My 1st ArNi attepmt.. OS :Roshni Weds Arjun! :) - Page 4

Sister..Sishta...
Speechless..
Initially I have thought that I wont comment now..
Coz my brain n heart..both aren't working..
Then I know that my brain wont ever work after reading this OS..
So whatever part of my heart is working, let it do the job..
Every part of this OS was drenched with reality. .
Their 1st meet, their fight, their confession, their union, Roshni's demand, their (?) Ending..
Everything was created magically. .beautifully..like a poem..
Like a sad poem..
Or as my SirG says..like Tajmahal..
I cant believe that it was written by my sister. .
It was written on such a different plot..
It was gathered events after events..but in few sentences. .
With all essences in it..
Arni - my favorite pair..forever...
Feeling numb..even not crying. .
But its paining so badly sishta..
Cant make you understand..though you know me thoroughly. ..
I saw some of ur tweets with partner regarding story..
But I couldn't read them due to lack of time..
Now I have understood..
Thank God that I hv opened AF page today to discover this story..
Arjun will never end for me..
Neither Arjun n Roshni..
Nor this story..
Happy Birthday SirG..once again..
May you get all the happiness..may this pain remains for Arjun only..
May you never get to know any pain..
What a beautiful gift from my sishta..
I am proud of each words of this story..
Rab rakha..

Hai...Sakshi..

Happy to see you after a long time...
Hope you are fine and happy...

And the OS ...it was very nice...
I liked this...especially the end part...nice..

Thanks for the pm dear...
Sorry for late comment...not so active in IF nowadays...

Take care and bye...

Awesome
superb
loved it

very beautifully written
loved Arni
and missed them
Really felt bad for Arjun and Sam

beautiful friendship well written

it was soo beautiful

This content was originally posted by: Amritamalhotra

Sister..Sishta...
Speechless..
Initially I have thought that I wont comment now..
Coz my brain n heart..both aren't working..
Then I know that my brain wont ever work after reading this OS..
So whatever part of my heart is working, let it do the job..
Every part of this OS was drenched with reality. .
Their 1st meet, their fight, their confession, their union, Roshni's demand, their (?) Ending..
Everything was created magically. .beautifully..like a poem..
Like a sad poem..
Or as my SirG says..like Tajmahal..
I cant believe that it was written by my sister. .
It was written on such a different plot..
It was gathered events after events..but in few sentences. .
With all essences in it..
Arni - my favorite pair..forever...
Feeling numb..even not crying. .
But its paining so badly sishta..
Cant make you understand..though you know me thoroughly. ..
I saw some of ur tweets with partner regarding story..
But I couldn't read them due to lack of time..
Now I have understood..
Thank God that I hv opened AF page today to discover this story..
Arjun will never end for me..
Neither Arjun n Roshni..
Nor this story..
Happy Birthday SirG..once again..
May you get all the happiness..may this pain remains for Arjun only..
May you never get to know any pain..
What a beautiful gift from my sishta..
I am proud of each words of this story..
Rab rakha..