Kalpana The vicious Girl updt on new thread(24th Nov) - Page 110

Lolor

@lolor

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Posted: 9 years ago

evil pakhi killed her own father... 😡 ...
superb update...waiting for ragana confrontation...

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Ushoshi

@_TheBlackRose_

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Posted: 9 years ago

Awesome update...

Pakhi is horrible... killed her own dad!

Update soon

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sampa79

@sampa79

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Posted: 9 years ago

Awesome update

can't believe a child can kill her own father

update soon next part

Pakhi should get big punishment

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

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Posted: 9 years ago

wow..what updates Vish! 👏 You are too good in twists and suspenses! Prem fooled his own sister...bravo! 😃 😆👏 True friend I must say. Raghav faces his inner demons, has confrontation with the love he has for Kalpi in his heart, takes out his anger and realises his mistake. Beautifully written scene, loved it a lot. Sammy-Sheetal, Sheetal is too clever. Hope she isn't successful in alerting Pakhi!

Emotional confrontation of Vitthal and Kalpi. Loved it a lot. You showed it beautifully, the emotions of a father. Then he has an accident and the love for her father, overpowers Kalpi's emotional injuries. She or any daughter cannot see her father like this.

Hospital scene was also beautifully portrayed. Finally Pakhya takes a small stand for his sister, finds his voice. And yes, how I hate Kamla! 😡 Prem finally finds out that his sister was behind murder of his father. But the mystery remains why did she hurt her own parents?? it was sad and emotional to see Prem like this.So hurt was he that he lost all emotions for his sister. You showed it so very well. Bravo update again! 😃👏⭐️Love you, take care. 😃 🤗❤️

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Anjinie

@Anjinie

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Posted: 9 years ago

kamala as usual selfish, hope Kalpi does not forgive her so easily, wonder what her reaction be when she learns Paakhi killed her father

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premap

@premap

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Posted: 9 years ago

A very touching update. Love of father n daughter and brother and sis , against a 'brute' of a mother. Lovely update. waiting for next!

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1005862

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Posted: 9 years ago

nice update dida...thnk god vithal is okk now...happy...nd yes dat damla...aaa...moti..dog's t**l...kuch bhi kerlo sidhi nahi ho sakti hai...bechara prem...kya beeti hogi uspe ye jaan k ki uski baby sisi killed his dad...plzzz continue...nxt thnx dida...thnx 4 update...update nxt part soon...

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Arpita

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Posted: 9 years ago

Before starting with how fabulous the update is can i please.. Please..

SLAP KAMLA😡😡😡 And if you may then I can also kill her😡

She really does not deserve kalpi's love.. I remember when u asked that should VitLa be forgiven and I had replied that vithal should be and not kammo.. See she proved right.. This woman is gone case.. Isk kabhi kuch nahi ho sakta😡

Phew.. Done with kammo haay haay..😉

Poor prem.. The little sis whom he loved so much turned to be that monster who destroyed her own family.. Seriously pakhi is a maniac.. Which daughter can kill her own father🤢

Glad that vithal is all fit and fine and plus now kalpi has forgiven him.. Btw.. Make a new thread.. This one's over😉

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Kiaraah

@Kiaraah

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Posted: 9 years ago

Sowiee. ... I'm late for my comments. Read both parts together. Prem is too good.

Part 32

How nicely he tricked Pakhi. He knows his sister very well. Also how cunning she can be... You wrote Maya first instead of Maria. ...lol.

Raghav is going through an inner turmoil. He is having a tough time accepting that Kalpi has done this to him. At the same time he knows partially it is his fault too for starting revenge drama. He finally accepts whatever Kalpi has done is justifiable and decides to ask her for forgiveness.

Sammy enquiring about Sheetal. She's as smart as Pakhi. How she evaded Sammy's questions. Sammy believed what she told him! Dumb man! Or is it for Sheetal's benefit? I think so. He can't be that stupid.

Vithal - Kalpi confrontation was quite emotional. I loved it. Maybe because I was close to my dad too. He is asking for forgiveness and she's having a hard time putting up a brave front and not break down. Oh, no! He had an accident. Please don't make anything happen to him. Always for a daughter her dad is the first hero. She got his love and trust after so long.

Part 33

Kamala. .. Grrr. ... can't even come after hearing about hospital. Glad Pakya took a stand and knocked some sense into her. Poor Kalpi is so shattered. Vithal is her lifeline. Good that her friend Payal is there to support her. Kalpi had to go away from the hospital because of Kamala too.

Prem and Maria are so close to finding the truth. Mrs Singh knew everything but hesitant to reveal the truth. But when she told it was a shocker for Prem. Though he suspected all along, it was something else to get it confirmed that your dad's murder was arranged by your own sister. At least he has Maria and Pari now. Hope he doesn't do anything stupid out of anger.

Love you Vish! Here comes the usual! 🤗

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