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TORN APART
FROM DIVYA
Hey guys just got an inspiration from all the lovely and great writers of this forum am the little one compared so yea really hope you guys like the story and if u hate it I promise I will stop
Luv ya 😊
Chapter 1
It's been two years since that incident took place , I will never stop thinking about her , never stop loving her , never stop grieving for her I need her even if she doesn't need me.
The past two years I have been living in hell of regression , sorrow an dullness but I deserve all of this Because what I did is unforgivable.
I stare out of the window overlooking the city as if am some emperor overlooking his empire. I hear a knock on my door before I can answer it he kicks open the door .
Abdul : come on nah jalal we are late yar
Jalal: Abdul am not coming
Abdul: What come on it will be SOOO much fun think about it everyone will be there this is a grand reunion yar how can we miss it .
Jalal : can't you see I can't that place reminds me of what I did
My eyes shine with tears but am not going to let them come down because if do I know I won't stop
Abdul : look mujhi baat hai but how long are you going to do this for huh ( sadness in his voice)
There's a moment of dead silence between them both not looking at each other just staring at the floor then jalal spoke up
Jalal: your right I will come I will get the car ready
Just a as he was going. To wards the door Abdul turns around and rests his hand on his shoulder a sign of hey am proud of you for facing it . A slow smile crept on jalal's face. He turns around and hugs his faithful friend
Jalal: thanks
Abdul : for what
Jalal : for everything
They both smiled at what they share a strong bound of brotherhood they both head down from the penthouse to their grand hotel lobby and hops into jalal's m6 gran coupe (BMW car) and drive they laugh while they recall their memories then a girl's name hit him like bullet JODHA that name bought him happiness as well as regression the smile that was resting on jalal's face disappeared Abdul notices this
Jalal: Abdul kya main tumse ek question pooch sak thi ho
Abdul : of course Bhai
Jalal : do you think jodha will be there ??
Abdul smile instantly drops and-worry ness took over his emotions
Abdul : um I don't know jalal but possible chances are that she will be there
Jalal was scared he knows that he can't face her nor he can't can change the past they arrive at their old high school the school was beautiful and royal lime green grass and hedges the building's all have a golden touch it almost looks like a palace some of jalal's memories rests here peacefully or some memories stabs him in the heart. He sees a a group of people siting there eating , chatting just enjoying each other's presence he parked his car and headed towards the group they all call It their little family. As jalal and Abdul walked towards the group jalal walked very slowly Abdul could not take it anymore he basically ran to wards the group and all cheer then someone comes towards jalal.
Jalal who is completely lost in thoughts doesn't see him
Maan : jalal ma man kaise ho tum
Jalal: hey maan am fine yar tum kaise ho
Maan : so happy today we could all finally meet and jodha di is also coming back from Paris after so long
Jalal felt a sudden happiness he could not control himself
Jalal: kya really she is coming!!!!!! He was so happy he almost shouted
Maan : calm down yar tum mujza syatha Kush ho
Jalal : what calm down yar she finally coming back to me he stopped his sentence right there
Jalal soul talk :she is coming back to me Konsa me jalal remember u don't exist in her heart she's not coming back for you
Maan : jalal , jalal oh ho are u there
Jalal snapped out of his thoughts ,
Jalal: maan why are you shouting am right here yar
Maan : oh hello mister you weren't even listening to me for a second u stood like a a statue
Jalal: sorry yar anyways when is she coming
Maan : we'll actually she came ( pointing behind jalal shoulders )
Jalal turned around a white Mercedes arrived next to the great fountain and jodha comes out of the passager seat she was looking beautiful than ever her hair open touching to the waist she was wearing a a peacock coloured anarkali with emerald earrings. She looked like a princess coming out of her palaquin she was simply that gorgeous one glance you will not forget her for the rest if your life.
She wears her beautiful smile the one I haven't seen since that day . Moti and Salina comes over and hugged her she hugged them back with all love and care she closes her eyes.
Diamond stars , rosey lips I whispered
She hears my statement and open her eyes she sees me her eyes fills with rage , disgust and hatred
And all I do is stand still.
LUV YA ANIYA😛
INDEX
Chapters :
chapter 1 : pg 1
chapter 3 and 4 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4047035?pn=4
chapter 6 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/108957158
Chapter 7 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/109079286
Chapter 10: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/109395371
Chapter 11 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/109561509
Chapter 12 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/109615270
Chapter 16: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/111137628
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