Originally posted by ShonaSparkzz
I am not very keen on calling it a beautiful os. Because both of us know it isn't. Sigh. Hard reality you hit me with girl🤔Sometimes words leave great impact and I'm proud to give you this complement that your words did. Finally, this has to be the first time you are praising my use of words😆
Your description of the little boys interpretation for the scenario was so apt. He was scared but oblivious of the end this situation may lead to. Innocence is such a bliss. So effing true
I must say the very course of your story made me skip a beat. I knew how it would end and yet I refused to believe and wished for a miracle so did you until the end and it showed in your writing. But well our wishes to live in delusion seizes the moment reality makes us face the harsh truth of life. How we wish this was all a story but yet be disappointed every time. The best part well to be truthful the worst but still since I'm commenting on your writing skills I want to give you an applause for having faced reality and for not amending the story line in order to achieving a miraculous happily ever after ending. To write a death is as painful because you live the moment with your character. All in all this is a next step to your writing.
Because few drops of water tell more than words and this is what my eyes said...
What do i say to you, you know it all already, but just as you said, I wished I could keep the guy alive but it wasn't in my hand.
Thank you so Much for such a detailed comment🤗
