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The Alter Ego - ||Chronicles Of ARI|| *Updated Pg. 34*

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Posted: 9 years ago

Okay, guys. Here's a little piece i have written. Don't know what to call it though. Is it a Drabble, i guess?

Please bear with it, if it sounds confusing or inconclusive.

 

Its after that infamous challenge, which Sanam has won finally. 

This piece is form Aahil's prespective.

 

Would be up with Sanam's perspective, if this turns out to be good.  😊

 

 

Aahil: In conversation with his alter ego.


I Own Her

 

He started walking towards his room. All hot and worked up after the inevitable. Well atleast he thought so!

 I own her . I know I own her. Doesn't  she know that?? Yes. Have told her too many  times. She might have got sick too hearing it over and over again!  How I Love reminding her that!  

Love? Since when?! 

Why doesn't she understand? Can't she just ask for forgiveness? Ughh..what does she think of herself? Miss Dhabevaali!  And  what stuff does she always do with those beautiful big black eyes. Always ready for a spell. 

Wait. Beautiful? Spell? A beautiful spell?!


That  pride and sparkle her eyes behold. Whats that in her eyes that is so endearing?

Ha! I have all of it, don't i?


Her eyes.

Ugghhh..again with the eyes?! Stop thinking about them, idiot!

 

Lets go further!

Huh. Pervert!

 How could i just lose a simple challenge to that Mohtarma Duffer! Ughhh..she is getting on my nerves way too much lately! She needs to stop that, like asap. Why is she so much proud of her cute little scrunched nose? 

Huh. Cute? Stop loosing it, man.

I need to get it together.

 

Okay, that thing she did. Held my hand and brought me to the pool side. That was kinda hot. I just gave it in? 

Idiot! Asshole! Hot?. Like seriously? She doesn't even know how to dress up?!

 

What does she wear? Salwar-kameez right? Such cheesy colthes. Can't she wear something simple, like skirt and stuff? She would look equally good in that too though.

Equally good?

 

She looked good in peach and red today. Kinda suits her.

Aahil!! What the eff is wrong with you?! Get over it, idiot!

 

And what is that thing about her obsession with that infamous "pudiney jki chutney" of hers? That sandwich. I remember that. I mean, who puts pudiney ki chutney on a sandwich huh?

Miss Dhabevaali. She is a fine cook though.

 

Those sevaiyyan. I wish i had some more of her..

Her?! Or the Sevaiyyaan!?

 

She is somewhat different from others. I admit. She has this thing in her. Not to give in so easily. I like that.

Huh. Like? You started liking your servant now! Lame!

 

She doesn't pretend what she isn't. Doesn;t mean i do. Does it? No. I am what  i am. I am a player who plays to win. Only. How come i lost it then? Mohtarma Duffer! I hate that bloody mouth of hers. Speaks so much of nonsense. Those delicate, delectable  lips..keep on lecturing over and over. How i want to shut them up. Seal them.

Delectable? You wanna eat them or what?! Huh.

Shut up!

 

Ughh..this girl! She needs to learn a thing or two now. 6 months babe.

Oh. Now she has become a babe huh? You really wanna push her off no? Desperate much eh?

She takes quite much of your precious time these days no?

 

No. She doesn't. It just that i need her off my back. Soon. Pretty soon. It would be over after that.

Would it? Really? So you'll stop thinking about her then?

 

Yep. For sure.

Ha! Jerk! Jerk you are! The Ameerzaada

 

Stop with that name calling. Its Aahll. Aahil Raza Ibrahim.

I like Ameerzaada more though.

 

Get over with it.

YOU get over with it.

 

Go away!!

See ya!

 

Miss Dhabevaali. Ughh.

 

 

Thats all fellas! Do tell me was it any good?! Should i continue with Sanam's perspective?

 

Thanks for reading!

 

Farz and Aaliya. Thank you sweethearts for that push. It was really sweet! Specially yours little tip, Farru!

I love you guys! 🤗


Index:


This one is on Sanam. The ONLY one:

Sanam's Alter Ego


Aahil's continued:

Miss "Angel" Dhabevaali

Why Can't She Understand?

She.Is.Mine.

How Can't You Remember Sanam?!

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Posted: 9 years ago
Res res res JESUS my keyboard isn't working I swear ill comment tomorrow morning love
EDIT***

i lost the battery holding thing of the keyboard, and its very small so i had to use a five cent piece instead to write that comment. its one of those apple keyboards.
thank f**k for year nine science.

oh my god oh my god this is adorable!!!
imagine if this was actually Aahil's way of thinking when Sanam is front of him.
that would be awesome.
MAN THIS WAS SO GOOD!!

it was light and fluffy and just- i need more.
you can make like a 'verse or something with little drabbles of both their povs and how they slowly fall in love and realise it and have a heart attack.

YES YES YES CONTINUE THIS ASAP I SWEAR I'LL COMMENT EVERYDAY AND I WONT FORGET.

ps.
you have sherlocks face. and his chest bit too.
did you draw it?
Edited by suds. - 9 years ago
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Res res res JESUS my keyboard isn't working I swear ill comment tomorrow morning love



😆Lol. Thats so cute! 😆
Its okay. I''ll be waiting for that dreaded comment. 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
omg...thts super duper fabulous...i.love the way he keeps thinking of her eyes lips...delectable lips...hmmm im.in sahil land d...u pinned it girl...each tm they have a junoon moment...tiz inner turmoil is seen n u hav juz caught itn narrated it fabulously...loving it ...do write soon...n more...im starved of sahil junoon moments 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Coz I want page 1..


Reading it nowww
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice one
Pls cont
Waiting for sanam perspective
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh my God Pragggyaaa!



This is so awesome yo!!!!!!


I love his alter egooo!!!


'I want more of her'


You write the way I'm pretty sure he thinks...and yes those eyes! Spelll!



Jadooo Teri nazar!


Tu haan Kar ya Na Kar...


Tu hai meri Ki- eh I mean Sanammm!




Yes yes yes yes YES!!!


I want a part on Sanam!!!


And and and...

Can we have one for after the slight takrar on Thursday's episode!? His conversation with his alter ego.


The one he said 'I don't like this nonsense..Be careful!'

And if you're thinking it...one after the microwave incident! And the office one. And the swimming pool one.


You can have a series!


Hayye!


Thanks Pragya!!!! You awesome!


This reminds me of my little piece on them...mine was nonsense this is so wow!


I love Mr Amirzaada's alter ego!


And I see what you did there...making him call her Miss Dhabevali!!


Mwahhh



I want moreee!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Cute little scrunched nose...!




Awww!



He notices it!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
And you mentioned my name!


Twice some more!!!!


Mwah mwahhh



This is so awesome Pragzzzyyy!!!!!!


*I'll find another name!*
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Posted: 9 years ago
I am LOVING the influx of SaHil OSs and drabbles and we have another great writer joining the wagon - you!  👏 I love how he subconsciously keep calling her al those things; beautiful, delectable, endearing.
Admiring her from afar are we Mr. Ahil ? No problem. I dont mind a few more words in her favour.
I loved reading this. You must write Sanam's part and definitely write more on SaHil!