The Alter Ego - ||Chronicles Of ARI|| *Updated Pg. 34* - Page 6

Originally posted by: neenabinu

loved what u wrote... its awesome...
hope to see u write more
aahil's POV came out superbly

Originally posted by: mahwash17

Oh god!! This was really great.. I could actually picture out the conversation he would have with his "Alter Ego".. 👍🏼

Great lines. KVB/Aahil Raza Ibrahim would totally think AND say these lines..

Well done!! I think you should keep writing more - No, I know for sure that you should write more.

I would love to read more of these small stories from you <3

Originally posted by: suds.

JESUS I AM NOT CUTE.

WHY DOES EVERYONE SAY THAT.

NONONONONONO.

ILY

Originally posted by: sanamslight

THIS is AWESOME!!!. I had to giggle over and again. He's such an ass, fighting with his inner devil, haha.🤣 But good for him, his wall is coming down on him.

Originally posted by: zzinia2411

omg awww!!! this is hilarious n supppeerrr cuuttteee!!! LOVE IT!👏😃 do write more on SaHil!

Originally posted by: chicksoup

Prags,

Beautifully written.👏

As I went through  this...I realised ...we all know the young Nawaab inside out😆...Many of those musings were what went through my mind also as I wrote my ff... 

Yes...Sanam's ponderings, please...😳 

Aahil is owned!😉😆

Hola everyone! I am back with Sanam's perspective.

I need to clear one thing though, i guess its not what actually Sanam's view would be. Coz i might not be able to capture essence exactly till now. I might not connect with her. So if it turns out to be stupid and funny. I am sorry!

 I have been able to connect only with ARI right now, completely.😳😆

Okay, here we go. The circumstances are the same as in Aahil's.

Sanam: In conversation with her Alter ego.

She started walking towards the kitchen. Proud and victorious. Nose held up high, as always! She hasn't bent down in front of Jallaad Jinn! What more could she ask for?!

 He owns me? Since when? What does he think of himself? Jallaad Jinn. Ughh. He needs to learn, throwing  few cents of money doesn't make him own me. Six months. It would be over then, for once and for all.

Oh. I thought it was over. This stuff between you and..

Allah Miyan!  Stuff? With that Jallaad Jinn?!  Oh. I would love to beat him once again!

You seem quite excited for this challenge with Jallaad Jinn no?

Oh yes. It would be so much fun seeing his innocent  defeated  face again!

Innocent?  Jallaad Jinn?  You mean..Innocent Jallaad Jinn?!  Weird!

Whatever!  Ughh.That stubble he has. Whats that with his stubble?! Jallaad jinn!!

Ah. Since when you have started thinking about your Jallaad Jinn's  looks?!

Allah Miyan! Pai gaya panga!  Mine? He couldn't be anyone's!  Forget about being mine.

So, you agree. You want him to be yours. Right.

Shut up! God! Those eyes! Always ready to murder someone. Pounce on somebody and kill him off on the spot.

Ah. So we are gonna  get started on his eyes now.

Why do i feel sometimes, he is not what he shows. Those eyes. Such deep intensity, they have. Along with that  vulnerability. That innocence, that pure soul, behind that masked Jallaad. That heart...

Woah, woah woah! Now your heartless Jallaad Jinn has grown a heart too?

What do i actually care? I need to pay his debt back. Thats it! Thats what i am here for. Ain't i?

 Umm..is it something else also?

No!  Ofcourse not! Ughh, Jallaad Jinn!  How proudly he says? - "i own you now, Miss Dhabevaali".

You seem to be growing  a liking towards this name eh? Miss Dhabevaali.

Shut up! What kinda name is this? I am not his Dhabevaali!

"His'? He owns you all right eh?

No! He doesn't! Never would!

Seems legit. Why? Coz' you wanna own him..someday?

No!! I would never be his!

Yeah. Coz he would be yours!

Ughh..go away!!

Huh. Mohtarma Duffer!

*poof*

Ughh. Jallaad Jinn!

And thats all! Hope you guys enjoyed it as much as i enjoyed writing it.😃

Thanks for reading!

Do give your valuable comments and criticism. I would love to hear it. 😳 

And also do tell me should i continue with a series or something?