Originally posted by: laila1994
Hi Bhavna di😊Sam & Arjun are equally important in this story. Actually this story will revolve around Arjun-sam-rosh & Arjun's child.One more thing, Sam's character is different.😉
Originally posted by: rimi_invisible
bhavna di...laila ka bharosa maat karo...i doubt ki ye larki sam ko gay na bana de...she has loved watching PTKK🤣
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Asha03, minamma, Armagadon, My_loveis_gone, jia03, anant90, rinku95, Shamsad1607,Originally posted by: rimi_invisibleunres
tum apna devilapan kab chorogi?
ye kaisa prologue hai??😕😕
i am hell confused what you planning to do with the characters? kahi chicken taandoori to nehi banaogi un dono ka??😆😆
agar banayi bhi,..invite me for the meal..😆😆
Arjun's memory loss was written well, though not specified directly but is it related to rosh's death scene?😕
arjun is a father..who is the child?? 😉
well i loved the suspense you have built in the prologue itself..do continue..😳
nd i hate you too..😆😆😆
Originally posted by: chulbuliannures
sorry agar bich me aayi hu to 😆itna haq to banta hai mwb ka 😆😆😆and u hate us...but still we love uunresnow me to hates u laila...ye kya tha 😡😡😡 shuru hone se pehle hi khatam ho gyanice start...arjun ki memory loss...bs use roshni aur apna naam yaad hai...okay roshni to mar chuki hai... bacche ka kya huaarjun to khus ho rha hai k uska bachcha hai...pr agar hai to kahan hai
Originally posted by: GOLD.ABut we all love u Laila
Haan shuru kiya bhi to ab ?😡nice intro & waiting for the parts & plot 😊Edited after plot :Interesting lailaawesome plotwant to read the chapters soon
Originally posted by: Godly_Affectionunres!
awesome!!👏👏very interesting n intriguing!!waiting to know more!!so many questions!!😉😆 [but i won't ask them hopefully they'll be solved in the coming updates😉]continu soon!!thankx for pm😃
Originally posted by: skraftyAwesome start
interesting plot
waiting for the next part
continue soon
Originally posted by: NainaSMnice ...👏... Arni my fav ...😉... nice start continue soon 👍🏼
Originally posted by: minammaIs this ariya or arakshi or anythng else
Well updt soonN pm me wen u updt
Originally posted by: anant90interesting!!...looking forward for story..
Originally posted by: jia03Amazing start!👏
Originally posted by: IshitaRocks015laila ki jai ho!
u finally wrote...
aur hume hate karne k liye thnx... d feeling is mutual 😆
okay...dat was a small part..yet impactful..
arjun in hospital..visualising roshni..dn d baby part...
loads of confusions!
update soon!
Originally posted by: Shamsad1607is it the plot!! oh dear certified Res-er!!
Rosh is dead & Arjun is blank now!! & his flashes of memories...nice start!And Ri-Sakshi...you know I care a damm about those names...just write on darling.Do continue...& I'm not that bad..you know I don't res. :P
Originally posted by: halima_zakanyc
Originally posted by: bgargateInteresting... but sad
My question ... Sameer Rathod ka role hai kya story mein? 😉If yes, then I will comment ... else only silent reading ... I m very bad 😈 ... I love my Sam and agar wo nahi hai to mai dukhi zyada dukhi ho jati hoon 😉
Originally posted by: rinku95Superb
Continue soon
Thank for pm
Originally posted by: MeselfEk toh I'm online through my phone and secondly those damn like buttons wouldn't work! You know Laila there is definately something between the two of us. We both sahre mutual hate for each other. Never for once do those damn buttons work; even after I abuse it as much as I can!! Huh...dekh loongi tereko 'like button'!!
Secondly what a mystery drenched prologue. These days I am craving for psychological thrillers and here you are providing me with one! Dil ki tamana hui poori! That was an excellant opening remark. So for the past one and half years our hero is swirling in the oblivion and has no concrete clue that would get him to the end of tunnel! Of course there is this Roshini and a faint memory of his child, about whom he is blissfully ignorant...but then again not a concrete ground to firm your stand.I must say Laila darling you are turning out to be a gripping writer with characters under you walking a tight leash! I'd love to read more and know the whats, whens and hows!! Continue soon-ish!!
Originally posted by: ArmagadonSo first of all...
Expected ki tum aise type ki hi likhogi!NO Arakshi *sniff* ... *dramatic waala faint*Kidding!So a pure thrill and suspense waala story I guess eh?Cool cuz I am all in for it!Oh - so the story starts with his memory loss...Ouch that is bad... :( (mean for him)I guess he was found the day Rosh was attached - cuz that is something that has left a deep impact on him...Bechara.. he's know in nursing home...His life has turned into a pure blank canvas...Wow - he's a father! Par...kkahi his child didn't die with Rosh na?Ya phir is the kid alive!Well at least he has something to be happy!AM really waiting for what comes up next :D :DNO wonder u're a mystery lover!It shows through the prologue itself!Must say that I am damned intrigued by this update...ANd what about Arjun's friends and family...Or is he a loner?Awesome prologue... Continue soon :)~ SHree
Chapter 2: "The plight of Sameer"
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