Arya SS ~ The Unexpected Gift ~ pt 8 ON PG 36 -updated 15/8/16 - Page 4

Originally posted by: chitsri65

Fantastic presentation of the story without naming the mother as 'Arti'...the build up of story of his negative past with the changed present is beautifully written. Cute moments need not be  ARYA alone...it can be emotions between Palak and Yash...it can be Rani and Palak...or it can be the room of his wife and kid which brushes and soothes his ruined past...the longing of being accepted is FELT.

Maha...👏...this is surely going to be rocking and the best of your collection. I may be late in reading but cannot be ignored... your effort is appreciated...to entertain us thru ur writings..keep up your good work.😃

thank u so much chitra dear..
always your words speaks the language of your heart.. its so sweet and inspiring dear 😳
thank u so much my dear buddy love u 🤗

Originally posted by: caller123

Oh I don't like this but I LOVE IT maha. It's a new concept and an amazing one. Waiting to see how it unfold?

Will Yash's wife forgive him?

Oh so many things to unreveal and the story is going to be so interesting Maha ... I'm sure sure sure.

thank u so much kate sweety 😳😳😳

Originally posted by: Zetter

Mind blowing, Dear...Can't wait for more 😉 ❤️

thank u so much zet di 😛

Originally posted by: saf24

Awesome start to the story. Love the details that were included. Yash must have felt so bad to be called uncle instead of papa by Palak. Looking forward to what is in store next.

your sweet comments always make me happy saf di..
yash deserves it and see what happens 😃

Originally posted by: taahir004

OMG so Yash had abandon his family 4 years ago all because of

business and while been in US he realized that he was wrong

Radha Ma giving Yash this treatment ...well in a way he kinda deserves it as now he will truely realize what pain his family went thru

its an xcellent SS , do continue soon

thank a lot dear 😳
your understanding in my concept makes me elated

Originally posted by: leenukiguru

awesome update

thanks dear 😛

Originally posted by: sb1410

Awesome update yash is on the receiving end of some much deserved punishment. Continue soon.

thank u so much sharlene dear 😳

Originally posted by: Folla

wow amazing update poor yash i fell so sorry for him so excited to next part

thanks buddy 😃

Originally posted by: Surish

thank u so much surish dear 😳😳

Originally posted by: MSN_Vanny

Congratulations on your new venture dear! 👏

This was a wonderful piece. Please continue soon. 😊

thanks dear 😳