For the first time everrr!Resssπ
Unress
Hailaaa...let me breathe! Phew! That was one beautiful update..just what I needed to kill the Sunday night bluesπ³ I forgot for a moment that I was here on my bed and instead I got transported to the beach with Arjun and Sakshi, listening to the sound of the waves, feeling the sand beneath my feet and then..sighhh the scene at the house *thud* (I could even smell the dust in the old house)
I was smiling, crying, grinning, blushing and had butterflies in my stomach (not to mention the goosebumps) throughout the update!π³
Hold onnn I forgot to thank youuu for using Humdard in the updateee! Ahh ahhh ahhh me going nuts with the feelingπ€ͺ
And I feel like this now:
Ok, that was kinda mixed up (that's the effect of the emotions your updates causedπ) so let me start from the beginning!
First of alll, mindblowing banner againπ³ Hayeee Arakshi and Humdard ..what a murderous combination
Wait u know that already.
The beginning was beautiful and intense...so much of emotions floating to the surface and yet, they hold it back...
And then she walks off to overhear the conversation..wait whaaat baby?
How dare he agree to marry her when he was wait..he was married?π²π²π²
And then our hero comes
"One look at Arjun's furious face and she knew Rahul would end up with a lot of broken bones if she didn't step in."π€£
This was awesomee loooll I had a huge grin on my faceπ
Then the hug at the beach..sighhh
It was so beautiful
The way he comforted her when she was hurt...beautifully penned down!π
And then the scene at the house...sighhh so romantic. A bench on the lawn and then the confession *thud*
And finally they confess their feelings for each other..and all the words come pouring out..sighhh
My most favourite lines were these:
"I look at you and I see someone who doesn't look at me with sympathy. You didn't see me as broken or damaged. You weren't afraid of me. You looked straight through me. And that scared me, Sakshi."
Sigh, how do you write so well?π³
The way she comforted him, held on to him and promised to be beside him always.π³ And then humdarddd.. I slipped into a lil dreamland of mine (created by you)π³
And thennn you just killed me with the end..hailaa candles in a dark room and Arakshi And then the kiss!βΊοΈ
I love you for creating that atmosphere and literally transporting me there (not to become a kebab mein haddi of courseπ€£)
"They had wasted a lot of time, but they still had a lifetime to live with each other..."
Sighhh...such a beautiful line.
Okay I am officially going to slip into my Humdard dreamland now and prepare for the Monday morning
This was a beautiful TS Avnii.. beautifully written from beginning to endπ
Thanks soo soo much again for including Humdard in it..I sooo wished for it when I read the first partπ
Thank you for writing this and updating it when your life is soo hectic! π€
P.S - As usual this became an essay. Kya karein, it was based on Humdard naπ€ͺ
Edited by ritu_24 - 9 years ago
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