My dream track (26/35 part added)(ff

Posted: 9 years ago

 part 1 Surprise visit    page  1

part2   couple chess   page 2 

part 3    tricked and booked          page 5

part 4    Start with thunder             page8

part 5    bhoot bungalow                page 11

part 6    day1(A)                         page 12

Part 7    vintage car                       page 12

Part 8      Ruhi's Revenge              page 14

part  9    Bhoot ayya                       page 15

part 10   Dream or True               page  16

part 11   Dream continues          page 18

part 12  Surprise awaits               page 20

part  13  dream come true           page   22

part  14   plan success                 page 24 

part 15   dream continues               page 26

part 16  Ruhi's prank                         page 26

part 17 returning home                      page 28

part 18   Real Dowry                          page 28

part 19  Gift for Ruhi                                 page 30

Part 20   New Owner  page 30

part 21               page 31

part 22                       page 32

prt24, 25      34

PART 26                       35

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Surprise Visit

Scene starts in Chennai in Mihika's mothers house wher everyone is celebrating Shashti(a ritual conducted when couple turns sixty.Dont know exactly) of My Iyers relative.

Both Ishita and Mihika were present along with Ruhi.Whole Iyer family including Subbu's family is present there.

Ishita repeatedly calling Raman while he was not taking the call.Ishita was tensed as Raman was not taking call but handles herself saying he would be busy in a meeting.Ruhi is playing with other kids and Shravan.

Ishita tells Mihika to call Mihir once and confirm what is Raman doing.Mihika calls but Mihir is also not receiving the call.

Mihika "Usko tho main ghar jaaney key baad dekh loongi phone nahee uharaha hain."

Ishita "Shayad busy hooga."

Mihika "Busy hotha tho phone kyoo kaat tha katsaktha hain tho uthakar bol saktha hai naa busy hain."

Ishita "Shayad kuch urjent hon.Kamse kam tumney Mihir sey baath key shubhaha ,Raman tho phone naheen utha rahan hain.Subaha baath kee who bhee sirf Ruhi sey jab main baath kar rahee tho phone katdiyaan.Khadoos Ravan Kumar.Smajh rahan hain kee main mar rahee hun ussey baath karney."

Mihika "Lag tho raha hain.Shubaha sey tumhara phone hath mey sey jyaada kaan par hain."

Same time Bala's family come there.Subbu and his wife along with their new born son.

Subbu's wife greets Ishita  and Ishita greets her in reply.

Ruhi comes there and complains about Shravan and Ishita solves the dispute and they leave.

Subbu's wife "Who ladkee aapkey bethi hain .Mainey sunaa key aap kabhee Maa ban naheen saktey."

Ishita "Who meri bheti hee hain.Bhagawan ney diyaan huan.Meraa husband kaa bethi hain."

Sw "Aap Subbu sey Shadi karney waali thee na aur Subbu ney apsey shaadi karney inkaar kar diyan."

Ishita was silent but Mihika replies "Koi ek kaam tho theek kiya subbu ney.Aaj akka bahut khish hain jeeju key saath .Jeeju bahut khyal rakhtaa hain poorey pariwar kaa."

 

Bala's mom was speaking to some old couple .

She was praising her sons.

Bala's mom "Aaj Bala college mey HOD hain aur Subbu uskey company ka General Manager hain.Unkey boss ka bahuth bharosaa man hain.Issliya unko bhee lakar ayaan"

Subbu introduces his boss to the old couple.

Subbu's mom "Subbu hamesha busy rehta hain .Kal uskey office mey bahud badaa meeting hain phir bhee aapkey liyen ayaan hain."

She was praising Subbu and her bahoon.

Bm "Kismat mey hona chahiyen hummarey subbu sey shadi karney ."looking at Ishita

While Ishita sees Subbu .Subbu downs his head seeing Ishita.

Then couple notices Ishita and Mihika they call them  near.

Old couple "Ishita suna hain tum donon ka shadi bhee huyi hain koi punjabiyon sey.Who naheen aye kya."

Ishita "Usko kuch urgent kaam tha aa nahey payen."

Oc "Tumhara pathi kya kartha hain?"

Ishita "Ek MNC mey achey position mey hain."

Same time Bala's mom starts "Mainey bahoot baar milaa ussey .kuch jyaada hen laaparwah hain."

Bm "Uskoo tho koyee tamez hee nahen kee badon sey kaisey baath karnaa.Mera beta kon dekho kitnaa achey position mey rehakar bhee kitnaa sanskaari hain."

Bm "Who tho chiken kaatha hain daroon bhee pitha hain.?Madhavi ji ney tho apney bethi kee shadi aisey ghar mey kardee.Dekhiyen naa poora pariwar yahan ayaa hain un donon key bhina."

Iyers get embraced listening Raman being taunted.They know very well how ethical Raman is.But they don't want to start quarrel befor couple.

Ishita gets angry but controls seeing elders there.Mihika was almost ready to fire but Ishita stops her.But she cant stop Ruhi.

Ruhi "Aapkey himmat kaisey huyi mare papa key baarey mey aisey baath karney kee.Mere papa achey hain unko kaisey baath karna atha hain.Aap ko naheen aatha ."

Ishita tries to stop Ruhi.

Bm takes advantage "Dekhiye naa uss ladkey kho bhee.Badon sey kaisey baath karraheen hain."

Ishita holds Ruhi and stops her from arguing .Then Ruhi notices something and removes Ishita's hand from her and says "PAPA" surprised and happy.

When everyone turns around they see Raman coming along with Mihir.Ruhi goes running and hugs Raman .Raman takes her in her arms while she kisses him.While both Ishita and Mihika were shell shocked.Bala's mum face was thinder struck seeing Raman there she remembers her previous encounter's with Raman .

Ruhi "Papa ,aap yahan?"

Raman "Main Delhi mey rahoonga tho yeh sweet see smile naheen dekhpaaonga naa issliya aagaya Ruhi sey milney."

Subbu's boss sees Raman and goes near him "Sir Aap Raman Kumar Bhalla hey hain naa. CEO of PSR.Aaapko tho CEO of Year award bhee milaa tha.Kal hummara ek meeting bhee hain."

Raman "Han main Raman Bhalla hee hun.Humey meeting kal hain tho hum kal baath karengey.Aaj main aapney relatves key function attend karney ayaa hunt ho please excuse me."

Old couple "Kaun hain who Ishita ?Tum janthey hoo ussey?"

Raman comes there while Ishita was still in shock.Mihir confirms it is his plan to surprise everyone by gving surprise visit.

Mr Iyer to OC "Bhayya Ishita kaa pathi hain Raman."

Oc "Ishita tumney kahan kee who nahen ayya?"

Raman comes there at same time he takes blessings from couple "Busy tho thaa.Meeting yahan fix karkey aa gayan. Kee Aap sabsey bhee milpaoonga once a life event hain naa."

Oc are pleased with Raman's answer.

Bala comes there and greets Raman and they speak in their regular friendly manner.

Bala introduces Subbu to Raman .Raman gives him a firm handshake.

Subbu "Nice to meet you."

Raman "Main bhee aapsy milney key liyen bahoot din sey intazar tha.Thanks jho boolna tha mujhey."

Subbu's boss "Subbu tum Raman Bhalla ko janthey hon.Yeh tumharey rishedaar hain.Kal humey unkey saath meeting hain.Jiss meeting key liyen hum mahino sey mehenat kee.Uss deal ko paney key liyeen.Uss deal key baarey mey baath karney ayaan hain.'

Subbu was shocked knowing Raman Bhalla for meeting whome they have worked so hard is none other than Ishita's husband Raman.

Old couple were listening conversation.Ishita came and stood beside Raman silently.

Raman "Sir mainey aapsey kahan kee main yehaan fuction attend karney ayaan hon .Iss ghar key dammat honey key naatey.Yahan business key baath math keejiyen."

Ishita was happy listening this.She has no control over her smile.

Oc ask Bm "ladkaa tho bahut shareef lagrahaan hain.kitney sanskaari hain."

Bm face was burnt like a popcorn but she din't answer remembering her previous encounters.

Ishita asking "Aap ney mujhey bataya naheen kee aap aarahen hain.Phone naheen utha rahey they."

Raman "Mihir kaa idea thaa .Usney kahaan key surprise deydey sabkoo."

Ishita was heavily surprised by seeing Raman .   She is looking at Bala's mom indicating should I tell what you told about Raman to them.She run's away from there faking a reason.

Oc make Raman sit and starts speaking to him.

Ishita goes away from there but her eyes were fixed on Raman.She was watching him silently  and blushing.Raman was trying to get a look on Ishita while speaking to couple.

Edited by SAKIV-RAM - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Ya its Shashti purthi(60th birthday)...Nice OS...😊
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by JniISHRA83


Ya its Shashti purthi(60th birthday)...Nice OS...😊
I know I am from andhra this ritual is done there also.I thought to use it .It will be important function fro old age couple.
Shashti means 60
Purthi    means completed


By any way do you know Raman's company name.I am feeling weird to keep a blank there.
Edited by vikaschandra - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Awnnn that would be soo cuteee :D
<# loved it
Posted: 9 years ago
Nice OS. Thank God Raman came at the right time to shut Subbu's Mom nonsense about him and Ishita !!
Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice...
Raman thanking Subbu was the best part 😊
Posted: 9 years ago

 Couple Chess

 After few minutes Raman excuses himself out and meets Mr Iyer.He guides him to Ishita's room.In room he is doing his regular blabbering.

Raman "Itney door sey meeting shift karkey uskey liyee aaya who tho baath bhee nahe kee.Uss Jhansi ki Raani abh kahaa rahagayyi abh."

Ishita comes at same time but in slow pace.

She was looking at Raman .Raman notices.

Raman "Aisey kyaa ghoor rahi hoo?Khajaaogi kyaa?"

Ishita correcting herself.Ishita "Aap Shashthi purthi key liyye aye hain kuch acehy kappade nahee pehan saktey kyaan.Yahan bhee suit pehenkey aagaye."

Raman "Main shashti key liye naheen meeting key liyye aya tha.Waisey aye gaya tho ek baar chehraa dikhaaney aagaya.Yum yeh math samajhnaa key tumharey liyen ayya."

Ishita "Main waisey cheej to aapsey expect hee naheen karthee."

Raman "Tum subaha set kyo phone karrahee thee.Kuch bolnaa tha kyan?"

Raman asks looking at his mobile but his eyes are actually on Ishita.

Ishita covers herself and tell "Bass ek baath poonchney phone kiyya tha."

Raman "Kyaa?"

Ishita "Aap aaj pant penhenna bhool tho naheen gayye."burst into laughing.

Raman little embrassed .

Raman "Waha baath kyaa horahee they.Ruhi gussey mey thee jab may ayya tho.Kya ho raha thaa."

Ishita thinks about Bala's mom's words and tells "Kuch naheen .Bass hum baath karrahey they  Ruhi ko accha naheen lagaa."

Same time Ruhi comes  Raman understood Ishita is hiding something and asks Ruhi .

Ruhi "Papa uss aunty ney aapkey baarey mey boora baath kar raheen theyaur usney mama ko bhee dantaa."she tells what happened.

Raman  "Beta aap   badon sey aisey baath naheen karthey.Ishimaa bhee chup thee naa unko respect dekar .It is bad manners."

Ruhi "Papa who aapko aisey kaisey bol saktey hain?"

Raman "Rehney doo abh dekhtey kaisey apnaa jubhan kholegee."

Both Raman and Ruhi starts laughing Ishita was smiling looking them happy.

Ishita "Main aapkey liyen coffee laun."

Raman "Kall poochlety abh itnaa jaldee bhee kyon hain."

Ishita "Chahiye to pooch bhe saktey hain naa.Intazaar kiss baath kaa."

While Ishita goes outside to get coffee to Raman.Raman is changing to formals

 

Subbu was noticing Ishita from distance while Ishita was busy taunting Raman.

Ishita "Itney door sey tho milney key liye ayya bath tho abh bhee seedha nahin hoogi."

Subbu's wife"Kissey baath kar rahee hain aap?"

Ishita "Sorry."

Sw "Aap kuch bol rahee thee."

Ishita "Who kuch naheen .Bass main Raman key liye coffee bana rahee thee."

Sw" Aapkey husband bhee aye hain yahaan."

Old lady comes there.

Ol "Ishita tumney subaha bathaya naheen kee Raman company kaa CEO hain."

Ishita "Raman kaa manna hai key aapno key pehachaan key liye naam kaffee hain dusroo ko hummara kaam sey mathlab issliye naheen bathaya."

Ol "Ladkaa bahuth accha hain kitnaa samskaari hain.Hum tho yeh bhee bhool gaye they kee who humarey ghar khaandan ka naheen hain.Humsey milney meeting yahaan shift karwaakar ayya hain."

Ishita was blushing listening praises on Raman.

Ol "Who loog chicken wicken kaathey hain hummarey khaana kaisey khayeega abhee."

Ishita "Aap chintaa math kariyen main Raman key liye kuch banaaloongi.Who humesha naheen khatey chicken wicken"

While both Ishita and Ol laughing Subbu's wife feels insoffocated and went away.

Ishita goes to room while Raman was trying to wear pattu pancha which he borrowed from Bala.

Ishita was laughing seeing Raman's trouble.In end she calls Vibhu to help Raman.

 

Then pooja starts and every one gather there.Mihika is angry with Mihir as he cut her call and kept a secret.(She is actually acting as she don't want to get loose over Mihir so easily.)

Raman comes there in traditional clothes all praise him .

After pooja finish everyone gathered around couple .

Raman "Kyaa huan sabh log jamma kyo huyen ek jagaha."

Ishita "Raman pooja key baadh jho unsey pehley ashirwaad lethey hain ussey acha mana jaatha hain.Isliye sab log koshish kar rahen hain."

In end Old man speaks ."Yahaan bahuth log hain .Humney decide kiyyan kee yeha aye huyen sab jodio mey jismey jyada bond hain ussey hum pehley ashirwaad dengey."

Old lady "Issliye humney aap sabh key liyen ek chunauti rakha hain.Jho usmey jeethe wohi Jodi hummarey ashirwaad leegi."

Oc "Hum issey COUPLE CHESS kahathey hain.Yeh normal chess hey hain lekin thoda alag rules."

OC"Yahan pathee patneey ek team mey hongey .har ek alternate may move karengey.Kisi ko bhee bath naheen karna hain ,Jho baath kerey who haar jayengey."

Oc forms different sets.

Mr and Mrs Iyer go first.They started playing.But when two different minds play  chess from one side it is a risk as both cannot think alike.

Both sides loose few pieces immediately .In end Mr Iyer end up speaking loosing the game.

Then Mihir and Mihika they play fairly well but they loose  unable to control Mihka's anger.

Bala and Vandu win their game .

Now Raman and Ishita have to face Subbu and his wife.Raman and Ishita were acting normal.They don't know whether they will win or not but they know they are not quitters.

Subbu was confident as he is champion in chess.But this game is couples game your coordination with your partner wins the game.

 

Game starts with Raman making the first move .Subbu then moves from his side.Ishita moves her next piece.

They continue for few more moves .Then Raman accidentally makes blunder exposing his rook.

Subbu smiles and kills it and Raman seriesly commit blunders.Ishita was surprised as Raman is doing such blunders she tried to rectify but he is doing it incidentally.

Ishita observes smile and overconfidence in Subbu and his wife .Then she understood Raman has set a trap for them.She also understood the trap and start coordinating with Raman.

In end while Sw's turn was on Subbu understood the trap but it was too late as his wife made the move and Raman moves his piece calling a check mate.

All people gathered there are shocked to see game of ISHRA as the game look like only a single person is playing as they are matching eachothers moves perfectly.

Old couple praises their pair for their coordination saying they are made for each other.While Subbu's mom and Subbu were jealous .

Ishra defeat all other opponents and take their first blessings.

(contd in page 5)

Edited by SAKIV-RAM - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
wow... seriously... this is getting better and better 👏
Posted: 9 years ago
Wow this chess thing is so innovative...ekdum IshRa ke level ka  😎

Good work 👍🏼
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by cool_aparna


Wow this chess thing is so innovative...ekdum IshRa ke level ka  😎

Good work 👍🏼
I actually created it for another personnal story.I just thought I can use it on ISHRA too. 

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