Drabble Series- Kuch Baatain Ankahi See!! [Chapter 3- Pg 6 (16/10/14)]

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Hi Dear Readers,
This is my first ever non-fan fiction work on IF. It is a fiction but it relates to a real life situation too.
It is a Drabble Series and will be updated after every two days but the future of this story depends on your response.
Every Chapter of this DS will have a different title.

Now enjoy reading -Kuch Baatain Ankahi See-

#Chapter 1- Deep into the Ocean of Memories

This Morning, I came rushing down the stairs, in a hurry as I was going to miss my school bus as usual. I quickly grabbed the cup of tea but it fell on the floor because of the wrong way I held it. "Damn" came out of my mouth.

"Budhu" I heard it from behind, I hurriedly turned around and saw my Mami (Aunty) spanking her 8 years old son. I let out a cold sigh seeing that it's not whom I thought it to be, or I should say I wanted it to be.

I left the spilled tea and broken cup on the floor and went out of the house without saying a good bye. That was just not me. I just never left the house without tightly hugging my mother and getting blessings from my father and going out of the house without even waving a bye was unusual in my case. 

I quietly sat in the bus looking out of the window. After some time I closed my eyes.

Ayla, Ayla, where are you? Look what I brought you..

A girl aged 11 came running towards the door by listening him, calling her.
Kia laen hain Bhai? 

Hmmm aik shart (condition) per milega.

Hehehe shart manzoor, bolain kia?

You won't share it with your fatty big sisters.

Hawww don't say like that about them.

What?? I'm saying the truth.

Huh, Whatever! Now give me what you brought.

He brought forward a full packet of Dairy Milk chocolates.

Oh my God, Oh my God, Oh my God. Bhai you are the best, I love you.

She instantly hugged him and he put his arms around her protectively. 

Chalo jao ab enjoy karo meri budhu behan.

She just pouted hearing that and ran away happily, holding the packet of dairy milk close to her heart. 
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Posted: 9 years ago

#Chapter 1- Deep into the Ocean of Memories- Page 1 (Scroll up)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice going
keep updating
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Lovely Concept !!! Do Continue Soon !
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ahem ahem
omg soha di
new  non fan fic
wow
gr8 to see u venturing ino something new and diferent
hm
i luve the poster ts autiful
and
cuming to the first chapppi
it was so awesome very different and interesting
gr8 going di wiagting for next update
do update soon
waiting eagerl
p.s lights camra action waai story ka kya hua
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Posted: 9 years ago
aswom start behana...

ur aswom i like d bhai bhean part...

i wish meri bhi bhean hoti...

keep updateing
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Posted: 9 years ago
Gr8 start
Loved the bro sis bond
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice
love the concept
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Amazing start
would love to read further
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice start soha👏
continue soonish😳