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ASYA OS : Mr. Khan Help Me - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome!!
Aww My Asad wants to help her like a normal husband!!!
Zoya being Miss Fix it All!!!
When she screamed i thought its a cockroach!!
but it turned out to be lizard!!! 🀣🀣Edited by AsyaManeet - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chotu sa tiny miny request...πŸ˜›
Please write more cute and pyaara pyaara OS😳
 *Zoya's puppy face * 
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome Os Choco di
do write more of these
loved it
can we get just 1 more part plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: aYASHIKA

Really cute and nice os...
Awesome. ..
Asad wants to help her...
Mrs khan got scared πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
Lizard .. πŸ˜†
Loved it..
Beautiful 😳 πŸ‘

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Posted: 9 years ago
It was very cute os
beautifully written
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: kabhi-forever

Yes this is the first os where I am going to comment 1st.

Ok now I am going to talk about your os.




Its so good.


I loved it.


You wrote it very nicely.


After a long time I read a os and its awesome.



Believe me its very nice. 




Keep writing because u write very well. 



Thank you. Your feedback means so much. Thanks for reading πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: aYASHIKA

Really cute and nice os...
Awesome. ..
Asad wants to help her...
Mrs khan got scared πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
Lizard .. πŸ˜†
Loved it..
Beautiful 😳 πŸ‘



Thanks Yashi I know hilarious tha and I enjoyed writing it too πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

hahahhaha! Lizard 🀣


Just a thought- how about it being greater if it was a plastic one placed by Asad himself! 🀣

🀣

Okay my horns are getting highly visible now 🀣 

Thanks sweets! It always feels great to read on AsYa <333 

p.s. LAST LINES β˜ΊοΈ



Hahahaha ankie brilliant idea πŸ€£ Asad being extremely naughty here.


Your most welcome yaar, mein kissi aur couple pe likh hi nahi sakti yaar. Asya are in my blood now, addicted to them πŸ˜³


Yeah the last lines, romance ke bina koi abhi story complete kaise ho sakti hai πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
Is this the first time I'm reading you??



Wow.


I'd reckon Zoya is exactly the way you've portrayed her to be!



A warm and nice read on a Sunday evening!



Mwahhh!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: imcooldude

unress...
funny OS, full comedy
can't stop laughing


GREAT    JOB!!!



Thanks Abi, glad you liked it πŸ˜ƒ