Yuvreen TS: Kaisi Paheli Zindagani......(P3@pg6) - Page 5

iiManAsiii

@iiManAsiii

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Rocking krudi. Amazing tha. The story cudnt have a better end. Completely loved it. Love yuvreen. ❤️Edited by Shivinian - 9 years ago

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935575

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Posted: 9 years ago

it was nice krupa , i thought end alag hoga , but u rocked , still cnt imagine yuvraj and naros baby, thoda dramatic tha padhte waqt thoda awkward feel hua par phir bhi its okay , keep writing , u r amazing ,Edited by indradhanushs - 9 years ago

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JustMySelf

@JustMySelf

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 9 years ago

amazing end kdi i ws wondering hw suvi wd deal with it bt u made it so pic perfect 👏

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Supernatural_10

@Supernatural_10

IF-Addictz

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Posted: 9 years ago

Wonderful Ending Krupaa

Everyone is happy in end Yuvreen and Mannaro

Krish is such cute bacha

Do write more

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sahashrabdi

@..chotu..

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 9 years ago

Awesome part...I told na Yuvreen wud be togtehr...n here they are...this part was the perfect ending for the story.Actually this story is one of your best peices of work.I totally loved it.I loved my gift😃

Do keep writing more OS n TS n dont forget to pm me!😊WhenI'll be back I'll read them😃

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mizzle22

@mizzle22

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Wow..its the best possible end..😃😃

This story is like the worst turn of events that could have taken place in the SG storyline..and you pictured it wonderfully..

Do write more stories with different instances..perhaps a little less dramatic next time..😆 finding this one a little hard to digest..I'd prefer fun types..we can then have lots of happy things that we had missed in the show..and with your superb writing..it'll be just like watching SG..😊

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jaskiran kaur

@AnkitGuptaKiAC

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 9 years ago

Superb krupaaa...

Best ending... U rocked it and i loved it...

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Shweta

@shweta6767

Senior Member

Posted: 9 years ago

its awesome di...

and great ending...👏

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Sasha_Yuvreen

@Sasha_Yuvreen

Senior Member

Posted: 9 years ago

Hey Krupaa, just read the whole story...and my First thought was "What the Hell Did I Just Read?!"😲...in good way😉...it is very surprising/shocking at first coz of how v know/love r sg gang😳, but I really enjoyed a lot. 👍🏼

As a writer, u have a great bunch of characters to work with for new ideas n as readers we really connect regardless, as we know the characters so well! Great Work!👏

P.s - before the leap, i actually thought that a dna test would prove its mannu baby (remember unki concert date😉 - hence premature/complications) - but obvio it would ruin your effect 😆of connecting super six in a new way!

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sujairohit

@sujairohit

Goldie

Posted: 9 years ago

Wow very nice ending.

Liked your short story Krupaa.

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