Hi all
Back again with an ff,I got more support for my previous one..In that confidence I am writing a second one..😊
Rabir FF-"Why us"
Precap:
Character sketch
Kabir:26 year old.stylish business man.. He hated every single women except his Dadi
Rajiv:24 year old,Rachna's college senior..He is so fun loving n loved Rachna for her simplicity and kindness.
Rachna:23 year old,simple, beautiful,soft women who believes life and death happens once similarly love too will happen only once in life.In her college life She fell in love with Rajiv .
Rachna's parents first were against their love but knowing Rajiv's character and his family They accepted their marriage.They both were so happy that everything was going well.
Dayal and Shayl (Rachna's Parents)
Dayal:Shayal I cant believe our little Rachna has grown up so big n today she is getting married
Shayl:Ya,I am too happy that she marrying whom she liked
Dolu(Rachna's bro):Where is Rajiv uncle?? I cant find him from morning now Pandit ji is calling
Shayl:Dolu did you see searched everywhere
Dolu:Ya mummy I searched him whole of hall..I cant see him anywhere
Dolu shouted it and whole of people heard it..They started to whisper that Rajiv left the marriage since he didnt like Rachna
Dayal:Shayl..I will search him
They tried his number it was switched off.News reached Rachna's ears but she didnt believe it..She had full confidence in her love..She could do nothing but try her number
Dolu:Rachna di,I saw Rajiv leaving hall in early morning
Shaya:Dolu what are you talking..Why you didnt say us at that time
Dolu:I thought he will come back..am sorry di
Rachna cried heavily huging her mom n shayl consoled her
Dayal:What is happening here..Outside all are talking bad about my daughter..I cant hear this anymore this is why I am always against love marriage
Rachna: Paapa pls Rajiv really loves me
Dayal:You shut up Rachna..We heard you untill this now you listen to us
Rachna was shocked seeing his dad's rudeness to her.
Dadi(Rachna's neighbour):Dayal..Why do you yell at Rachna now..She is cheated
Rachna:No Rajiv cant cheat me..He loves me
Dayal:Rachna stop it..bcoz of you all people are talking bad about our family..You brought bad name to us
Dadi:Dayal dont worry..Nothing has happened now..hmm if its ok for you all..I will ask my grandson Kabir to marry your daughter.I always wished for that
All were shocked except Dayal who thanked Dadi with teary eyes.
Shayal:But Rachna
Dayal:You both dont talk anymore..Make Rachna ready
Rachna:Paapa pls
Dadi:Rachna,You will like Kabir.Yuo both know each from childhood la
Rachna:Why noone understanding me,I love Rajiv
Shayal:I cant help you Rachna..you must hear your Paapas words
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Kabir:What?? my marriage??with Rachna?? What wrong with you dadi
Dadi:You have any plans to get married or not
Kabir:You know I hate women
Dadi:Kabir..wont you do this for me..Its your dadis last wish
Kabir:Ask me anything but not marriage that too Rachna is not my type
Dadi:If you didnt accept for this marriage..then you cant see your dadi alive
Kabir:Dadi dont tlk like that again..hmm ok do as you wish
Dadi hugged Kabir happily but Kabir was more nervous
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Kabir got blessings from dadi,Shayl and Dayal and sat before the fire.Rachna with teary eyed walked towards the madap.Dayal and dadi were so happy..Shayal kissed Rachna's forehead and hugged her
Shayl:Eveything happens for a reason Rachna..You will be happy see
Rachna said to herself" I am doing it only for your happiness ma,I cant forget Rajiv"
Dayal:Shayal its getting late
Shayl took Rachna towards the mandap and made her sit next to Kabir..Both didnt see each other they hesitated to see and sat a bit away from each other
Rituals started.And they both did all rituals.When Kabir was about to place sindoor on her forehead,Kabir first time saw Rachna's eyes so close.He felt Rachna is still crying for her love
He placed sindoor and while he took back his eyes again met hers and she too met his now..Both of them stared at each
Rachna's thought:"Why us"
Kabir's thought:"Why us"
He finally put the chain on her neck
Rachna's parents and Dadi blessed them
Hope you like it..n pls feel free to share if anyone is against the story line or need a change
CHAPTER:1--PG-3
CHAPTER-2--PG-5
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4055834&TPN=5
CHAPTER:3--PG-7
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4055834&TPN=7
Edited by saravathi - 9 years ago
