The Rollercoaster of Love - Fan Fiction

Posted: 18 years ago

 

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 My story begins with how Angad humilates Kripa and they are seperated

Six months pass by

Angad packs up his bags and goes to the airport

Angad sits in  the plane and is sad and lost in his thoughts

After a couple of hours, his plane lands in Mumbai and he boards off

Angad looks around him and is saddened  to think about what had happend here

His eyes are fillled with tears and his face shows pain

His heart still pains to think about what he had done to Kripa

He remembers when Kripa had come to him and told him she was pregnant

Angad had insulted Kripa in front of the whole academy and revealed to everyone that she was an unmarried pregnant woman, had no character💔

and was trying to trap him in her plan to become famous

Angad closes his eyes in mock pain😭😭😭

Angad then remembers that whilst on his World Tour, Harshini had made an unexpected call, and had told every truth to him, the master plans to seperate Angad and Kripa, the baby etc.

Angad: batha nahi woh kaha hogi, kisse haal mai hogi, mujhe... mujhe maaf bhi kiya ya nahi, nahi maine Kripa ko bohoth dard diye hai aur mai Kripa ko poori izzat ke saath apnaonga

Angad goes to dadi's house first and is shocked to see a lock on it

Angad wonders why the house is locked

Angad then goes to Khanna house

Angad sees his mom

Angad: HI mom

Naina: arre beta, tum kab ayye mai tumhara hi intezaar karahi thi

Angad: mom, dadi kahan hai, unke ghar par lock kyu hai?

Naina avoids the topic: woh sab baad mai, humne yehi faisla kiya tha na

ki world tour ke baad tumhari sagaayi Mishti se kardi jayegi, so now is the time

Angad looks at his mom irratated: mom please!!!😡

Angad: Kripa??

Naina looks angrily at Angad: batha nahi

Angad walks out of the house

Angad: there is one person who will surely know where Kripa is

Angad drives off to Bose house

Angad enters Bose house

Angad yells: Prithvi

Prithvi comes down

Prithvi: oh tum, kya lene aaye ho yahan

Angad: Prithvi kahan hai woh

Prithvi looks at him suspiciously: kaun??

Angad in great pain: Kripa

Prithvi: kyu koi thakleef baaki thi usse dene keliye, tumne jo kiya wo kaafi nahi kya?

Angad is now begging Prithvi: please

Prithvi looks away sadly: mai kya bathao, mujhe kudh nahi batha ki woh kaha hai, laukhon ka kehna hai ki....

he hesitates

Angad looks at him worriedly: lokhon? laukh kya kethe hai

bathao Prithvi

Prithvi: laukhon ka yeh kehna hai ki Kripa is is is

DEAD

Angad's world comes tumbling down

his soul is broken into  tiny pieces

his life has no meaning left

Angad: nahi tum joot kehre ho, essa nahi hosaktha hai, meri Kripa... meri Kripa mujhe chodkar nahi jasakthi

Angad has tears rolling down his cheeks

Prithvi: looks at Angad and reazlies that Angad loves Kripa a lot

Prithvi tries to control him

Prithvi: kuch paka nahi hai lekhin abhi thak Kripa ki body nahi meeli hai

Angad trying to drown in this hope: umeed hai, umeed hai

Prithvi: lekhin Angad isse baath ko huwe che mahine  beeth chuke hai

koi bhi suraag nahi meela hai abhi thak

Luv

Soni

Edited by soni595 - 18 years ago
Posted: 18 years ago
please yaar, continue. i only live for the fan-fictions.
Posted: 18 years ago
awesome but DEAD.. man thast sad.. but i agree with happy on weekends its just fan fictions i am sure u wont kill her... she has to be alive....
Posted: 18 years ago
HEY I'M LOVIN IT ALREADY DONT STOP!! KEEP GOING!😳😳😳
Posted: 18 years ago

  Continuing....

Prithvi: agar thum jaho, tho hum usse jaghe par jasakthe hai, jaha par woh geeri thi

Angad: geeri thi??

Prithvi: haan, Kripa bridge par se geeri thi aur neeche pani tha aur kuch bhi nahi meela tha, phir bhi jasakthe hai agar thum chaho

Angad: chalo

Prithvi takes Angad to the bridge and Angad looks down into the water

and cries badly

Angad doesn't want to go from there

Prithvi forces him into the car and drives him home

Angad can't sleep the whole night, he tosses and turns and still can't sleep

Angad: gets up, mujhe ek boat hire karke, aur aas paas ke gao mai check karna jahiye, shayad, shayad meri zindagi mujhe miljaaye

Par, subha jaonga,

Angad then goes to sleep finally finding a solution, although he took lots of sleeping pills, he still sleeps a restless sleep

Angad goes off very early in the morning

He hires a steam boat and starts off on his mission

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Bose House

Prithvi is going out when

tum?

Tania walks in:haan mai, i'm sorry i'm late Prithvi

Prithvi softens cuz it's not in his nature to be short tempered: it's okay, chale

Tania looks at him and smiles: let's go

Khanna House

Naina looks angrily at Karthik,: Angad tumhe kuch batha  kar gaya hai kya?

Karthik: nahi mom, mai to kal usse meela hi nahi

Naina is very frustrated now: Yeh Angad kaha hai??

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Angad looks around and spots a small village from afar

Angad checks with the village people but no one knows of Kripa

Angad is going back to his steam boat with lost hope and lost life

Suddenly he spots someone, he turns and sees someone smoking a cigarette and lots of beer bottles are around the person

That's it for today

A suspense in the plot

Who is this person smoking and drinking?

I thought, why is Prithvi always left out (eventhough

A-k have to be together)

so i decided to make his role bigger, keep guessing it might be a love story or it might turn out unexpeted

as i'm always knwon to my friends to do the unexpected

Luv ya all

Sonia

Edited by soni595 - 18 years ago
Posted: 18 years ago
soni why u leave us in suspense. i am going nuts. please continue
Posted: 18 years ago

 

  Continuing...

Angad sees a girl shaggily dressed sitting on the ground, with many beer bottles around her and smoking a cigarette

Angad knows in his heart who it is, he can never forget her face, never

Angad runs towards Kripa and hugs her

Kripa is taken by shock with Angad hugging her and does not know how to react

Kripa pushes him back, and looks at him angrily: yeh kya natak hai

Angad full of pain is and holds her hand: Kripa mai jaantha hoon jo maine kiya woh maafi ke layak nahi hai par phirbhi mai maafi mangna jaatha hoon, please

Kripa lets go of her hand: kya bakwaas kehre ho, agar sharaab jahiye tho jakar kareedlo mere peeche kyu padhe ho,

Kripa mumbles, waise bhi mere paas zyada paise nahi hai

Angad looks at her astonished, Kripa yeh tum kya kehri ho, sharaab?

Angad then looks around and realization strikes him, that Kripa was drunk looking at empty beer bottles

Savni oh Savni

Angad hears a voice he turns around to see a very old woman staring down at him

Old lady: tum kaun? savni ke saath kya karahe ho?

Angad: Savni, nahi koi galath faymi hai apko, yeh savni nahi Kripa hai

Old lady makes a face: Kripa??

 haan Kripa che mahine pehle usse pahari bridge se geeri thi aur ab mujhe meeli hai, yeh kripa hai, Angad says happily

Now it dawns on the old lady: tho iska naam Kripa hai

beta, haan shayad yeh wahi hai, kyunki yeh usse bridge se geeri thi aur gaowaale ne usse bachaya tha

par bathkismati se..

Angad worried: baskismathi se kya??

Old lady: bathkismathi se uski yaadash chali gayi thi, aur uska atha na batha tha, tho woh yehi rehne laghi aur isse bechari ko bathanahi kahase sharaab ki rath lagayi aur cigarette thab se iska yehi haal haal

Angad looks at an unconscious Kripa, tearfully he pulls her in his arms and cries

Angad: yeh sab meri wajase huwa hai, na mai Kripa ko badnaam kartha aur na usse ithni badhi chot pohchthi aur na uska yeh haal hotha

Kripa ki haalath meri wajase essi huwi, tho mai isse sudharoonga

mai Kripa ko wapas waisi banaonga jaise woh pehle thi

saying this he carries Kripa into his arms

Angad: ji, yaha mera rehna ka intezaam hosakta hai, agar apko koi thakleef na ho tho

Old lady: nahi beta, koi thakleef nahi, balki mujhe khushi hai, ke isse ladki ko ithna pyar karne waala meela hai aur ussekeliye ithni fikar kartha hai aao

Angad dreams of him and Kripa dancing to song in the haze and has tears in his eyes

maine dil se kahaa -2, ai deevaane bataa
maine dil se kahaa, ai deevaane bataa
jab se koi milaa, tu hai khoyaa huaa
ye kahaani hai kyaa, hai ye kyaa silsilaa, ai deevaane bataa
maine dil se kahaa, ai deevaane bataa

dhadkanon mein chhupi, kaisi aavaaz hai
kaisaa ye geet hai kaisaa ye saaz hai
kaisi ye baat hai, kaisaa ye raaz hai, ai deevaane bataa

mere dil ne kahaa -2, jab se koi milaa
chaaNd taare fizaa, phool bhaNvre havaa
ye hasin vaadiyaaN, neelaa ye aasmaaN
sab hai jaise nayaa, mere dil ne kahaa

maine dil se kahaa, mujhko ye to bataa
jo hai tujhko milaa, usmein kyaa baat hai
kyaa hai jaadoogari, kaun hai vo pari, ai deevaane bataa

mere dil ne kahaa
naa vo koi pari, naa koi maahjabin
naa vo duniyaaN mein sabse hai zyaadaa hasin
seedhi saadhi si hai, bholi bhaali si hai
lekin usmein adaa ik niraali si hai
uske bin meraa jeenaa hi bekaar hai

maine dil se kahaa
baat itni si hai ki tujhe pyaar hai
mere dil ne kahaa mujhko iqaraar hai
haaN mujhe pyaar hai -4
SoniEdited by soni595 - 18 years ago
Posted: 18 years ago

Please continue dear!

;-D

- Abhita

Posted: 18 years ago
Thanks soni very much. Plz continue. I can't wait.
Posted: 18 years ago
evrything went well in your story until u made kripa dead
but do go on with it.its interesting 😊

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