This content was originally posted by: niveasreeOmg, Awesome start
continue soon and please pm meπ
This content was originally posted by: nirmalac99D unexpected Gift s interesting Maha....Radha's anger,Palak's cuteness,Rani's kindness nd Yash's Suffering r wonderfully sketched...Waiting 4 Aarti's official entry....
This content was originally posted by: ketki61waiting for Yash's fate to bring in good time with his family
keep us postedk
This content was originally posted by: roseroseyehem... ehem... mi dreaming...nahπ²...omg !! i got another one from u to enjoy now...π...
oh...so ...let me start commenting now::that was a superb job maha...u see the thing is u didnt reveal who is yash s wife...pls make that as aarthi...otherwise get ready to bear hockey kicks from gundi lady aarthi...ππ...ok jokes apart it was an amazing update maha...so yash ditched his wife and left to fulfill his dreamsπ‘... which is not at all acceptable ...and that too he left her in such a miserable state...almost alone whe she is expecting his baby...thatsterrible thing any woman can face...but still she managed to give birth to her (only her) child... and raise her despite of all hardships she had to face.,... and handling the business too...yash must be a big loser to do this to his wifeπ‘π‘...and now what is he expecting ...everyone will embrce him like nothing happened and wipe away his sorrows...isnt that too much to expect???...4 long years is really a long time...when he never cared abt who the baby is ...atleast did he know its a girl or boy...i wonder he ever cared???and what the hell why did he return afterall this years??"... wht did herealize??...the great realization of yash...π‘π‘...i just dont want to care abt his repentence now...that was the best punishment that his own daughter didnt recognise him ...and called him uncle...ππ...yahi hota hain yash...if u ignore and avoid the most important part of uur life... ab bugtho...π‘π‘hope to see his face to face with his wife...i expect her to show him cold shoulder too...like his dear mom radha who once cared for him a lot and now repenting for having a son like him...ok ok i know i was so rude now...but may be i will melt once i come to know yashs side of story...π‘...thatsa fantastic job...πwaiting for the nec=xt soon ...dont make us wait this long...π
This content was originally posted by: sita_ramawonderful update.
waiting for the next updatethanks for the pm
This content was originally posted by: kmfan_2Absolutely fantastic startβοΈ to a great story ahead!π
Loved it Maha...you have written this very well...πβοΈ
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