ZINDAGI-EK ANJANI PAHELI - Page 3

Posted: 9 years ago
wow dear..
new story..
awesome concept and nice start..
just loved it..
do continue soon..
and thanks for the pm..
Posted: 9 years ago
nice start  now what will happen
rosh came back update soon
Posted: 9 years ago
guys here is d nxt part
part 2
ri luks at aisha b4 opening d report
aisha-khol ri
ri-hmm
she opens it n a wide smile spread on her face bt sudenly d hapiness faded away
aisha-ria...
ri-reports positive hai
aisha(hapily)-ye baat to sab se pehle arjun...
ri-nai promise me tu kuch nai batayegi na unhe na kisi aur ko sameer bhai ko v nai plz
aisha-par ria tu itni badi baat unse kaise...
ria-agar unhe pata chala ki mai pregnant hu to unki kashmakash aur badh jayegi mai janti hu ki wo roshni se kitna pyar karte hai mai apne swarth k lie...
ayu-par ria...
ri-plz 
ayu-ok
tabhi aisha ko fone ata hai
ayu-ha sameer
sam-kaha ho tum aur ria kaha hai
ayu-ha wo mere sath hi hai hum kisi zaruri kaam se aye the
sam-wo thik to hai na?
ayu-hmm
sam-acha tum directly ghar ana meera tumhe bohot yaad kar rahi hai
ayu-hmm
(meera is samesha's 2 yr old daughter)
ayu-ria tu kaha jayegi?
ri-ma baba k ghar
ayu-hmm tk care
ri-hmm
at ariya/arni home
arjun is standing bside a window thinking abt his fully changed lyf
sudenly rosh cums frm bhind n hugs him
arj-ri...
rosh-kya?
arj-rosh...
he make him free frm her embrace
arj-mai avi ata hu
rosh-arjun tumne pucha nai ki mai waha kaise pohonchi?
arj-ha kk...kaise pohonchi?
rosh-us din jab usne mujhe stab kia aur tum par attack kia us k bad hm 2no unconcious ho gaye jab mujhe hosh aya tab mai 1 andhere kamre me thi tab se usne mujhe wahi rakha isse jyaada to mujhe v pata nai
arj-rosh m so sri meri wajah se tumhe itna kuch...
rosh-nahi arjun tumhari wajah se kuch nai hua aur ab to sab thik ho gaya hai na ab hume koi alag nai kar sakta
she hugs him tightly
arjun closes his eyes n a long tear fell frm his eyes
on the other side 
ri home
ri's baba-hw cn u do dis 1 baar usse baat kar k dekho ki wo kya chahta hai
ri's ma-ha beta mana ki roshni wapas aa gai is ka matlab ye to nai ki tumhara aur arjun ka rishta khatm ho gaya
ri-ma baba ap bas itna batayiye ki mai yaha reh sakti hu ya nai?
ri's baba-ha beta bilkul reh sakti hai par
ri-bas baba aage kuch aur nai plz n ha arjun se is baare me koi kuch nai kahega thik hai?
ri's ma n baba-hmm
here arjun is trying 2 call ria bt shes nt receiving d call n finally she switch off her fone
arjun(mv)-damn ria fone kyu band kar dia y r u doin dis 2 me
ri(mv)-sry arjun bt hum sab k lie yahi sahi hai
               pyar hai ya sazaa aee mere dil bata
                 tutta kyu nahi dard ka silsila
                 is pyar me ho kaise kaise imtehaa
                 ye pyar likhe kaisi kaisi dastaan
                 ya rabba dede koi jaan bhi agar
            dilbar pe ho na dilbar pe ho na koi asar

arjun remembers hw  ria's love n devotion has changed his life n filled his life with happiness     

                 kaisa hai safar wafaa ki manzil ka
                 na hai koi hal dilo ki mushkil ka                                dhadkan dhadkan bikhri ranzishen
                 saanse saansein tuti bandishe
           kahi to har lamha hothon pe fariyaad hai
                  kisiki dunia chahat me barbad hai
                  ya rabba dede koi jaan bhi agar
           dilbar pe ho na dilbar pe ho na koi asar
                  ya rabba dede koi jaan bhi agar
           dilbar pe ho na dilbar pe ho na koi asar

ria is remembering arjun's love n hw much dey were happy 2geder
both of dem hav tears in dere eyes
-TBC
tell me guys hw is it???

Posted: 9 years ago
great
super update
love it
cont soon
Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
love it
poor ariya
thnx 4 pm
cont soon
Posted: 9 years ago
Wat the hell how can she take decisions like this alone
for heaven sake Kid is Arjun's too she cnt keep him/her away from him
Arjun he is in dilemma but he shld tell Roshni
update soon

Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Love it
Cont soon
Thanks for pm
Posted: 9 years ago
nice part dear.. Hope things get sorted soon.. Interesting.. Continue soon.. Thanks for pm..
Posted: 9 years ago
nice parts
thanks for starting ariya story
ariya are happy with each other and rosh came suddenly
ria is preg and dint tell anyone except ayesha
she left arjun so  that arjun dint feel difficult
plz cont soon
Posted: 9 years ago
nice update she left him for his
happiness update soon

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