One Shot - Controlled. - Page 4

Originally posted by neha_bbsr2005

Im speechless 😲 sacchi?
Thank God I found the link in my news feed and read it.. I was so immersed in it I didn't realize when it ended..  Another reason might be that it is way too short🤣
I loved it.. I could feel the emotions of the girl..  Ah, glad I was able to do that.
I know its an OS but plz continue 😆 Sorry yaar. You already know I won't
I want it ending on happy note with the girl emerging as a winner 😳  Awie, she will surely come out someday

PS - Im ur Beintehaa songs buddy 😆  I know, I guessed by reading your ID name and Emma Watson pic

Originally posted by akankshaArsha

u knew it that i will be stalking...wow.. Tu hai hi stalker na so I knew.🤣
nd muje to acha laga os ..shenz di is an experienced writer re...  I know, tabhi toh i wanted her review since unko koi farak ni padta meko jhadne mai🤣
nd gallery jaldi pm kr...
m ready to bug u for that..."rubbing hands with wicked smile"...   Behen Shaanti. Let me think of a name for it and ask my friend for tags and banner😆
GALLERY BANA JALDI

Originally posted by Dewdrops.ShaKun

it was short but yet... it was touching...

Originally posted by NEAK.KAJEN

Beautiful Just Beautiful! Its Saddening OS but the way you have describe the situation is Surreal! Update another too!

Originally posted by Thats.me.Guni

Amazing os. Deep feelings...
If writing more such brilliant stuff brings back ur touch, then u shud surely write max no.of stories dat u can cz i wud luv to read more of ur write-ups.
Gr8 job done.

Originally posted by akankshaArsha

GALLERY BANA DE ADI...  Bola na thodi der ruk🤣
nd i forgot to ask...shenz ke review honest...u mean to say maine jhoot bola...???...haaawww...dekh li teri dosti Chup kar, Drama Queen. maine bola Shenz di se kuch seekh ke kaise pata kare kya accha hai kya bura🤣

Originally posted by PrOjeCtA

Wonderful os!
Love d way u hav described hr emotiins. Beautiful