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Rajeshwari_KR

@Rajeshwari_KR

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 9 years ago

Amazing update...

Love kriyam's bond...

update soon

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

IF-Rockerz

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

the chapter was fabulous ... really liked both friends conversation...
do continue soon

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917107

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

nice update...

loved it...

loved kriyam's bonding...

update soon..

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David

@arshafan94

Goldie

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

great yaar.

love the friendship and the dream girl part.

so true to the character of Swayam.

also love this Kria and can't wait to see what happens in college

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kriapatel

@kriapatel

Goldie

Posted: 9 years ago

It was intresting
kria n sw ki tlk
i was really nice
mujh starting to ahut hi fadu lagi
kria sw pe gussa kar rai thi
n then sw ki dreamgil pe discussion
really nice
love it

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trishika rajput

@trishikarajput0

Senior Member

Posted: 9 years ago

Lovely update

Kriyam were cute

Continue soon

Thanks for update

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vaibhavi

@VAISHNAVI11

Newbie

Posted: 9 years ago

chapter 4

After kria left swayam was going inside the club to inform his friends that the party is over and they can go their home now.
He was just going inside as he bumped into a lost rey.
There head bumped into each other causing an ouch noise from both of them
Sam: aaj kya bumping day hai
Rey:what
Sam: what kya what kaha dhan de kar chal raha tha
Rey: tu meri chod aur yeh bata kit u itni der se tha kaha par chala gaya tha itni der wait ki maine teri andar.
      You know I thought ki itne dino ke baad hum log saath me ml kar masti karenge waise bhi Mumbai me toh tere apni rep ko secret rakhne ke stupid decisions ki wajah se hum saath me masti kar nahi paate .
Sam: woh who...
          Itna zyada gussa I mean tujhe hua kya itna kyu bol raha hai saans toh lele pehle.
   Achha bata kya hua
Rey:kuch nahi bas aise hi who ladki (he suddenly stops saying realizing he has what will he say to swayam)
Sam: arre chup kyu hogaya bata naa
Rey: arre kuch nahi bas aise hi
Tu meri chod tu mujhe ye bata kit u kaise logo ko iss party mein bulata hai    itna attitude
Sam: look who's saying
Rey:shut up yaar
Sam: accha bata kya hua
Rey:kuch nahi mera ek ladki se choti si fight hogayi phir uske baad maine use mere saath dance karne ki dare di aur...( he was about say something but he was cut in between by swayam)
Sam: phir toh tu definitely jit gaya hoga phir kyu muh latka rakha hai
Rey: tu pehle meri baat toh sunle pehle
(swayam gives him a look of go on)
Rey: hum dono mein se koi nahi jeeta
Sam: what aise kon si ladki ti jisne tujhe hara dia
Rey: haraya nah hum dono ke bich mein ty hua
Sam:haan phir bhi tu mujhe puri baat bata
Rey tells him the whole incident with telling him that he liked hr dance very much and also wanted to meet her
Sam: toh tu use mil na chahta hain
Rey:haan isliye toh main tujhe dhund raha tha
Sam:aur main isein teri kya help kar sakta hun
Rey;kyon who teri party mein aayi thi toh tu use janta hi hoga naa
Sam: haan par who toh main tujhe tab bataunga naa jab tu mujhe ye bataega ki who kaisi dikhti thi
Rey quickly tells him what he knew like the dress she was wearing her hairs but the thing in which he got lost while telling about was her eyes
Swayam knew about whom rey was talking about but he decided to tease rey for sometime so he decided he wouldn't mention about rey getting lost instead he just gained his attention and told hm that he would find out this girl and let him know
Rey said ok and after that they headed home

Next day
Sam:rey uth jaa mujhe kahin jaana hai and u r coming with me?( shouting)
Rey: kaam tujhe han mujhe nahin (groaning)
Sam: if u want to see your mistery girl you will get down your ass off that bed in10 minutes( shouting a little)
After 10 minutes rey came down running water dripping from his wet hairs
Sam on seeing rey: wow mujhe nahi pata tha ek ladki tujh par itna effect kar sakti hai
Rey: shut up koi effect nahi hai I just liked her dance ok
Sam: accha ab chalein
Rey: when did I holded ur handsEdited by VAISHNAVI11 - 9 years ago

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vaibhavi

@VAIBHAVIKR

Groupbie

Posted: 9 years ago

hello people
I know the update is not very large but i am trying my best to write lenthy chapters and one more thing no one can blame me for pms
I have already informed u about it and those who want pms make sure to add VAISHNAVI11 in your buddy listEdited by VAIBHAVIKR - 9 years ago

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Rajeshwari_KR

@Rajeshwari_KR

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 9 years ago

Nice update...

Reyam talk was nice and I liked Swayam's plan of not telling Rey who that girl was...

Update soon...waiting for KR first meet😊

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917107

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

superb update..

swayam rey ke maze leying.. :P

loved it..

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