Just read the 1st part, awesome start...you have written with such empathy that it touched my heart...I am quoting few of my fav lines..
Taking another day from his life the Sun had journeyed towards the horizon. He kept gazing at his father's path, how many days it will take for him to be united with him? His every blood cell is counting moments for that very moment, the moment of freedom, freedom from this cursed life. And he knows the moment is near.
he smiles on his fate, the throne neither belonged to yudhisthir nor to Duryodhan, it was his. He, Karna, son of the Sun, first born of mother Kunti was rightful heir of king Pandu , the land for which the great destruction is taking place belongs to his only. Karna smirks again if he wants everything can be stopped, he knows his friend Duryodhan won't be saddened to see him on throne in stead of Yudhisthir, and millions of lives will be saved, but at cost of what? His honour? What will people call him, a traitor?
Karna still can't believe that its Krishna who snatched the earth away from his feet.
Karna suddenly got concious sensing its quite a while his father had went beyond horizon, once again darkness is prevailing including his life.
However, I loved the whole part...feeling like reading again and again, its soo nice...thknz for such an awesome update...I loved how u described Karna and his inner turmoils...lovely update 👍🏼
