My dream track (26/35 part added)(ff - Page 7

Posted: 9 years ago
Aww I m loving ths yar. ..its getting really interesting. .pls update soon ...w8ng 2 read wat al will happen in farm house. .good job. ..👏
Posted: 9 years ago
..very sweet...better than ongoing original ...track...
Posted: 9 years ago
Again Again Awesomely Written ...😊
What a lovely scene ...Ishu holding Raman's hand ..😆
They both on the same Bad ...that too without Ruhi😆
Abd now I guess that coz of some daraavna sounds ..she will hug him tightly 😆😉
Posted: 9 years ago
DAY 1 in Farm house(A)


 

Scene starts with sunrise and Ishita was sleeping more closer to Raman with her hands around him.Ishita gets up first and sees her hand around Raman and quickly takes it back."Ravan kumar ney dekha hotha tho yeh keh deetha key main mar rahi hun uskey pass aaney key liyen."

She getup from bed and goes out of room.Raman gets up and looks around for Ishita calling her name.

He was near that corridor  and he remembers Ishita getting scared near the corridor and wonders why.Ishita comes near him .

Ishita "Good morning.Paani peyengey."

Raman "coffee."

Ishita "Main sahee keh raheen hun.No coffee for one week."

Raman "Already mera sar fath rahan hain  tumharey wajaha sey.Abh coffee bhee nahi."

Ishita "Main kyaa karoo who log dood nahee rakhey."

Raman "Kya poorey haftey yahan rehney key plan mey hon.tho mubaarak main aaj janey wala hun."

Ishita "Raman iss ghar sey main road 50km door mey hain.Aap paidal janey key plan mey hain tho aap jaasaktey hain.Main aapko nahe rokhungi.Mujhey bhee chain mileega."

Raman "Main chal gaya tho tum kiskey haath pakadkey soogee darpok."

Ishita "Aap ney mujhey darpook kaha."

Raman "Main tumhey naheen uss aurath ko kehraha hun jisney darker mera haath pakadkar soo gayee the."

Ishita "Main nahee dar rahee the.Main bas isliye pakada kee aap bhag naa jaoo .Aapkey aadat hai naa.Har jagaha Akeley jaaney key liye."

Raman "Wha wha jhoot boolna bhee nahee aatha.Tumhey tho training kee jaroori hain."

Ishita "aap tho expert hain ismey.Kal aap ney kyaa jhoot bola Aap Shashti key liye nahi aye they meeting key liye aye they naa.Aapka meeting aaj he hain.Aap ney tho uska naam bhee nahin liyaa."

Raman then remembers about meeting and tries to call but no balance.

Raman "Uss Mihir ko tho?"

Ishita "Uss phone mey balance nahen hain aur aap aisey bar bar khoshish karengey tho charging bhee poora hojayegi aur Ruhi sey bhee bath nahee kar payengey."

Same time they get a call from some other mobile.

Raman takes the call.It is from Miss Kotnis.

Raman "Thank god tumney phone kee.humey jaldee koi gaadi bhejo main address bathataha hun."

Sonali "Sir, Mihir sir ney humey instruction diyy hain kee koi aapkey liye gaadi naheen bhejegaa .Sir main sirf issliye kiya hain kee Mihir siraaj ka meeting attend karrahe hainaur iss week saarey meetings bhee.Next week bhee apko yaheen rehna padega .Yeh head office sey instructions hain."

Ishita while Raman was still on call "Raman kaun hain koi gaadi bhej rahen hain."

Raman "Sonali aap kamsey kam kaam ka details message keejiye aur aap abhee merey no. par call keejiye aur meri beti ko phone karney key liye boliyen."

Ishita understood who was on otherside and her jealous mode got activated on the name itself.

Sonali "Yes sir,"

Raman disconnects the call and sees Ishita with her anger face.

Raman "Abh kyaa hogaya.Uss Mihir ney saarey staff ko batha diyan kee humey phone na kare aur koi madad."

Ishita "Phir Sonali kaisey phone kee."with stiff voice.

Raman "Mujhey kyaa pata.Main ney naheen bola ussey phone karney key liyen."

Ishita "phir usko appey itna intrest kyo hain."

Raman "Tumhara screw deela hain kyaa.Tum shak kar rahee ho mujhpar."

Ishita "Mujhey kyaa .Mera bas yeh kehna hain kee aap phone ka charging naa khatam kardey aapkey Sona sey baath karthey phir naa main Ruhi sey baath naheen karpaongi."

Raman "Whatever main abh jaarahan hun nahaaney.Kuch phone aye tho bathaa dena."

Raman goes to his room to bath.While Ishita prepares breakfast.After breakfast Raman again goes missing.He was roaming around farm house leaving Ishita alone.Ishita gets angry on his behavior but controls herself,She starts following Raman.

 

Both Ishita and Raman are roaming around farm house enjoying each others company but not telling to other.

Ishita was sharing her childhood stories related to the farmhouse and Raman was looking at her (I am not sure whether he is listening to her or lost in her).

It was around noon and then Ruhi calls them.

Ruhi "mama Papa aap theek hon.?"

Raman "Han main theek hun.Aap kya kar rahe hon?"

Ruhi "Papa main khel rahee they.Papa yaha jagada ho raha thaa."

Ishita and Raman gets worried "Kya huan kiskey beech.?"

Ruhi "Chitti aur Shravu key dadi key beech.Periamma ney mujhey aur Shravan ko room mey bejdee thee."

Raman "Aap Bala key ssath hee rehnaa aur kahee math jaana.Mihir ko bol denaa key mujhey message karey."

Raman gets a message from Sonali and Raman reads it .

Details are Mihir rejected the proposal of Subbu's company because of poor R&D .

Raman"Shayad issey wajaha sey jagadha hua hooga."

Ishita  and Raman walk around and they go near a small pond.Raman likes whether there and sits there.

Raman "Janthee hon Ishita jab Adi paidha huan thaa merey dimak mey ek swapna thaa key main bhee aisey ghar bana doo.Duniya sey door aur sab kuch merey ghar mey aur main Adi aur Shagun."Raman realizes what he told and composes himself.

Ishita was hurt a bit but Raman covered up "Lekin abh mujhey pata chal raha hain kee kitnaa gandha swapnaa thaa.Na koi ass pas "

Ishita then sees a call in Raman's mobile from Sonali's number she immediately reacts and takes call and starts bashing "Aapko samajh mey naheen athee kee jab kisi ney aapsey kaan kee disturb math karna mathlab aap unhey disturb naheen karnaa chahiye."

"Aap baar baar phone kar rahe hain.Jab patheee pathnee bahar gaye tho aap waha bhee business pakadkey bhaithey hain."

Raman knew Ishita's problem with name Sonali Kotnis and he is trying to calm her down.

But jolt is for Ishita as person other side is not Sonali.

It is Subbu on other side .

Subbu "Ishita I am sorry but mujhey Raman sir sey baath karney hain."

Ishita signs Raman that it is Subbu.Ishita continues saying "Raman tumsey baath naheen karnaa chahtey abh tum phone rakhdoo."She disconnects the call.Still anger on her face.

Raman "Kya hogaya tumhey .Koi manners naheen hain .Tum ney ek mouka gawadiyan bahar jaaney ka."

Ishita "Aap Subbu sey madad lengey.?"

Raman "Tho kyaa usmey kyaa problem hain?Main tumaharey tara nain hun kee andhar andhar jalthey rahe jaisey tum Shagun sey aur aaj Sonali Kotnis."

Ishita "Main nahee jallthee .Aapka dimak naa kuch jyaada sochrahan hain.Main kyo jaloongi."

Raman "Jhoot.Seriously tumhey training kee jaroori hain."

Ishita covers her face and starts walking back to farmhouse.Raman starts following her.

 

Here in office Subbu's boss fires on him as the project got rejected.

Subbu thinks Ishita did it intentionally to cause problems to him.

In house.

Mihir and Mihika were in room .

Mihir "Yaar such mey tum loog naa uss Subbu ko genious kehthey they."

Mihika "Kyaan huan uskee maa mujhpar chillarahee thee ke tumney jaan boochkar project reject kiyaa."

Mihir "Who project god .Raman bhai hothey tho uskey taraf dekthey bhee nahee.Sab kuch puraney techniques hain no R&D."

Mihir "Raman bhai ka speciality hee Risk  taking hain.Humney kabhee itney puraney methods use nahee kiya.Hamesha R&D mey strong rehtey hain."

Mihika "Tum bhee na jeeju ko uss Subbu sey comparison."

Mihir "Abh mujhey patha chal raha hain kee who ab tak manager kuon hain."

Mihika "Blind following ."

Mihir "Right ."

Out side Subbu was complaining to his mom about what happened in morning .

Sm thinks both Raman and Ishita insulted him incidentally that too using Mihir. 

Edited by vikaschandra - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
done reading all 6 parts...
story going very nice...   oh ho IshRa alone far from every one...  
nice story...liked it :)
Posted: 9 years ago
Just read the latest 2 updates and AWWHHH, It was so sweet the way Ishita held Raman's hand while sleeping cause she was scared of him and I'm so loving jealous Ishita !! This Subbu and his mom are so stupid, I just hope they dont create any problems with their nonsense drama.
Posted: 9 years ago
Nice story

Please continue soon...
Posted: 9 years ago
I am sorry I dissappointed you with my previous post(part 6).I myself din't like it as I was not able to do my best.I planned one thing and was not able to deliver it.
So I hope Ican rectify by part 7.thanking you.


 

 

Vintage car

 

Scene starts with Ishita and Raman coming to farm house and Raman saw some old car in a garage.

Raman stops Ishita by holding her hand and asks "Uss garage mey kyaan hain."

Ishita notices it "Yeh abh thak yahan hain."

Raman "Oh bandit queen mujhey bhee batao tho sahee."

Ishita "Yeh gaadi na humarey grandfather key thee.Unko bahuth shouk thaa puraani gadiyon meyissliye yeh khareeda tha .Jab hum chotey they tho hum issey car mey poora area ghoomthey they.Ek baar uski accident huin thab sey naheen chal rahaan hain."

Raman "Repair nahee karvaaya phir?"

Ishita "Raman ,aisaa naheen,daadu ney sabkey liye challenge diya bina mechanic key koi issey repair kiya tho uskoo who gaadi gift mileegi."

Raman "Uss ghatara gaadi gift.Wow"taunting her.

Ishita "Tum kabhee nahee samjhongey pooraney yaadon ka  keemat."

Raman "Theek hain.Kisee ney kiyaa."

Ishita "Sab log ney try kiyaa kisse sey nahee huaa papa,mamaji,Bala jeeju,Subbu kissey sey nahee huan .Tab sey yehi padi lagrahee hain."

Raman "kissey se bhee nahee."

Raman "Theek hain mujhey bhook lagee hain andhar chaltey hain."

Raman and Ishita start going inside but Raman's eyes were on car.(Ihink he is planning to propose Ishita with that car)

Inside Ishita "Raman tum naaraz hon?"

Raman "Han hun ."looking at Ishita "lekin ye yaad naheen hain key kiss baath key liyen."

Ishita starts laughing at this.Raman helps Ishita in cooking.Ishita and Raman quarrel over which item should be made.

Raman "Main nahee khaney wala tumhara madrasee khana aaj."

Ishita "Aaapko nahee khaana hain tho math khayiye main tho wohi banaraheen hun."

Raman thinks for some time and realizes there is no way he will get anything else to eat in that area except Ishita's hand made food.But we know where his first preference goes to  (his ego) so he left the place.

Raman "Main naheen khaney wala hun uss kichadee koo.Main bahaar jaa rahan hoo.Tum mera peecha mat  karnaa."

 

 

Here Mihir sees Subbu hurt and tries to step on his shoes.

Mihir "Subbu mujhey tumsey baath karnee hain."

Subbu hesitantly agrees.They leave outside while both Mihika and SW sees it.Mihika gets angry on Mihir as he is speaking to Subbu.But we can not expect unfairness from Mihir.

 

Mihir "I am sorry mujhey tumsey is tareh baath naheen karney chahiye thee."

Subbu "It is ok."

Mihir "Tumhaara project accha tha lekin ntumhey  tumhaari company sey achey support nahee milee."

Subbu "project acheh hain tho reject kyo kiyya."

Mihir "Subbu main Raman bhai key jagaha uss meeting attend kiyaa.Matlab merey uppar har jimmedary Raman bhai ka hain."

Subbu "Jaantha hun shaayad Raman ney kahaan hooga ."

Mihir "Raman bhai kabhee business aur personnal life ko naheen jhodthey hain sirf main donon mey connection hun.lekin personnal issues kabhee business mey nahe laatey."

Subbu "Thom era kyaa problem hain."

Mihir "Tumharey company R&D may invest naheen kar raha hain.Aur Raman bhai humesha usmey concentrate karthey hain."

Subbu "Main bhee interested thaa.Lekin iss company mey risk naheen lethey.Main doosrey company join bhee karloo lekin phir sey shuru karnaa hoga.Iss position key liyen."

Mihir "Position without personnal satisfaction is useless."

Subbu "tumhey kaisey pathaa chaleega ,tum tho Raman ka bhai hon who tumhey job deega."

Mihir "Who theek hain.Lekin tum janthey ho Raman bhai ney kaisey shuru kiyya."

Subbu "Matlab?"

Mihir"Raman bhai bhee chotey sey position sey shuru kiyya yeh sab kamaaney key liyen."

Subbu was silent .Mihir "Janthey hon tummy aur bhai mey kyaa farak hain .Bhai apney decision khud letey hain aur jab doosrey sahee hain tho who manleengey (Ishita ).Unka decision koi naheen taalengey kyo kee sab ko unpr bharosaa hain .Raman bhai ney paisey nahee iss salon mey uss BHAROSEY ko kamayaan hain.Jo unhey iss position mey khada kiyya."

Mihir "Main tumhey ek mauka deena chahtha hun.Tum chaho tho tum hummarey company mey join karsaktey hon."

Mihir tells this leaving a letter over car and giving a choice to subbu.Subbu was thinking.

Mihika sees this and gets angry at Mihir.

 In farm house Ishita was searching for Raman as he has gone for so long.She sees Raman near garage looking at car keenly .

Ishita thinks "Raman tho ghar jaaney key plan kar rahen hain.Woh merey saath Akeley naheen rahnaa chahthey."

Raman sees her coming and "Bandit queen tum yahan kyaa kar raheen hon,"

Ishita comes out of thoughts "Kuch naheen. aapney kuch naheen khaya tho ."

Raman points her to back seat of car .Raman has gathered mangoes from  farm .

Raman "Main who khaalonga."

Ishita feels disappointed but "Aapney abh thak khaaya nahee hain naa."

Raman "Mainney kahaan naa main uss kichadee nahee khaaonga."

Ishita "Mainey baanaya bhee naheen .Aap jho chahtey hain wohi bannaya mainey."

Raman was puzzled but says "Who utneey kurbaani deney kee kyaa jaroore they."

Ishita "Kisee ko tho deena padega.Aaap tho aisey kar bhee nahe sakthey isliyan mainey kiyya."

Raman "Theek hain .Hum inkaa kyaa karey."pointing at mangoes.

Then both Raman and Ishita decide to take them inside .While taking all mangoes fall down and they are picking .Both share and eyelock.But breaks it quickly.

In room they are eating lunch while Ishita was quite but Raman was eating in hurry as if he has some work.Ishita was smiling seeing Raman eating that quickly.

Both finish lunch Raman was going outside.

Ishita "Kahan jaa rahey hain?"

Raman "Uss pond key pass .Kuch time Akeley spend karney.Akeley."

Ishita understood he mean she shouls not follow him.

She waits inside house for some time and gets impatient (missing) as Raman din't come back.SH egos outside and notices Raman trying to repair the car,She sees him hiding behind the wall.

Posted: 9 years ago
Your dream is progressing really well... nice updates.

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