Roshni Rawte case SS: dangerous to know..Chap 6, pg 26 - Page 6

misakiscarlet

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Posted: 9 years ago

awesome concept..

loved it..

prologue was very well written👏 and confusing

arjun has lost his memory .. he just remembers his and rosh's name..👍🏼

coming to part...

sam's past was heart wrnching💔

his father😡😡

bechari uski wife...😭 hope she'll b cming in future..

is sam grey😲😲 hope its not lyke that..

waiting for more

contd. soon

thnx for pm

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laila

@laila1994

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Posted: 9 years ago

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ponnuz, maisha1995, pango, misakiscarlet, Armagadon, jia03, Meself,

bgargate, NainaSM, greensakthi, Devangana, Godly_Affection, IshitaRocks015,

skrafty, rinku95, chulbuliannu, --Iqra--, Snehajain, rimi_invisible, halima_zaka,

Thank you guyz for liking this update😃

This content was originally posted by: Armagadon
Ok I got a beautiful heart attacck in every angle yaar!!!

Yeh Sam is... grey...

Bechara Arjun... I truly feel pity for this man...

And Sam... more than Arjun I am intrigued by this Sameer Damsingh Rathore...

His past made me frown and look aside in anger...

Agreed that he was helpless but he could have carved out a way...

BUt then again... helpless...

At least he tried to protest...

But my heart became heavy reading his past...

I hate his father... if I was his son... I would have just run away with my better half...

His wife.. my heart goes out to her...

WHo was his wife?

I am getting a sure feeling that she would be more than a character in his past...

And yes... Sam's attitude towards Arjun...

SOmething is amiss...

Looking forward to read the next part...

Thanks for the pm :)

Hahaha. Mission accomplished😆

I wanted to write something different about Sam's character. I am so bored reading his chivalrous & gentlemen type character.

about Sam's actions & decision please read the note below.

Yup. My heart also goes to her.Mind it she is not some abla nari. she did take her revenge😃

You are right. She will play a important role in this SS.

You'll know about Samjun equation soon.

This content was originally posted by: rimi_invisible
you know what i really wanted to res and run away but i couldnt..the update was superbly intriguing..😊

first Arjun's unknown happiness...then his helpless search for himself...superb...😳

it gave me goosebumps to read the next part...specially the Sameer rathod's life story...it was short yet well described...👏

his misery to see his wife suffer was depicted brilliantly, i could actually feel the pain he was going through along with her..

he is sounding grey but i know, he wont be one...he is barring arjun for a reason..i want that..😳

a big hug for sketching the characters so brilliantly...

take in some punches and kicks too...you know why..🤣

continue soon

I am glad you liked it.

@Bold: thank you for noticing it. Yes, he loved her & he was as helpless as her.

Are you sure sam is not a grey character??? 😈

I am learning to sketch the characters from Kuchu's stories & your BOL. I am your student.😳

OK let me break your bubble. It was a joke.😆😆

This content was originally posted by: Meself
This sweetheart was a suckerpunch!! I have no idea which aspect of it to discuss first? Should I be happy that Arjun got a lease of life in broken frames or that Sameer is the chivalrous gyy still...or should I gape in horror that Sameer was a dad at 17 and that he knows what had happened with Arjun!!

There are definately too many string hanging loose and to tie them all would be one massive pull-push. So Sameer's origin is from a abyss of muck; where he did wrong his friend by forcefuly making her his wife. And add to it he has wiped out Arjun's trace. Is he protecting Aejun or is the entire layout vindictive?? Only time will tell or you will tell!

Geez that revelation was indeed huge! Sameer a dad at 17!! Woah! So who is his wife and what is he hiding by keeping Arjun in the dark! And what possible harm can Arjun evoke given that he is already a memory-less vulnerability. That sweet diatributing part was sweet though! All in all a total entertainer update!

P.S. I like to make a request that please have Aayesha in the story. A woman's perspective always provides a fresh twist in the tale. Also she is a femme fatale, I have this feeling that she can be a wonderful addition. But again you are the master here so lead us your way! Continue soon and Ramdaan Mubarak!!

Thank you very much😃

Sameer is much more than just a chief or a chivalrous guy. I wanted his character to be different & unique. guess I succeed in that.😃

About sameer's wife she is my triumph card.

I am glad you made a request believe me I also wanted to add her but It will not be possible. I can't put her in any important role expect being a Sameer lover, which according to me is a waste for her charismatic character😳

But If you have any idea regarding how can I put her character in my story please feel free to discuss it. I will be more than happy to do it.😳

This content was originally posted by: IshitaRocks015
arjun ki memory chali gyi hai kya??
Achanak usko apne bap banne k bare kse yad aya? n ACP? well... wo Rawte chaddi wala padhke mujhe hassi a gyi 😆

then Sam's backstory... trust me... it shook me to d core! 😲
poor kid ..at first being bullied... then financial problems...then the child marriage...

n uske bad wala was an atom bomb! ...
" Soon his 14 years old wife was
pregnant with his child."
i nearly fainted! seriously.. i dont wanna imagine even...
what might have the girl gone through! that innocent soul was literally abused!

everything is so mysterious! i m loving it...update soon!

Yup. Arjun has lost his memory.😊

Finally someone noticed that "Chaddi Rawte"

I wanted to shock people & I succeed in it.

Sam has gone through worst. more to come about his life

This content was originally posted by: bgargate
Feeling bad for Arjun

Sam bana "Balika Vadhu" 😳😳

But that as the time when he didn't even know what he was doing ... he was just following his father's instructions ... That is a the typical Indian society set up

He was also not happy at first and now the way he behaves, he is repenting what he did in past 😳

Waiting for more 😊 Arjun's story and Sameer's wife and kid 😊

P.S. - Me and Aisha were planning a Balika Vadhu types story for Sam but couldn't work on it as both of us were busy 😳😳😳

about Sam's actions & decision. please read the note below.

BTW, I am waiting for RNP update. post it soon.😃

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laila

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Posted: 9 years ago

This content was originally posted by: kunchu
That was an entirely new plot my dear
I dont think ever before Sam was casted this way
Hats off for that
I guess that past n maybe a tragedy at that age may have made him more protective for female
But I am not sure if he is protecting or keeping things hidden from Arjun
His state seems to be miserable
Continue soon
I m waiting
N Ramadan Mubarak ho

Thank you Helna di.

I wanted to present very character in a new & unique way be it Arjun, sam or Rosh.

Yes. you are absolutely right. It was his past actions that made him chivalrous person.

This content was originally posted by: Godly_Affection
awesome start dear👏
loved it😃
arjun remembered his name..n now searching it on google..😆
sam's past..hell shocking! child-marriage🤢 n child at age of 14😲🤢
who is his wife??
sam doesn't want arjun to return into his old life..but why??😕
continu soon
thankx for pm

Thank you Goldy.

All your questions will be answered in future updates.

This content was originally posted by: GOLD.A
Loved it Laila awesome
Arun character is still a mystery for me😕
let the chapters proceed
but sameers part was really well written
his background was brief & impactful
specially his wife misery
it was very well written & heart touching
lets see the reason behind this attitude of sam
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊😊

Thank you Goldie.

Arjun will remain a mystery till the end.😆

I am glad you liked Sam's part. I was scared Sam's fan will not like it much😳

This content was originally posted by: chulbuliannu
first sorry for late commenting
arjun ne sweets baatein...😃 aur google pr khud ko search marr rha hai...uff its very painful...jab insan apni identity dhundta hai...
sam ka character grey shed ka lag rha hai I hope aisa ho nhi...
sam ka past kafi painful hai...
choti umer me shadi...uff rajasthan me abhi bhi ye sab hota hai...
sam ne kuch soch kr hi arjun ko sabse dur rakha hoga...aur wo kisi ko uss tak aur uss ko kisi tak nhi pahuchne dena chahta...
I know tum sam ka character negative to nhi karogi...itna confidence to hai tum pe

Firstly, you are not late Annu.

Sameer ka past abhi sirf adha reveal kia hai. Pura karongi to tum rone beth jaogi.😊

Mujhepe itna yaqeen mat karo. Mujhe log Devil ese hi ni kehte😆

This content was originally posted by: skrafty
Awesome update
Loved it
Sameer's life story was nicely Described
Poor Him
He suffered along with his wife
I think his Anger is somewhere related to his wife
Feeling really pity for Arjun
Why is Sameer doing this to arjun?
interesting
waiting for the next part
continue soon

Thank you.

yes. Sameer's anger & pain is due to the pain he suffered along with his wife.

This content was originally posted by: Shamsad1607
I don't know how to react on this...
if this is your inauguration...then I wonder what you've hidden into your sleeves.

Arjun had some glimpse of his pasts through his dreams/ nightmares ... whatever he has everynight...& he was happy knowing about his child...& he don't know where is his child..was it born or not...& then his regular futile attempt of digging his on past...I was feeling bad for this man.

And Rathod...in both aspects..his past & present...it was a shock for me..but I was not surprised at all...don't know why I was expecting something like this from you, Sam is putting a tab on Arjun..or trying to keep him away from his information...The ASR is not in google!! it's quite impossible na!!
But Sam's past was melancholic...& yup this is that twist that shocked me...a helpless boy of 17 had to do something like that to a girl he loved most (ofcourse that time)..it must broke him from inside... and the girl...feeling miserable for her!
though more that half of Sam's past is behind the shads...I loved your Sam here.

Do continue..& thanks for PM.

Don't expect much from me Atisha. I am famous for ruining the greats,😳

I also feel bad for Arjun. But don't worry he will get his share of happiness soon.

You expect things like this from me

M I that mad??😲

I always used to think while reading stories about memory lost on this forum that Y the hell they don't try to search their names on Google...it was just a result of that confusion😆

Especial Thanks for liking Sam's character🤗

rinku95, NainaSM, halima_zaka, greensakthi, jia03, pango, misakiscarlet & Snehajain: thanks guyz for commenting. I am glad you liked this update

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Guyz please read the note below.

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Snehajain

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Posted: 9 years ago

Update chahiye...😭😭😭

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sonai

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Goldie

Posted: 9 years ago

its an awesome story.i like this story.plz plz send me pm plz.

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laila

@laila1994

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Posted: 9 years ago

Note 1: Guyz I have changed the title of this story But storyline is still the same, It's just that the previous title was too big already so I couldn't add the description. It was always meant to be Roshni Rawte case SS.

Note 2: Sikander is not a part of this story...All other characters ( Arjun, roshni & Sam) are different from serial.

Note 3: Before judging Sameer for what he did to his wife please read the update again.He was just 11 years old when all of this happened as much as he wanted he just couldn't stand against his family tradition at such a small age.

Note 4: I am not updating CS. First three chapters e.g: Chapter1, 2 & 3 are dedicated to three main characters of this story yet if anybody feels a need for it please let me know.

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I have replied everyone on pg 7 & 8. Do have a look if interested

This chapter is full of dialogues. First part is the conversation between commissioner Dustin Colheo & Sameer.

I have written dialogues in both languages ( hindi & English) coz I was confuse so do tell me which one you guyz prefer.

Chapter 3: "Roshni...The mysterious soul"

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laila

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Meet Arzoo Arjun Rawte:

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rimi

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Posted: 9 years ago

unres..

about the first part...the conversation between the commissioner and Rathod was promtly written...it showed proffesionalism yet there was a touch of personal regret too...

rathod isnt quite eager to give up the case of Arjun rawte...he has his reasons...but the way you have presented...it gives out a lot yet very less to churn the grey cells...

Roshni is a mystery..she is different from the elegant and graceful character we know of..she must be arrogant, rude and short tempered lady...thats what I could guess from the second part...she fooled Arjun with what?? i am confused here still..😕

Rathod adopted arjun's child...well..he seems a more confusing character to me too..🤢

love arzoo... 😃

do continue soon...waiting for a blast from your end...though its just the beginning i know..😛😛
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Shivani Priyam Kumar

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Posted: 9 years ago

What exactly should I do with you Laila?? One after the other you are bombarding us with thunderous updates and there is not a single helm to hold on to! Brilliant going sweetheart! The only problem is that the updates are too short and I'm greedy for more!!

So Roshini is more than just a memory and pretty face...well it is as they say! Lethal weapons always come in superb packaging. What must be her secret? Was she a double agent? A threat to the country? The formidable one's muse? And why did she precisely chose Arjun? Was there a mole in the system helping her out? Too many questions and hardly any replies!

So Sameer is feigning ignorance about Arjun's whereabouts when in reality he is the one who has kept him hidden. Wonder what he is hiding up her sleeve and who was so engrossed in listening to talks of the team: Sameer or another masked player??

Aarzoo is Arjun's daughter kept in safe custody with Sameer...now I'm seriously beginning to doubt these two? Who exactly is the victim and who is the instigator? I believe that is the crucial question!!

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ishita

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Posted: 9 years ago

sorry 4 d delay laila..

another awesome chapter/...

👏👏

rathod n commissioner convo was interesting...

rathod still wants to find arjun...he feels that arjun is the only lead to roshni's death

but the last part...roshni fooled him?? fake documents..fake identity?😕

even the rest of the team think her as a grey character...shakal se masoom..but as they said...she wasn't well mannered..

Rathod n arjun had clashes...but rathod loves arjun's daughter arzoo

I too feel that arzoo's birth n roshni's death was not a co incidence...

Arzoo is so cute🤗 mujhe real me lake do😳😆

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Roshni Rawte case SS: dangerous to know..Chap 6, pg 26 - Page 6

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