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Drabble Series- Kuch Baatain Ankahi See!! [Chapter 3- Pg 6 (16/10/14)] - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: -SunShine

Amazing start
would love to read further
continue soon
thanks for the PM


Thanks a lot dear. I will surely pm you in the future too.😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: aishu3003

nice start soha👏

continue soonish😳


Thank you Aishu Didi..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: -daya-

Hi Soha,

It's a nice start. 
Do continue, I look forward to following it :) 


Thank you so much dear. Your comment means a lot to me. 
I'm glad that you liked it. 
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: sun_flower60

nice one but bohut short tha...

well continue soon 😃


Thank you!!
It's Drabble naa so it's meant to be chota but I will try to increase the length of the updates. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: Kiarawinget16

nyc concept


Thanks..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: divya11bhatia

Sry fr repling late. Bt its nice. Do continue soon


Thank you😃... And it's totally okay!
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Posted: 9 years ago

#Chapter 2- Bizarre Past, Outlandish Present and Future?? 

I opened my eyes when the Bus came to a sudden halt. I realised that I have reached the train station and I had to get off there. My school was on 10 minutes walking distance from the station and I always loved walking.

It was a source of relief for me; the fresh morning air, the chirping birds, children of all ages rushing here and there to reach their schools. There was a little park in my school way with lush green grass, two swings and a small fountain. This place is always an interesting site, not only because of its beautiful setting but because it was a meeting place of all the young lovers in that area.

I always used to enjoy this fresh surrounding and the morning air but today there was something weird in the atmosphere. I had this abnormal feeling in my stomach. Something was not right, or maybe everything was not right. I tried to get rid of this feeling so I just sat in the park near the fountain to get relaxed but it didn't make any difference. Instead it increased that mysterious feeling inside me.

I was getting late for school but the least I bothered about it. I was never late for school but right now I needed to calm down or else I thought I would break down in front of everyone.

Soon it started raining. Rain, another thing I loved but I guess at that time everything was on a mission to make me feel vulnerable. I sat on the swing with my head leaned on the rope at one side.

"Damn it's raining, get inside Ayla and Vish".

"Aimy didi why don't you come outside too because we are so not coming inside"

"Ayla, I'm going to tell you Bua if you don't come inside"

"Ahaan, if she is not well why she is stopping us from having fun too"

"Hey just ignore her and bring the water ball outside"

"Oh yeah"

I got up from the swing suddenly remembering that horrific fall; the day I realised my idealism for Aimy didi. In the meantime my cell phone rang, it was Misha my school's best buddy. She was hell worried for me that where I was and whether I was okay or not.

I and Misha befriended two years ago. She is one year senior than me in school and also one year older than me in age. She is always there for me when the whole world seems to be so cruel.

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Posted: 9 years ago
fabb part soha😊
its interestingg😊
continue soonish⭐️⭐️
lovedd ittt😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
heloo my dear behana...

its an aswom updatee...

nd stry getting intresting...

plzz ye sab clear karo ki kya ho rha ha..

ye ladki ke sath kya hua ha ...

plzz update soon...

                        LOVE
                             UR BHAI
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update Soha...loved it!
its getting more and more interesting with every update
but y r ur updates so chotu...
Give little longer ones and update soon