*PREMONITIONS* SS part-6 pg 13 - Page 4

Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by luv_u_Bharti


Nice one Stavan πŸ˜‰

Starting was really cool... wid dat quick rewind of KD's 1st vision
Poor chap πŸ˜’
Kisha were cho cute...
Gr8 πŸ˜‰
Continue Soon 😊
thanks a lot
i am glad u like it..
yaa kd's life is sad and kisha cute as usual..
thanks ..
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by sweetdesire


Hey stavan
Love the update
Poor KD
Lost his parents in childhood only
Love RanSh bond
KiSha first meeting is cute
Want to read more
So do continue soon
Take care

Geet
thanks a lot
i am glad u like it ..
me too love ransh bond ..
kisha cute ..
thanks
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by Madhuras_Rule


Hey Stavan
AH-MAZING ,ya that was it
This is very interesting
and KiSha first was so cute
really want to read more plz try to update soon
waiting desperately

lots of love
Madhura
thanks a lot madhura
i am glad u like it
yaa more twist to come ..
i will update in sometime
thanks ..
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by priya1101


Hi Stavan.
Nice update,I loved it.
I felt so sad for Kd,even though he sensed the upcoming danger and tried his level best to stop them,but he was unsuccessful.
Ransh bond is cool and Kisha's first meeting was cute.
Continue soon.

thanks a lot priya
i am glad u like it ..
kisha and ransh my fav ..
i will cont soon
thanks ..
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by SweetAndSpice


Res😳
UnresπŸ˜ƒ
Loved it! β­οΈβ­οΈ
KD's parents die in a plane crash! 
It's like final destination!
The Kisha scene was cute πŸ˜³
Waiting to read more Kisha scenes! 
When will you update next? πŸ˜³
thanks a lot..
yaa its like fd only game of death ..
next part just kisha scene ...
i will update in sometime ..already written half chap..
thanks
Posted: 9 years ago
PART - 2
DEADLY VISIONS


Kisha reached seminar room .. Rv saw Kiya and went towards her ...
Rv: hey Kiya right .. Panchi's cousin she told me u were joining this clg only ..
Kiya: yup I so want that Panchi too joined us but ur gf got admission in her dream clg in paris .
Rv made a puppy face and said : yaa I miss her a lot ..
Kiya: aww mr. Lovestruck ...
Rv laughed and said : hey kiya meet him my bestfriend he is ..
Kiya: Kd .. Already met him .. 
Kd murmured : unfortunately ...
Kiya just said what while Rv chuckled ..
They settled on their seats after orientation got over Kd without saying anything rushed outside ... Kiya looked at him ...
She turned to face Rv and said : this Kd he is so weird I mean so reserved to himself ...can't believe he is your bestfriend ..
Rv: he is reserved ... But a true friend ...
Kd came back as he forgot his bag but Kiya didn't noticed and said : he is quite handsome , I mean really so handsome but way too rude ... U know he just said he isn't interested in talking to me .. Who says that on someone's face ?? 
Kd coughed and Kiya turned around .. She bit her tongue .. Kd took his bag and was about to go that's when Kiya said : hey Kd sorry I called u rude but u r rude no offence .. But see the nicer part I called u handsome too ...
Kd: listen call me handsome , call me rude whatever u want I don't care ..
Saying this he went away ...
Kiya : Rv saw that .. How mean ..
Rv: chill ax yaar come let's go to canteen ...

AFTER 5 MONTHS

Kiya became friends with Kd but Kd was as usual reserved and spoke less ... Both even fell for eachother ... Kiya even wondered as to why Kd behaves so strangely at times , she knew he lost his parents but still she thought there was something more ...it was Sunday she decided to go to Kd's house and surprise him ...

AT KD'S HOUSE 
She rang the door bell .. Mark opened it and welcome her ... 
Mark: oh Kiya .. It's always nice to see u .. Come sit here .. I will call sir ..
Kiya: chill mark I will go to his room and will wake my sleeping beauty ..
Mark : but Kiya u know sir don't like if anyone enters his room .. U know ...
Kiya: but today I will see wat is in that mystery room .. It's not that he is hiding some magic wand or something ..
Kiya laughed and headed towards Kd's room .. She entered his room and saw him sleeping .. Kiya was about to wake him up when her eyes fell on his study table .. She went there and was shocked to see these newspaper cuttings and books on premonitions ... She was even more shocked to see antidepressant pills .. Kiya was looking at newspaper cuttings with narrowed eyes .. Kd woke up and saw Kiya...
Kd: Kiya wat r doing here ???
Kiya: Kd these newspaper cuttings and these pills .. Why u take this??
Kd shouted : how dare u enter my room like that ? It's my personal thing so just stay away ...
Kiya: Kd u can share anything u want .. I'm there with u , u know that right ...
She went towards Kd .. Kd got up and said: get out I don't want anyone ...
Kiya: Kd listen u can talk to me ...
Kd held her waist and pulled her closer .. He looked at her angrily and said : can't u get this simple thing I want to be alone .. 
Kiya said softly : Kd u okay ...
Kd left her and shouted : I don't want u ... Stay away from me ...
Kiya's eyes became moist and a tear fell from her eye she said : sorry ...
She was about to go when Kd caught her hand and mde her sit on his bed ...
He cupped her face and said : sorry Kiya .. But I am a messed up guy .. I am a curse and I don't want to destroy u ...U r way too innocent for me .. 
Kiya: I love u ..
Kd : Kiya I can't ... U don't know the truth ... And u won't even believe it if I tell u ..
Kiya: try me ...
Kd told Kiya everything from his parents death to his premonition and also abt those newspaper article ...
Kd: that's my truth ... I know u won't believe me .. I don't even expect ...
Kiya: I believe u ... Yaa 
Kd hugged Kiya and said : thanks a lot ..
Kiya broke hug and said with a pouted face : wat ?? Thank u just thank u .. I mean hello I just proposed u few moments back .. I know u r shy and all so I don't expect I love u from u just say yes or no or just no u r head in yes or no atleast ...
As she was about to say something Kd pulled her closer and kissed her with all his love and passion ... They kissed for long time and pulled away .. Kiya was blushing ...
Kd: I love u too ... 
Kiya: umm u get ready .. We will go out to watch movie ...
She was about to stand up that's when Kd held her hand and trapped her between his arms and said: hey Kiya wat about spending some quality time alone here only .. 
Kiya : never thaught will see this side of yours ...
Kd smiled and kissed her cheeks ... 
Kiya: okay ...
Kd: wait I'll just come in 20 minutes ...
Kiya nodded .. Kd got ready and came out ... Both spent whole day just cuddling in eachother's arms ... Kd shared his every insecurity with Kiya .. They had dinner and Kiya was about to leave .. She came back to Kd gave a peck on his lips and said : I love u ...
Kd smiled and nodded ...
Kiya: Kd won't u say something like .. Kiya plz don't leave , I'll miss u .. Or just stay for some more time Kiya ..
Kd: Kiya it's already 10:30 .. Why would I say that ?? U should go home ri8 .. And miss we r gonna meet tomorrow so..
Kiya said with irritated tone: okay just leave it .. 
Kd cupped her face and kissed her forehead and said : I love u more than anything .. And this is the only thing I know ... 
They passed good nights to eachother and Kiya left ...
Mark: sir I'm so happy for u ..
Kd: thanks mark ... 
Kd went to sleep .. After few moments he again saw some thing and he woke up all sweating and fear evident on his face... 
Kd(thaught): this can't be happening ... Shit .. I can't let this happen ...

Precap: deadly game begins ... 

Here is part 2 ..I know it's crap result of boring SundaysπŸ˜†
Edited by Prince6495 - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Res.πŸ˜ƒ
Unres.
First of all,i would like to say that this is really interesting,don't say it crap.
Nice update Stavan.πŸ‘
Ranveer making a Puppy face,shooo cute.
My jaan Rv is missing Panchi.Even I am missing my RaHi badly.I want to see the entire cast in a new show.😭
Right from the seminar room Convo to the ending,everything was Perfect.πŸ‘πŸΌ
The part where Kiya goes to kd's house(everything from there)was totally Kishalicious.Loved it.
Yayyy...Kisha confessed their love for each other.
OMG...Kd woke up from sleep all sweating and frightened.
Ab usse kya dikha,Kahi Kiya se related kuch dikha kya???
Continue soon.
I will be eagerly waiting for the next part.



Edited by priya1101 - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Unresed on pg 8πŸ˜ƒ
Loved it! β­οΈ
Edited by SweetAndSpice - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry bro i was inactive from forum because of personal problem,but now i am back i love it broπŸ‘πŸΌ both parts are awesome again you call it boring don't say this word again its order from ur sister.
Posted: 9 years ago
Dont tell me you bozo I go for 1 and a half day and u write a ss and two chaps
Tell me you are not a secret power of time lol
Mannn I love this story like
Wonder what kd saw
Btw you

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