OS- KISI SE TUM PYAR KARO - Page 2

Originally posted by: rimi_invisible

its was a nice OS...but while reading i felt roshni too had fell for Sam but couldnt express...😕

but it was a as usual nicely written...straight to the word and events...just like you always write..😳😳😳
the flashback was but somewhere i felt something was missing...may be a small part about rosh could have helped to clear out the doubts...

nways the proposal was dhasu...loved it..👏👏

thanks for the pm goldie...

you rock partner..🤗🤗

 

re/unres

it was so cute 😳😳😳
Sam love roshni but can't propose 🤢🤢🤢
Arjun knows everything but he didn't elaborate or create a mess to pure 👍🏼
Ayesha was injured and sam felt guilty
Sam proposed Ayesha in so hurried 😆
but they got married 😳😳😳
so sweet 👏👏👏

Wese di check ur scrap 😊
Edited by fatiLuvShaleen - 9 years ago

gm... i lubh u 4 such a nyc os...
But mujhe to yad v nai tha k humne os demand kia tha... hehe 😃 ❤️

this was so nice... firstly the unknown feelings finally taking a shape...
all thanks to arjun... jisne Gadi ko dhakka mara...

the samjun part...the lost friendship...their reunion..
its a saying tht evn if dr r innumerable misunderstandings b/w 2 best frnds... wen one needs d othr... dusra is alwz hazir...

n it is also said that wen u r about to lose something..or have lost it...its only dn u realize its imprtnc...

beautifully depicted... sam's shy self...n his abrupt decision of leaving d plc... and nt being able to speak his heart out was very nice...

n finally he speaks! very nice gm

Originally posted by: IshitaRocks015

gm... i lubh u 4 such a nyc os...
But mujhe to yad v nai tha k humne os demand kia tha... hehe 😃 ❤️

this was so nice... firstly the unknown feelings finally taking a shape...
all thanks to arjun... jisne Gadi ko dhakka mara...

the samjun part...the lost friendship...their reunion..
its a saying tht evn if dr r innumerable misunderstandings b/w 2 best frnds... wen one needs d othr... dusra is alwz hazir...

n it is also said that wen u r about to lose something..or have lost it...its only dn u realize its imprtnc...

beautifully depicted... sam's shy self...n his abrupt decision of leaving d plc... and nt being able to speak his heart out was very nice...

n finally he speaks! very nice gm

 

Originally posted by: ashmijoseph

Awesome

 

Originally posted by: fatiLuvShaleen

re/unres

it was so cute 😳😳😳
Sam love roshni but can't propose 🤢🤢🤢
Arjun knows everything but he didn't elaborate or create a mess to pure 👍🏼
Ayesha was injured and sam felt guilty
Sam proposed Ayesha in so hurried 😆
but they got married 😳😳😳
so sweet 👏👏👏

Wese di check ur scrap 😊

 

awesome os dear.. Loved it.. Beautifully written.. Thanks for pm..

Originally posted by: unishaz

awesome os dear.. Loved it.. Beautifully written.. Thanks for pm..

 

Supperbbb... OS
loved it
Awesomely written
Thanks for PM

Beautiful and emotional OS...
Loved it a lot...
Finally,Bhai and Aayesha are together and happily married..
Wow..
They have a baby girl,named Roshni...
Beautiful.
Thanks for the pm.