OS- KISI SE TUM PYAR KARO

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Hello guys I Am back to torture you all with a new OS. Waise ye maine hamare pyari MWBS yaani Morcha wali behnas ke request pe likha hai & it turned out to be like this πŸ€ͺ Hope u all will like it & if not you all are free to bash me up πŸ˜†πŸ˜†. enough of my Blabbering πŸ€ͺ here comes the OS as I always think this emotional part of samjun remained untouched by all of us lets see yadi aisa hota to  πŸ˜ƒ


  

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                                       PART A 


Sameer & entire ETF team were standing in front of OT as today their team mate was inside fighting battle between life & death & it was none other than Aisha who got hurt accidently & most worried was the chief himself as for him she was not only an asset to the team but she was one of those people who knew Sameer well as a person & as a friend too.

Sameer had developed a special bond with her but couldn't name it was it admiration, friendship or anything else but today his friends & his colleague life was at stake just because of him. 

He failed to protect her & felt guilty about it.

Few days back ETF got the case of the some Drug peddlers after investigating they found that there were some high profile ministers & famous industrialists were involved too Sameer although didn't want aisha to go but aisha had expertise in such cases so Sameer had no way out but to send her undercover.

Aisha had gathered much information in very less time & an hour before he called Sameer to take the evidences which she had gathered but to her bad luck one of the peddler overheard the conversation & informed the rest & by the time Sameer reached the place aisha was badly injured laying in the pool of her own blood.

Sameer informed everyone & aisha was taken to hospital for treatment.

Doctor checked her & said that she is in critical condition & they will try their best to save her.

All were tensed about aisha but Sameer was sitting on the bench in totally shocked mode as someone has snatched ground beneath his feet.

It was late night now Sameer has send rest of the team to take some rest only one person left was Arjun 2nd in command of ETF & once a fast friend of Sameer.

Doctor came & informed Sameer "Mr Rathod Aisha ji ab stable hai par khatra abhi tala nahi hai hum kal subah hi kuch bata sakte hai kyuki abhi bhi woh behosh hai jaise hi hosh aayega hum tab kuch keh paayenge"

Sameer nodded in positive & sighed in defeat.

Arjun knew what was bothering him it was the Same feeling which he had when Roshni died he was not able to save her & that helplessness was killing him big time till today & he could see the Same agony on Sameers face.

Arjun knew that his dear friend has already fallen for aisha but he was the man of few words & he couldn't dare to express his feelings moreover aishas condition has shook him to the core.

Arjun went to him & was about to say but Sameer turned & said, "Rawte tum kyu ruke hoo jaao thoda aaram kar loo bahut raat ho gayi aur aisha ke saath main ruka hoon na uski chinta mat karo"

Arjun first glared at him & said, "tum kab badloge Rathod? Aaj bhi waise hi hoo"

Sameer in a irritated tone, "Rawte mere paas tumhare faltu sawaaloo ka jawaab nahi hai aur is waqt main already bahut preshan hoon aisha ko lekar tum aur mat karo"

Arjun said taking a deep breath, "to kya karna chahte ho? Pichli baar ki tarha is baar bhi apna pyar khona chahte ho"

Sameer was shocked after hearing those words from Arjun & turned his face aside & closed his eyes to bear the pain.

Arjun turned his face & said, "ab jawaab kyu nahi dete Rathod  kya tumhari insecurity itni bad gayi hai ki tum apne dil ki baat nahi ke paa rahe hoo tumhari isi vajah se tum kabhi kush nahi reh paaye apni zindigi main apna pyar api dosti sab kho di "

Sameer said, "Bas karo Rawte jaao yaha se main kuch sunna nahi chahta"

Arjun said in irritated tone, "Kyu sach kadva lagta hai rathore  main bas ye kehna chahta hoon ki abhi bhi der nahi hui hai meri baat Samjho  kyuki dil ke rishte dil ki baat kehne se bante hai"

Sameer hearing this slummed back on the chair & covered his face in his palms & lone tear drop escaped from his eyes.

He in the weak moment hugged Arjun & said, "Mian nahi bacha paya use Arjun main nahi bacha paya use meri bharose pe aur meri vajah se woh gayi thi aur aaj..." his words trailed off after that.

Arjun patted back of his broken friend & said, "Sam please woh theek ho jaayegi tum please aisa mat karo main Samajh sakta hoon kitum kya feel kar rahe ho wahi jaisa main feel karta hoon helpless mare saamne hote hue bhi main Roshni ko nahi bacha paya tum sahi khete ho Sam Roshni ki maut mere pagalpan ki vajah se hui hai meri vajah se hi woh aaj hamare beech nahi hai"

Sameer said in a chocked voice, "dekho.. Arjun"

Cutting him short Arjun said "mujhe kehne de Sam main jaanta hoon ki main Roshni ko bacha nahi paya par woh tujhe hamesha kush dekhna chahti thi tu bahut kushnaseeb hai ki tujhe aisha jaise koi mili hai jo teri zindigi ki saari  kushiyaan waapis laa sakti hai bahut kam logo ko zindigi main pyar dubara milta hai Sam isliye jitni jaldi ho sake aisha se apne dil ki baat keh de"

Sameer hugged Arjun & said "tu bahut miss karta hai na Roshni ko?"

Sameer nodded with a smile & said, "tub hi to karta hai aaj woh hoti to bahut kush hoti"

Arjun nodded & said, "haan tujhe pata hai woh hamesha kehti thi kit ere jaisa dost bahut kam naseeb waalo ko milta hai"

Sameer smiles lightly to Arjun & themn Arjun said, "bahut pyar karta thana Roshni se?"

Sameer looked up at Arjun in surprise & said, "Arjun ye kya keh raho?" he moved his face away to hide his embarrassment.



  

     



SCROLL DOWN FOR PART B πŸ˜Š

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                                    PART B

Arjun turned his face towards himself & said "tujhe kya lagta hai tu mujhe ya Roshni ko ullu bana sakta hai mujhe sab pata hai aur Roshni bhi jaanti thi" Sameer looked at him with more surprise & Arjun continued "tune kahah thana ki jise tum pyar karte ho woh kisiaur se pyar karti hai aur uski shadi hone waali hai tab bhi maine aur Roshni ne pata lagane ki koshish kit hi par kuch pata nahi chala thode din baad jab hamari shadi hui aur tu training ke liye bahar gaya tha tab Gaytri bhabhi aur suraj bhahiya aaye the hamse milne aur shadi ki mubarakbaad dene tab itefaaq se mujhe ye baat pata chali thi"

                                                         

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Arjun had proposed Roshni today & she had came to Sameer to tell her about all this.

She saw Sameer indulged in books & nervously said coming close to him "Sam .."

Sameer who was lost in his books came out of trance & said, "Roshni kya hua kuch pareshaan ho kya ?"

She said, "Sam Arjun ne mujhe propose kiya hai woh mujhse shadi karna chahta hai main kiya jawaab doon?"

Sameer was speechless & was not able to react for few minutes

She shook him hard & said "Sam kuch bologe bhi pathar bane kyu baithe hoo?" that brought him back to senses he composed himself & said, "Jo tumhara dil kehta hai woh karo Arjun bahut acch a ladka hai aur mera dost bhi hai main usse acche se jaanta hoon"

Roshni said, "to kya main haan kar doon"

Sameer nods smiling at him with painful eyes.

Roshni hugs Sameer & says, "thanks Sam tumse accha dost mujhe nahi mil sakta tum meri saari problem solve kar dete ho"

Sameer hugs her back too & says, "what are friends for" then Roshni replies looking at him, "Sam tumhe kya hua tumhara chehra kyu utar gaya?"

Sameer says "tum chali jaaogi to main bahut miss karonga tumhe"

Roshni smiles & said, "Sam tum bhi na main dusre desh thodi na jaa rahi hoon aur tum kya Samajhte ho shadi hone par main tumhara peecha chod doongi sara din tang karrongi jaise abhi karti hoon aur tum bhi to kisi se bahut pyar karte hona use kahah kuch won a nukur kare to mujhe batana main Samjhaungi use aur waise bhi tum itne acche ho koi mana nahi karegi"

Sameer looked straight into her eyes & said "accha koi bhi tum bhi nahi?"

Roshni became startled at his sudden question & seeing her confused face he starts smiling & says, "main mazak kar raha tha zara apna chehra dekho"

Roshni in angry tone says, "tum aur tumhara woh dost dono ek jaise hai pata hi nahi chalta kab kya kehte ho"

She walked out of the room stomping her foot & Arjun entered after she left.

Sameer hugged Arjun & congratulated them.

After a week they got married at the local temple.

After few days Sameer left Mumbai.

Here Roshni told Arjun that Sam loves someone but not able to express his feelings to his lady love & they should help him.

Arjun & Sam were close friends so Arjun was sure that Sam will not hide anything from him & he knows him in & out so he will be able find out that girl whom Sam is in love with but Arjun was not able to get the clue.

After 8 months of Arni marriage Sameer still had kept a minimal contact with them he got transferred to Bangalore on his request to stay away from Arjun & Roshni.

One day Roshni got a call from Gaytri sister in law of Sameer who was coming to india to meet Arjun & Roshni after their marriage as due to some important reason she could not attend their wedding.

Arjun & Roshni welcome suraj & Gaytri brother & sister in law of Sameer (who died in a car accident 2 years back in present).

Gaytri handed over the gift & her blessings to Roshni as she was not there at that time.

Roshni started with Sameer's topic & said, "Bhabhi Sameer kahah hai aaj kal? Shadi ke baad ek baar bhi Arjun ya mujhse milne nahi aaya hai training main tha ab transfer ho gaya hai par call to kar sakta hai na?"

Gaytri making a sad face said, "tum jaane do Roshni aur woh busy hoga isliye call nahi kiya khair woh chodo tum kush ho na?"

Roshni nodded in yes with a smile & said, "par bhabhi main Sameer ko kabhi maaf nahi karoongi is baat ke liye kuch serious hai kya main janati hoon Sameer aise kabhi nahi karta hai 6 mahine ho gaye use hamse baat kiye"

Gaytri said in a chocked voice, "tum jaana chahti ho to suno ki Sameer jis ladki zikra karta tha jisse woh pyar karta hai woh aur koi nahi tum ho Roshni"

Roshni stood stunned & totally numb after hearing this Gaytri continued saying "haan woh tumse bahut pyar karta hai bas himmat nahi juta saka kehne ki ya fir use laga ho ki kehne ki zarrorat hi nahi hogi phir jab use pata chala ki tum Arjun se pyar karti hoo to woh bina kuch kahe tum dono ke beech se hat gaya"

Roshni said in irritated way, "par Sam ne mujhse kabhi kuch nahi kahah bhabhi"

Gaytri said, "yadi woh kehta to kya kehti tum ?"

Roshni said, "Bhabhi pata nahi tab aisa kuch ho sakta hai socha nahi tha par ab yadi sochungi to paap karongi par usse kahiyega ki main uski dost hamesha rahoongi aur main hamesha use kush dekhna chahti hoon "

Roshni turned to leave & found Arjun standing there with shocked expressions.

Gayitri was also shocked seeing him there but Arjun said, "bhabhi is baat ka zikra aap Sam se nahi karengi please"

gayitri nodded & left Roshni was still confused & said to Arjun, "Arjun mujhe bilkul nahi pata tha Sam ke baare main woh abhi bhabhi ne.."

Cutting her short he said, "relax Roshni mujhe pata hai par tum jaise ladki se to koi bhi pyar kar sakta hai Sam ne kiya to isme kya galat hai surprise to tab hota jab aisa nahi hota "

Roshni has now completely lost it & said, "Tum mere pati ho ya apne dost ke vakeel ho?"

Arjun said, "Roshni woh galat nahi hai isliye please tum usse aise hi milogi aur baat karogi jaise ab tak karti thi use bilkul is baat ka ehsaas hone nahi dogi kitum sab jaanti hoo "

Roshni hugs Arjun & nods in yes.


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Sameer was completely stunned & Arjun said in ateasing way, "kyu chupana sirf tere ko aata hai kya hum nahi kar sakte"

Sameer hugged Arjun & thank God that he gave him such a friend.

After a while doctor came disturbing there chat & said, "Aisha ji ko hosh aa gaya hai aap mil sakte hai ab woh khatre se bahar hai"

Samjun both sighed in relief & Sameer went inside to meet her.

Aisha was laying on the bed her arm & fore head were bandaged.

Sameer asked sweetly, "Aisha ab kaisa feel kar rahi hoo"

aisha gestured him that she is fine.

Sameer said getting bit closer to her, "Aisha main insab main bahut bura hoon bilkul unromantic par mujhe tumhari bahut zarrorat hai zindigi bhar ke liye kyat um mera saath dogi I know mujh jaise sadu ko jhelna aasan nahi hoga par tumhare saath rehkar shayad main sudhar jaaoun"

Aisha couldn't believe her ears she didn't expected that from Sameer but she knew that Sameer loved her dearly & she too nodded in positive with a shy smile on her face.

Sameer was really happy that he finally got his soul mate an apt partner in life who will understand her.

After a month Sasha got married at a small ceremony at nearby temple all congratulated the new couple & all were happy for them.

After 2 years of their marriage Sasha were blessed with a daughter.

SASHA were really happy with the angle of their life that added more happiness to their life & they named her Roshni.


At times u need to express your Love before its too late πŸ˜Š


 THE END - NO THERE IS NO END TO LOVE 


   

      

Edited by GOLD.A - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
unres...
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Firstly, I am really sorry I read this OS long back but forgot to comment😳
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Now coming to OS,
Ayesha's life in danger😲
Sameer's broken state was very well written.
Arjun supported & console him like a true friend.
Sam-jun convo was heart touchingπŸ˜ƒ
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I am not a fan of love triangle between Arni+Sam.😳
Arjun handled the situation smartly, His decision of not confronting sam was right & sensible.πŸ‘
Sam finally confessed his love to Ayesha. 
Awww. they name their daughter Roshni.❀️.
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PS. It was cute, poignant & sensible OS
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nice dear 
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Wow
Super
Awesome os
Love it
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Thanks Tiya dear 
glad u liked it πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š
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wow
awesome os
love it
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: saritak

wow
awesome os
love it

 
Thanks Sarita di 
Love u lots πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 9 years ago
its was a nice OS...but while reading i felt roshni too had fell for Sam but couldnt express...πŸ˜•

but it was a as usual nicely written...straight to the word and events...just like you always write..😳😳😳
the flashback was but somewhere i felt something was missing...may be a small part about rosh could have helped to clear out the doubts...

nways the proposal was dhasu...loved it..πŸ‘πŸ‘

thanks for the pm goldie...

you rock partner..πŸ€—πŸ€—