One Shot - Controlled. - Page 3

Hey aditi!!!
D first line...d thot..its nyc!
N d os is awesome!!
So it was a rone dhone wala os!
Ur gud writing down tragedy!
So at last...she did gain control over her feelings!
Atleast for tym being! Bt she did!!
Its grt!! 👏

Originally posted by: kreya204

Hey aditi!!! Heylo! Whats your name?😆
D first line...d thot..its nyc! thank you😳
N d os is awesome!!  i am flattered
So it was a rone dhone wala os! Yeah, i love tragedy.
Ur gud writing down tragedy! Pata nae, its like apne aap aa jaati hai tragedy or angst while baaki sab thoda difficult lagta hai.
So at last...she did gain control over her feelings!
Atleast for tym being! Bt she did!! I would say, she never did. It was just that numbness acting upon and then she realizes that still her best friend had the power to control her emotions.
Its grt!! 👏

Im speechless 😲
Thank God I found the link in my news feed and read it.. I was so immersed in it I didn't realize when it ended..
I loved it.. I could feel the emotions of the girl..
I know its an OS but plz continue 😆
I want it ending on happy note with the girl emerging as a winner 😳

PS - Im ur Beintehaa songs buddy 😆 Edited by neha_bbsr2005 - 9 years ago

u knew it that i will be stalking...wow..
nd muje to acha laga os ..shenz di is an experienced writer re...
nd gallery jaldi pm kr...
m ready to bug u for that..."rubbing hands with wicked smile"...
GALLERY BANA JALDI

it was short but yet... it was touching...

Beautiful Just Beautiful! Its Saddening OS but the way you have describe the situation is Surreal! Update another too!

Amazing os. Deep feelings...
If writing more such brilliant stuff brings back ur touch, then u shud surely write max no.of stories dat u can cz i wud luv to read more of ur write-ups.
Gr8 job done.

GALLERY BANA DE ADI...
nd i forgot to ask...shenz ke review honest...u mean to say maine jhoot bola...???...haaawww...dekh li teri dosti

nice os...

really love the presentation...

 

love it

 

thanx for pm

Wonderful os!
Love d way u hav described hr emotiins. Beautiful