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Posted: 9 years ago
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 My dear friend ...me seetha , a compassionate reader and an occasional writer ---love the way you expressed the pathos of a wounded woman's heart felt feelings and pain . The narration is really very good ...but ...but it seems you have given an abrupt end to a wide range of feelings ?! It seems ...what I want to say is ...yes longing to read more good and meaningful expressions from you !!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
that's beautifulll aditi... :) u expressed her emotions beautifullly... :) :* i m jzt totally in lov wid this.. :D
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome..quick nd cute bt sad..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Such a beautiful OS (: I loved it you're an immensily talantef yert creative writer
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Posted: 9 years ago
This content was originally posted by: --Akshu--

I liked it Adi I really like such OS
I loved the meaning of it the concept behind it
So write more plz
Sorry for short comment 😆

Die, I am not accepting that comment of yours😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
This content was originally posted by: lovely7010

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Why do you write such stuff?? Next time se warn be the genre before. Tab hi mein padhungi...you know a I don't like aise stories...now my mood is kharab...write something happy and make me happy. And kripya karke apne stories ki length ko badhaye...


By the way this was nice...emotional and tragedic tha...

I love such stuffs that is the reason I write such stuffs -_- I can not and will not help that😆
Glad I could ruin your mood🤣
Fine, Imma warn you about the genre beforehand😛
lemme think on the length issue, I mean seriously thinking😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
This content was originally posted by: SEETHA.K

 My dear friend ...me seetha , a compassionate reader and an occasional writer ---love the way you expressed the pathos of a wounded woman's heart felt feelings and pain . The narration is really very good ...but ...but it seems you have given an abrupt end to a wide range of feelings ?! It seems ...what I want to say is ...yes longing to read more good and meaningful expressions from you !!!

Hey Seetha🤗
Lol. Sure will write more of it and PM you.😆
Thank you so much for such a generous comment😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
This content was originally posted by: shalini_arsha

that's beautifulll aditi... :) u expressed her emotions beautifullly... :) :* i m jzt totally in lov wid this.. :D

Thanks Shalini😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
This content was originally posted by: -RKV-

Such a beautiful OS (: I loved it you're an immensily talantef yert creative writer

Thank you so much for the appreciation dear. May I know your name?😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
This content was originally posted by: tinatartari

Awesome..quick nd cute bt sad..

Thank you so much Tina😊