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Posted: 9 years ago
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Di ap sathiya kab update kro ge

May be today..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: EashaYousufzai


May be today..

                                       
K di update soon am waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
new stry!!!!!!! yipieee!!!!!!!!!!!!    
prologue ws outstndng.. d stry seems really vry intrstng.. jst cn't wait 2 read d nxt chptr.. chhota arjun nd sameer wre damn cute 
do cntinue soon.. nd thnx 4 d pm

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Posted: 9 years ago
eee...
awesome

and wonderful concept!

plz con soon dr!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice Start

Different Concept

Continue Soon
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CHAPTER 1:

 

ETF Office, 2014, 10:40 PM-

 

Arjun was busy in files. They solved a very important case today. He was very happy with his team's effort. They did a very good job. After finishing paper work they left. Only Sameer stayed behind. Sameer and Arjun live in Arjun's flat. Sameer had a flat but Sameer preferred to stay with his best buddy. Arjun was about to open another file when Sameer entered in his cabin.

Sameer: Kya Arjun. Aab file chod aur ghar chal.

Arjun: Nehi Sameer. Bas yeh kuch files khatam karne hai. Phir chalte hai.

Sameer went near him and snatched the file from his hand.

Sameer: Uth. Ghar chal. Baki ka kaam kaal kar lena.

Arjun sighed but got up.

Arjun: Sam main batana bhool gya. Aaj team ne bohot accha kaam kya hai. Soch raha tha kaal half day ke baad chutti de dunga.

Sameer: To acchi baat hai.

Arjun: Tu call karke sabko bata de.

Sameer: Oye main kiyu batau? Chutti tu de raha hai to tu hi batana?

Arjun: Samjha kar yaar. Mera reputation kharab ho jyega. Arju Rawte aur chutti kabhi nehi.

Sameer: Tu kiyu aisa karta hai Arjun?

Arjun: Arre team mein koi to rehna chahye jisse dekhkar sab dare.

Sameer: Dekhna Arjun. Ekdin iss team mein ek aisa member ayega jo tujhse nehi balki tu ulta usse darega.

Arjun smiled a cocky smile.

Arjun: Main bhi woh din jaror dekhna chahunga.

**[Unknown to them upar baithke Bhagwan ji bhi haas rahe the]**

Bhagwan ji: Beta Arjun. Tujhe bohot shoukh haina? To thik hai. Main tujhe woh din bohot jald dikhavunga. Phir mere paas rote hue maat ana.

 

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A girl aged 25 sitting in her reading table. She had beautiful flawless strawberry white skin and long shinny black hair. Her big doe like eyes were full of worry. Her perfect red lips were pressed in thin line. She had an envelope in front of her. She was in deep think. She was wearing a sun yellow nightdress. She had a glass full of milk in hand. But right now her mind is not in the glass. She was feeling very restless as if something is going to be happening. Now only one person can help her. She kept the glass aside and picked up her phone. She dialed a number. Person in the other side picked up the call.

**[Bhagwan ji started eavesdropping in their private talk too. His mouth was itching for passing comments too]**

Person: Hello.

Girl: Hello papa?

Papa: Sakshi beta!! Tu itni raat ko. Soyi kiyu nehi abhitak?

Sakshi: Nehi papa. Papa aap kaab wapas ayenge?

Mr. Anand: Beta baas yaha ka kaam khatam ho jye phir aa javunga. Tujhe to pata hi hai ki yeh German wali project mere lye kitna important hai.

Sakshi sighed.

Sakshi: Haan papa. Pata hai. Pure ek week ho gye aapko gye hue. Mujhe aur accha nehi lagta. Itne bade gharme mera daam ghutta hai.

Mr. Anand: Tu ek kaam kiyu nehi karta? Tu apni mom ke paas chali ja. Tera man behel jyega.

**[Bhagwan ji se aur raha nehi gya]**

Bhagwan ji: Aur koi nehi mila. Maa ke paas bhejna chata hai.

Sakshi: She hates me papa.

Mr. Anand: Aisa bilkul bhi nehi hai beta. She loves you.

Sakshi: Then why she left us? Why she left me when I needed her most?

Mr. Anand: Beta woh baas..

Sakshi: Baas papa. Unke tarafse bahana dena bandh kijye. Mujhe aapko kuch batana hai.

Bhagwan ji: Haan. Bakwas chod aur kaam ki baatein sunn.

Mr. Anand: Ha beta bol.

Sakshi: Papa mujhe ETF mein job mila hai. Home Minister sahib ka call aya tha. Papa woh chahte hai ki main Mumbai ETF join karu. And it's a direct order.

Mr. Anand: Tera dil kya kehta hai?

Sakshi: Pata nehi papa.

Bhagwan ji: Pata nehi ka kya matlab? Yeh main jo tere dil mein bole ja raha hoom woh kuch bhi nehi?

Mr. Anand: Pata nehi papa. Yeh bhi koi baat hui? Maine tujhe kya sikhaya hai? Dilke paas har sawal ka jawab hota hai.

Bhagwan ji: Bilkul sahi kaha.

Sakshi: But papa yeh dil hi aaj bechain hai. Pata nehi kiyu aisa lag raha hai ki kuch hone wala hai.

Mr. Anand: Beta agar tera dil kehta hai ki kuch hone wala hai to kuch na kuch jaror hone wala hai. Par beta iss darse haam jeena to nehi chod sakte na!

Sakshi: Phir?

Mr. Anand: Teri joining kaabse hai?

Sakshi: Kaalse.

Mr. Anand: Tu joi karle. Beta jo bhi hota hai bhale ke lye hi hote hai. Tu tension maat kar. Okay?

Sakshi: Okay papa.

Mr. Anand: Aab nakhre bandh kar aur dudh ka glass khali kar.

Sakshi: Papa aapko kaise pata chala?

Papa: Baap koun hai? Tu ya main? Mujhe nehi pata hoga to kya Mr. Sharma ko pata hoga?

Bhagwan ji: Tujhe shaq tha?

Sakshi giggled.

Mr. Anand: Accha sun main aab phone rakhta hoom. Baad mein call karunga. Tu dudh peeke so ja. And no cheating.

Bhagwan ji: Tu phikar maat kar. Main cheating karne do tab na!!

Skashi: Okay papa. Bye.

Mr. Anand: Bye.

 Sakshi cut the call. She held her breath and finished the full glass in one go.

Sakshi: Yaak. Yeh koi peene ki cheez hai kya?

Bhagwan ji: Peele beta. Tujhe shakti milegi. Aur phir kalse tujhe uss Akdu se bhi niptna hai. Tujhe bohot shakti ki jarorat padegi.

Sakshi: Chalo khatam hua. Aab so jati hoom. Phir kaal subah subah uthke ETF office bhi jana hai.

Sakshi went to bed and hugged her pillow tightly. She was very restless. But she forced herself to be calm and waited for sleep to take over.

 

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Arjun was tossing in his sleep. He was seeing the same dream again. From the very childhood he always sees the same dream. But today is little different. Today he is feeling restless too. His dreams always start in jungle. He is holding the hand of a girl. Her face is not visible. Together they run. He doesn't know why but he feel peace while holding her soft hand. But not today. Something is different in this dream. He can feel it. He can feel the danger behind them. And for the first time he can feel fear and desperateness.

Arjun woke up with a jolt. He checked the clock. It was half past two. He drank  water and went to living room. He won't be able to sleep anymore. He opened the tv and started surfing. After sometime Sameer came out of his room.

Sameer: Kya baat hai Arjun? Tu itni raat ko yaha? Neend nehi araha kya?

Arjun: Nehi. Pata nehi Sam bohot bachaini feel ho raha hai.

Sameer went to his buddy and sat beside him.

Sameer: Ek kaam kar. Tu shadi karle. Waise bhi tere shadi ka umar bhi ho chuka hai.

Arjun: Itna hi shauq hai to tu khudhi shadi kar lena! Aur maine tujhse pehle bhi kaha hai ki agar main shadi karunga to ussi sitare se karunga. Warna nehi.

Sameer: Kya Arjun? Kaunsi bachpan mein tune keh dya tha abhi taak ussi baat ko lekar baitha hai.

Arjun got up from the sofa and went near the window.

Arjun: Sam woh roz mere sapno mein ati hai. Har roz. Aur dadisa ne bhi kaha tha ki woh khud chalkar hamare paas ayegi. I am waiting Sam. I know she will come to me. I am waiting.

 

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Edited by EashaYousufzai - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
YAY!!!!!!!!!!
Me first
Awesome update
Loved it
amazing
waiting for the next part
continue soon
Edited by skrafty - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow awsm start 
very nicely written 
loved it 
sounds like its going to be an interesting story 
continue soon 
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Posted: 9 years ago
reserved :)/ unres
Cool so they have grown up :)

Waah, loved the mv of Bhagwan ji!

Too good!

Arjun is waiting😉 This was epic!

Chalo... am waiting to see their meet now!
Edited by Armagadon - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
awsum acp saab bach ke rehna