OS-"on the beach" - Page 2

Hey Kirti...
long time no c..
this was so pure n emotional...
wonderful story...and these kind of story always makes me think too.mich but i totally enjoyed it...
the way they meet was so wonderful amd beautifully picturized that i cud actually imagine it..n of cpurse i imagined it on rahi...
bas i dint want to imagine the tragic end but then u wrote it so beautifully..
In short an amazing piece of work which i loved completely..
do write more..Edited by anjali1805 - 9 years ago

😭 😭 😭 😭

M feeling really angry on u Kirti 😭 Well... I imagined it on Kisha 😭 & I would never want 2 see Kisha lyk dis 😭

Really a Gr8 job 👏 👍🏼

hey Kirti, awsm os,it was little emotional😳

Originally posted by: sweetdesire

Hey Kirti dear

That was so beautifully written

Me simply loved it

You described everything so perfectly

So emotional

Love the flashback moments

Do write more

Geet

hai geet😊

Originally posted by: anjali1805

Hey Kirti...
long time no c..
this was so pure n emotional...
wonderful story...and these kind of story always makes me think too.mich but i totally enjoyed it...
the way they meet was so wonderful amd beautifully picturized that i cud actually imagine it..n of cpurse i imagined it on rahi...
bas i dint want to imagine the tragic end but then u wrote it so beautifully..
In short an amazing piece of work which i loved completely..
do write more..

hai anji..

Originally posted by: luv_u_Bharti

😭 😭 😭 😭

M feeling really angry on u Kirti 😭 Well... I imagined it on Kisha 😭 & I would never want 2 see Kisha lyk dis 😭

Really a Gr8 job 👏 👍🏼

Continue Writing more 😃

 

 

 

PS. Bt nt on Kisha's separation... 😉

hi khushi

Originally posted by: KDlover

hey Kirti, awsm os,it was little emotional😳

i imagined it on ofc KiSha😉

do write more yaar,it's vry beautiful!!!

hey naina

Kriti this was too good 😃

Originally posted by: krazy4KD

Kriti this was too good 😃

Emotional one.. I love this tara tari on beach 😆😆

But ek idea dun plzz is ka 2nd pt likho na jahan Kisha... 

I mean wo beach wala couple mile 😉 

Acha rahega 😃