My dream track (26/35 part added)(ff - Page 5

Originally posted by: Elita

Well written and really entertaining...looking forward for the next episode of your dream track. 👏

Awesome update! Continue soon :)

 

Start with thunder

 

Scene starts in Iyer's house where Mihka is talking on phone and Mihir was standing beside her.

Mihika disconnects the call .

Mihika "Hummara plan kaam karliyaa.Driver ney gaadi lekar bahar aagaya.Abh ek huftey tak who donon wahe rahengey."

Oc "Bola thaa na plan kaam karegaa.Abh who log kissi ko phone nahen karsaktey  naa madad mang saktey.Koi ghar nahee hain ass pass mey."

Mihir "Aap sure hainaa who jagaha sute hooga iss late marriage honeymoon kay liye?"

Mihika "Mihir tum fikar math kar.Main bhee janthee hun uss farmhouse koo.Infact who tho akka ka favourite holyday spot tha.Humarey bachpan mey poorey family key saath waha jathey they."

Mihir "Mujhey abhee bhee darr lag raha hain."

Oc "Kyon,darney walley kyaa baath hain?"

Mihir "Aap Raman bhai ko naheen janthey.Who kuck karney key liye decide karlee tho karkey hee rahengey .Abh hum unko bejhthoo dee lekin who kuch nna kuch raastha nikalkar aabhee saktey hain."

Mihika "Han yeh baath bhee hain.Uskee saath Akka bhee jaisey he hain.Who donon hamesha namunkil ko munkil banaaney mey lagey rehtey hain."

Oc "Kaisey karengey,tumney  ussey jho phone diyya usmey balance naheen hain aur charging bhee khatam hoojayega.Who sirf phone receive karney mey kaam ayeega.Who bhee humney sirf Ruhi key liye kiyaa."

Mihir "Aap sure hainaa waha koi naheen jaayega."

Mihika "I am sure about it."

At last all of them sigh in relief as their plan of separating ISHRA from others got successful.

In farmhouse scene continues from where it ended.

Raman "Jaroor uss bawakoof Mihir ka plan hooga humey pass laney key liyen.Main nahen chodunha ussey ghar jaaney key baad."

Ishita still in shock that she has to spent whole week with Raman and Raman alone.

Ishita "Oy Murgan koi tho raastha dikhado iss Khadoos Ravan Kumar key saath Akeley."

Raman "Main bhee nahen rahana chahtha main abhee kisse ko phone karkey gaadi mangwaletha hun."

Raman tries to call but mobile has no balance it was given only to receive call from Ruhi and any one else  if they had courage to face Raman's wrath.

Raman gets a call from his own mobile .He picks it up.

Call is from Ruhi.Raman keeps it in speaker.

Ruhi "Papa aap pahunch gayye naa Mihir chachu ney boola kee aapkey holydays hain.Happy holydays."

Ishita "Beta aap Mihika chitti ko phone doo naa."

Ruhi "Mama usney kahan kee kisse ko phone nahi dena kyon kee aap log ussey dantengey naa."

Raman and Ishita  shocked as all ways are locked .Raman "Ruhi betha aap chachu ko boldeena kee hum waapas aney key baadh diwali achey manayengey.Bhoolna math."

Ruhi "Diwali key liye tho bahoot din hain aap jab thak naheen ayengey."

Raman "Humey kyaa patha hum kabh ayengey"lookin at Ishita "Diwali tho Mihir key liye jaldee ayegi."

Ruhi "Main boldoongi.Papa aap log ney khana khaalee ?Chitti ney mujhey khilaaya sab kuch southindian."

Raman "Aap ney khaana khalee na.Hum bhee khana khaalegey."

Ishita "Aapko acha laga ?"

Ruhi "Yummy,thaa .Mama bye main khelney jaa raheen hun."

Raman and Ishita  at same time "Good night beta." Whiole Ruhi giving good night kiss on phone.

Ishita "Hum kamsey kam Ruhi sey tho baath karsaktey hain.Baakey sab tho bekar mey gayya."

Raman "Bekar hogey hee naa.Abh mujhey tumharey saath rehnaa hain saath din thak who bhee Akeley."

Ishita "Pity.Aap shayad Sona ko expect karrahey hongey."

Raman "Tum phir sey Sona ko layee hon.Mainey uss din hee bola naa kee mera koi chakkar naheen hain.Tum phir sey uss ladkee ko pakad lee."

Ishita "Toh phir who aapsey itney closely kaisey baath kar raheen thee.Phir bhee aapko uss naam he kyo bolna tha.Sonali Kotnis.Aaap jaisey bala waisey hee thee."

Raman "Main kyaa karoo mainey jho kaha  wohi huaa tho .Main tho kissi aur key illustration batha raha thaa.Main kyaa karoo aisey kadkey aa gayi tho.Uska naam bhee same hua."

Same time it starts raining both Raman and Ishita goes inside the farm house taking luggage.

That house was little dusty as no one occupied it for months .So first job for Ishra is to select a room.

Ishita without waiting for Raman goes and selects room for herself and Raman was forced to selects some other room.Ishita then checks all the luggage .

Ishita "Yeh luggage picnic ka luggage jaisey naheen lagraha hain,Poorey ghar basaaney key saaman hain yahan."looking at Raman.

Raman looking at his mobile smiles as if he got some idea.He then looks at Ishita who was busy setting equipments to make food.He then keeps mobile back in pocket.

Ishita "Raman main khaana  banaraheen hum .Aap jaakar room clean keejiyegaa. Naheen tho humey uss  dusty room mey soona padega.

Raman tries to argue but goes from there.Raman cleans only his room and leaves Ishita's untouched.

Ishita serves dinner for Raman and after finishing Ishita notices that her room was not cleaned.

Ishita "Aapney sirf apnaa room clean kiyaa.Mera room ka kyaa.Aap naa selfish hain .I don't know main aapkey saath ek huftey.Oh murugan."

Raman "Selfish aur main.Aaj tumharee wajaha sey hum yaha fasgayen hain.Tumharey Uss periamma ney bheja hain humey yahaan."

Ishita "Aap unkey baarey mey math boliyen.Woh tho kuch acchey karney key sooch mey they.Unko kyaa patha kee Ravan Kumar kitnaa khadoos hain."

Ishita tells this and goes inside Raman's room locking the door from inside.Raman tries to open door for sometime but leave and go after few minutes.

Ishita who was preparing bed notices no sound coming from outside and gets worried .

She goes in search of him in farm housecalling his name.

Raman was sitting in terrace and looking at stars enjoying the star shudded sky after rain.

While Ishita was searchin for him she gets scared by complete silence in a corridor  and starts running from there  .She then dashes with Raman .Raman "Tum kyaa pagal ho gayee hon.Ghar mey aisey dhoud rahee hon koi tumhey peecha kar raha hain."

Ishita seing Raman becomes happy and hugs him hard.Raman was shocked over this act of Ishita and he tries to calm her down keeping his arms around her.

Beautiful..so they are trapped...Continue soon...

oh dear pls send u r thoughts to director and writer's also..atleast we can get this like episodes ...really good..

wow so soon u update 4th part thanks allot its interesting wanna read more ur story is going bettter n better with each part  whenever u update 5th part PM me

wow awesome part yaar so they are trap n ishita hug raman n he too wow so fast you did it thx again what raman got has an idea want to know 👍🏼👏 waiting for next soon 

Originally posted by: pretty_h

wow awesome part yaar so they are trap n ishita hug raman n he too wow so fast you did it thx again what raman got has an idea want to know 👍🏼👏 waiting for next soon 

Edited by vikaschandra - 9 years ago

Again Awesome Writing ... 😊

Originally posted by: Sweety_98

Again Awesome Writing ... 😊

Now I guess they are gonna share the room as only one room is cleaned 

And not forgetting the HUG ...It was Lovely as much as Natural ...

Beta ...Did u do PHD in Writing Os on ISHRA ?? 😆😉