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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: _Wings_of_Pen_



Thank You so much dear..!!
Would Love to Continue for your comments..πŸ˜†


Please continue :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

..Flashback..



 

Uss Insaan mein bohot Raaz chupe huye hai.Koi anjaan hi hoga jo inhein jaanne ki koshish karega.Kabhi raahi raaste ko chunta hai,Kabhi raasta raahi ko chun leta hai.'

\\ My Point of View //

Kitne mein kharida usne tumhein.? ' , he said..

Yeh tum kya keh rhe ho.? '

Oh.! Please ab innocent banne ki acting mat karo..'

Have you Lost it or what.? Damn it.!, woh meri best friend thi.'

Roshni.! galat thi.Tum bhi uske saare doston ki taran use nhi uske paise chahti thi.You are such a liar,just a betrayer..'

I slapped him.

He pulled me dangerously closer,so close that I could see every drop of fresh tears on his face.I know what inner turmoil did I face when I decided to be against him.The stains of those tears were screaming claiming his true love but what hurted me the most that,that love was not for me.

Ahh.!',he squeezed my wrist leaving behind his blue-black mark on my hand..

Bas.! Enough bohot ho gaya aur bohot maine sun liya.Today you have betrayed your friend,Roshni.Jab tumhein pehli baar dekha na toh laga ki chahe kuch bhi ho jaye,kuch bhi tum mera saath kabhi nhi chorogi,Sach ka saath kabhi nhi chorogi.Par tum bhi unn dhokebaaj ki tarah nikli.',he taunted me and tears escaped my eyes.

He pulled me away,away from him and his life.

Chali jao,chali jao mujhse dur.Aaj ke baad kabhi mujhe apni shakal nhi dikhana.'

I hate you.'

And these words made me relies that there was no way to make him understand.Kehte apne ko explainations ki zarurat nhi hoti aur na hi mujhe dena ka shauk.

When you will come to know the truth na.! then you will repent and trust me,I won't be there then to hold you and to soak your tears'.I said and left..!

 

I know I am damn Late but still I thought to update.😳

Please Hit Like and Comment.πŸ€—

~Wings_Of_Pen~

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Posted: 9 years ago
Baby πŸ€—
So happy to see youu!
What an update πŸ‘
Poor girl but I believe that she'll stand strong one day :)
The guy, has definately lost something!
I am in love with your writings dear :)
Update soon :*
Love : Ale ❀️
P.S. Tell me your name, if you don't mind :D
P.P.S Me first πŸ˜ƒEdited by Ale_TaaRey - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
First of all itz my first comment aftr so so long tym..
So.. It feelz really gr8 2 comment on such an amazing concept. Actually 2 say 'Amazing' wrd wud be an understatement. Seriously u r a very vry finest writer! Beautiful concept yr. Hats off to ur thoughts nd dt Brain! :)
Yr tumne toh ekdum humari man ki baaton ko publish kar diya..matlab vo gaanewala topic toh 100% true tha.. I mean hai ^_^
Anyways abt d current track itz a diff. one.. Well letz see ye topic kya ghul khila tha hai humare life me! ;)
Update soon dearie :)
-Prajakta.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ahhh..after sooo lonngg read something soo nyc...πŸ‘πŸΌ...
The girls emotion beautifully portrayed...what both were feeling was clear to us...😊..
Perfect..write moreπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
That Was Brilliant.
The Guy, Well There's Some Misunderstanding For Sure.
And About The Girl ,I Know She'll Be Strong And Tough Oneday. 

Nice One.
It's Good To See You. 

Write Again Soon. 
Take Care.