This sweetheart was a suckerpunch!! I have no idea which aspect of it to discuss first? Should I be happy that Arjun got a lease of life in broken frames or that Sameer is the chivalrous gyy still...or should I gape in horror that Sameer was a dad at 17 and that he knows what had happened with Arjun!!There are definately too many string hanging loose and to tie them all would be one massive pull-push. So Sameer's origin is from a abyss of muck; where he did wrong his friend by forcefuly making her his wife. And add to it he has wiped out Arjun's trace. Is he protecting Aejun or is the entire layout vindictive?? Only time will tell or you will tell!
Geez that revelation was indeed huge! Sameer a dad at 17!! Woah! So who is his wife and what is he hiding by keeping Arjun in the dark! And what possible harm can Arjun evoke given that he is already a memory-less vulnerability. That sweet diatributing part was sweet though! All in all a total entertainer update!
P.S. I like to make a request that please have Aayesha in the story. A woman's perspective always provides a fresh twist in the tale. Also she is a femme fatale, I have this feeling that she can be a wonderful addition. But again you are the master here so lead us your way! Continue soon and Ramdaan Mubarak!!
Edited by Meself - 9 years ago
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