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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: vikaschandra

guess is right but because Ishita is scared.
I havent done any PHd but I am writting my own created story.Ishra for now is for experiance.
COUPLE CHESS is my innovation for couple I created.But it also suits Ishra so I used it.


But Yeah ...It suits them Completely ...I felt like U wrote specially for them ...
Keeping Ishra in ur Mind ALone ...But Anyways ...Teri Imagination kamaal ki hai ...👏
And I loved ur Dialogue Session too ...😆
And as usual ...Ishu & Raman fought ...resulting in their presence in two diff rooms 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 3
hehe
hm
wow wo b forced
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Part 4
oh wow so hm starts
well this is going amazing
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow.wish this happens...u have have have to.continue now
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hehe, I love how Mihir is always scared of Raman when he does something like this and Raman ka warning to Mihir through Ruhi was funny. End scene was awesome with Ishita getting scared and hugging Raman, looking forward to see where that will lead to!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Your dreams are getting better and better by the day...wishing you sweet dreams always.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Bhooth bungalow

 

Scene starts with Mihir speaking on phone with someone.

Mihir "Main ney bola naa Raman bhai naheen aapayengey issliye saarey meetings main attend kar rahan hun.Agr aapko Raman bhai sey hee baath karnee hain tho aap ko wait karnaa hooga."

Mihir "Theek hain phir humatha meeting kal hooga."

Mihika comes there and sees Mihir speaking angrily on phone . Mihika "Kyaa huan tumharey chehrey par uss ajeeb expression kiska hain?"

Mihir "Ajeeb?Hum ney Raman Bhai aur bhabhi ko tho bhej dee abb main pactharahan hun."

Mihika "Aisey kyaa hoogaya?"

Mihir "Abh  mujhey saare meetings Raman bhai key jagaha attend karnaa padeega.Itney door main meeting key liye nahee aya .Main ney socha key hum apney puraney moments dubara repeat karengey.Abh dekho mujhey saarey meetings."

Mihika blushingly smiles and "Puraney moments?"

Mihir was about to say something same time Ruhi comes there.

Mihika stops Mihir as she saw Ruhi coming.

Mihika "Ruhi.Tum yahan kyaa kar rahee hon?"

Mihir "Tum ney papa sey baath key?Usney kuch kaha?"

Ruhi "Main ney abhee unhey phone kiyya baath bhee karley."

Ruhi "Mainey unhey batha diya kee aap ney kaha kee kisee ko phone math deena."

Mihir kept his face hung down and asks "Papa ney kyaa kaha?"

Ruhi "Usney kahan kee Ghar aney key baad Diwali achey manayengey''Iss bar mihir kay liye diwali jaldhi ayeegi'"

Mihika burst into laughing listening Raman's message through Ruhi.

Mihika "Advance happy Diwali.Mihir"

Mihir understood he is never gonna forget that diwali with Raman.

Ruhi "Chaachu diwali jaldhi kaisey ayeegi.woh tho festival hain naa?"

Mihika "Diwali nahey ayeegi aapkey papa laney waley hain .Huge dhamaakey Mihir chachu key liyen."

Same time Subbu knocks the door from outside.All three of them look towards door.Mihir tells him to come inside.

Subbu "Mujhey abhee phone ayya hain key.Raman meeting attend nahee kar rahe hain."

Mihika went back to super angry mode instantly after seeing Subbu.

Before Mihir gives reply Mihika starts.

Mihika "Tum agar apney kaam key baath kar rahey hon tho yeh yaad rakhna key .Who abh tumharey liye Raman sir hongey Raman nahee."

Mihir knows reason for Mihika's act.

Subbu "Raman sir meeting attend naheen kar rahey hain?"

Ruhi "Papa aur Mama holydays may hain issliye no meeting sheating."

Both Mihir and Mihika smile at Ruhi's cute reply.

Mihir "Han .Raman bhai bhabhi key saath bahaar gayen hain ek huftey key liyen .Issliye saarey meetings main attend kar raha hun Raman bhai key jagaha.Aapko Raman bhai sey kuch kaam hain."

Subbu "Kuch naheen.Boss ney poochney key liye bheja tha."

Mihika "Abh poochliya naa jawab bhee mil gaya.Abh humey hummara privacy dedon."

Subbu understood she is telling getout' indirectly.Ruhi also goes seeing Shravan from distance.

Ruhi "Chitti main jaa raheen hun khelney.Good night."

After Ruhi went Subbu was near door.

Mihir "Mihika .Tum utnaa gussa kyon ho."

Mihika "Uss admee ."

Mihir "Oh yaar.Unkey wajaha sey tho hee Raman bhai aur Bhabhi key shaadi huin tum abhhee bhee uspar blame kar raheen hon."

Mihika "It is only thing which happened crrect because of him.Usney shadi key liye mana kiya ussey main naraaz naheen hun.Lekin uss din Akka kee jho insult huin uskey liyen main kabhee maaf nahee karongi."

Subbu listens all this but he can't speak anything and goes away from that place.

 

In farm house scene starts with where it stopped.Ishita and Raman are hugging each other.I

Ishita realizes what she is doing and immeditly breaks the hug.Ramna also breaks it and gets back for enacting angry mode.

Raman "Aisey kyaa hogaya tum dhodkey aagayee jaisey koin bhoot dekha hain."

Ishita "Aap kahaa gaye they achaanak.Aap kuch bathaye bhinaa chaley gayen tho darr lagegi hee na."

Raman"Mujhey kuch nahee hooga."

Ishita "Maloom hain museebath ko kaunsi museebath ayegi.App iss farmhouse key liye nayen hain aap rastha kho gayen tho phir mijhey hee aapka galiyan sunney padegi.

Ishita "Yahan aur koi hain bhee naheen key aapko raasth bathaye."

Ishita and Raman starts walking back .Still Ishita has fear seeing that corridor but she tries to act as usual.

Raman notices this and starts his prank.

Raman "Iss bhoot bungalow mey tum pehley bhee aye the kyaan?"

Ishita "Yeh bhoot bungalow naheen hain.Hummara farm house hain. Main bachpan mey yahan summer holydays key liye athey they."

Raman "Summer holydays.Mujhey ek baath yad ayan.Tum bhooton par vishwas karthee hon?"

Ishita scared at word and enacting courage "Naheen tho .Kyaa aap vishwas karthey hain.?"

Raman "Main bhee nahee kartha lekin ek baar mujhey bhee shak huan kee sach mey bhoot hotey hain ya nahee.Uss experience ko tho main kabhee nahee bhoolunga."

Ishita scared completely correcting herself asks "Kyaa huan tha?"

Raman "Jab main chota tha papa ney sabko tour key liyen key gayen they.Waha sab kuch theek tha .Lekin tun janthee ho naa Romi koo kitna shaitan hain who kaheey ghumney chala gaya Akeley .Usko samhalney main bhee uskey peechey gaya tha."

Ishita "Phir kya huan ?"holding her own hands tightly.         

Raman "Phir hum rasth kho gaye .Aur hum kayee door phas gaye they hum rastha dhoondney kee koshish kee lekin humay naheen mila.Phir humey ek ladkaa dikhayee diya.Usney humey bathaya kee uss area mey bhoton ka darr jyaadha hain issliye koi naheen aatha.Who ladka uss par vishwas naheen kartha issliye saabhith karney key liyen akeyley ayya."

Ishita "Phir kyaa huan.??"

Raman "Ussney humey bahut kahaniya bathaya kee bhoton key baarey mey.Who humey rashta dikhaaya  aur hum waapas chalney lagey.Jab hum mudkey wahan dekha tho cheek ayeen aur who ladkaa naheen tha humney ussey dhoondney kee koshosh kee nahee mila.Romi darr gayaa tha aur bhagney laga aur main bhee."

Ishita "Phir kyaa huan?"

Raman "Jab hum subaha paper dekaha tho patha chala who ladkaa mar gaya tha.uss bhoot area mey."

Ishita scared .They reach rooms .

Raman "Theek hain main tumhaara room bhee saaf kardetha hun."and acts as if he is going.

Ishita stops him "Itney raath ko kyaa saaf karnaa.Hum iss kamarey mey hee sojayengey."

Raman "Tumharey saath."

Ishita "Aap bhool gayen kyan hum ghar mey bhee ek hee kamarey mey rahathey hain."

Raman "Theek hain tumhey kuch problem naheen tho mujhey bhee nahee."

They share same bed as there is no other arrangement in room .Both sleep in each end of bed.

Ishita scared remembering Raman telling about  that kids death.Raman acts as fallen asleep.

Ishita slowly turns toward him and holds his hand while sleeping and sleeps.

Raman opens his eyes and sees Ishita holding his hand ."Kitnaw darthey hain yeh pagal aurath."

He smiles seing her tensed face.Her hairs cover her face.Raman  removeshair covering her face and sleeps looking  her .

  Ishita wakes up at sleep by some sound outside and gets scared .She sees herself holding Raman's hand and feels relief.She looks at him smiling and sleeps "Kitnaa bhee daraley yeh mera saath hey rahengey."

 

Edited by vikaschandra - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Me first wow lovely she hold his hand when sleep he did not remove her hand wow n she is happy to see he is with her thx for doi.g it fast 👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awww...it was really sweet. 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Shoo cuteee !!
hahah Raman bhi na !! Ravan kumar hi rahega :P