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Posted: 9 years ago
wowww...
superb ending dear...
thnxxx 4 penning down such an intense n amazinggg story..
hope that u will continue writing with another brilliant story on arshi...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
I dnt knw wat to say! Am crying! U r fabulous! What a story! Thank u so mch!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Finally managed to catch up with the story ...
The story of Lavanya and her sister was so very tragic ...
but not unheard of even today ...
Kokila herself a victim managed to pull herself up and
dedicated the rest of her life to girls in the same predicament
as she and Lavanya had been in ... offering them a protective ...
safe haven ... so she thought till tragedy struck with Payal ...
Am glad that true to his word Arnav was man enough to stand
by his decision to marry Khushi and spend the rest of his life
with her ...

Thanks Manreet ... great story ... beautifully written and the visuals
were really good ...


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Posted: 9 years ago
A spectacular ending to a spectacular story!
im bowled by your writing I know ive said this many times but you my dear are sucha gifted writer and I consider myself fortunate to have gotten a chance to read this story :D
sorry fr commenting late hv been busy!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Heartwrenching story... And you have given it a complete justice... I just love your writing and I m fortunate to come across your wonderful work...

Every girl at the kotha as her own painful story... No girl deserves to be in that place but life is so cruel for someone... Khushi found her Arnav, her savior but everyone is not that lucky... 😭...

Loved the concept... Completely different and so real... Absolutely loved it..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Manreet. After a long while managed to read one of your stories - and what a story! Absolutely fabulous. Each woman had a heart-wrenching story of her own. If only, no woman had to face what your characters had to. If only they would find a loving protector like Kokila. If only they could find a happiness like Khushi ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
very nice proluge and also read the chapter
they are mindblowing
would really like to follow ur work
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice ending
wounderfull
so arnav left to england and what about his parents?
payal died
that was so sad
we people are weak ----for payal was death only the escape
and she found it