good work.😃
wow..maha dear this ss is unexpected gift for us tooo😆 thank u so much for new ss 😛 beautiful ss, loved it 👏..seems diff concept 😳...waiting for next update continue soon dear...😳
thank u so much lincy dear 😳 yup its different concept with arya 😉
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