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Posted: 9 years ago
LOL I liked how Raghav and Zayne were talking once drunk.
And Avi still has feelings for Babli???

Awww how cute Vihaan and Aditi!!!! He He

But you made babli have how many kids? Krish, aditi pari and now she is pregnant again????
Me faints!!!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Great going dear!!! 😃👏 I like Avi-Babli relation, so cute.😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi dear I'm sory I don't knw ur name hi I 'm raka o my god how did I missed this ff amazing read it in one go I'm sending u a buddy request pls accept it & pm me from next time & if u write another ff on ragna pls inform me pls.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow! It looks like Zayne and Babli going for a cricket team lol
They already have three children and one more is on the way ;)
I guess these two don't like tv 😆
Aww everyone is getting along and I like it
Priya still mad at Pakhi
Omg!!! Raghav and Zayne are hilarious
They both getting along while drinking lol
Awesome update
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Posted: 9 years ago
FANTASTIC UPDATE.
 
But too confused with the child's names!!!!!!!!!!!!!.I am unable to understand them clearly.
 
AND ZAYNE AND BABLI HAVE ALREADY THREE KIDS AND ANOTHER ONE IS ON THE WAY.
QUITE SHOCKING AND STRANGE.SMALL GIRL ,SO MUCH TORTURE.
 
And Zayne hates her in jumpsuit and complaining abt his wife to his father-in-law.That was
beautifully written.
 
Waiting for some clarity and the blabberings of the drunken FIL And Son - in-law.
 
 
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: charvi3

Lovely update dear

Thank you😛

Originally posted by: sweet1308

Really awesome update

Thanks Deary😃

Originally posted by: usahingora

hey dont complete the story lovely update


Thank you😳 I'm thinking Not too,I don't know lets see

Originally posted by: priya_remix

LOL I liked how Raghav and Zayne were talking once drunk.

And Avi still has feelings for Babli???



Awww how cute Vihaan and Aditi!!!! He He

But you made babli have how many kids? Krish, aditi pari and now she is pregnant again????
Me faints!!!!!!


Thank you Priya😃,Lol yeah I liked that too,And YES Avinash does have Feeling for babli,Vihaan and Aashi yeah😳Lol Don't people in love who are married and planning a family has that many kids😆😉


Originally posted by: chahat4u

Great going dear!!! 😃👏 I like Avi-Babli relation, so cute.😳

Thanks Charu😳I too Love them wish I had Paired them first😆😉

Thank you😃

Originally posted by: Rakapaul

hi dear I'm sory I don't knw ur name hi I 'm raka o my god how did I missed this ff amazing read it in one go I'm sending u a buddy request pls accept it & pm me from next time & if u write another ff on ragna pls inform me pls.

Hello Raka I'm Aria😃Aww thanks I'm happy You liked my FF and Yes Definally will Pm you about My New FF😃 As I'm starting A SS and a brand new FF😉

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

Wow! It looks like Zayne and Babli going for a cricket team lol
They already have three children and one more is on the way ;)
I guess these two don't like tv 😆 
Aww everyone is getting along and I like it
Priya still mad at Pakhi 
Omg!!! Raghav and Zayne are hilarious 
They both getting along while drinking lol
Awesome update

Thank you 😃😳Natasha Dear you made me laugh "These two don't like Tv" LOl 😆😆 Yeah Priya is still very upset with Paakhi,I finally made a scene with both like that since both have a problem with Babli😆😉

Originally posted by: laavanya4u

FANTASTIC UPDATE.

 
But too confused with the child's names!!!!!!!!!!!!!.I am unable to understand them clearly.
 
AND ZAYNE AND BABLI HAVE ALREADY THREE KIDS AND ANOTHER ONE IS ON THE WAY.
QUITE SHOCKING AND STRANGE.SMALL GIRL ,SO MUCH TORTURE.
 
And Zayne hates her in jumpsuit and complaining abt his wife to his father-in-law.That was
beautifully written.
 
Waiting for some clarity and the blabberings of the drunken FIL And Son - in-law.
 
 


Ok First Adi and Chaahat's kid names are,Abha and Aditi,Then Priya and Arjun's Kid is Rian,Then Simran and Avinash is Vihaan while babli and Zayne are Krish,Aashi,Pari.
Torture indeed😆😆😆
Thank you😃😃 Yeah zayne and Rahav needs to bond alot😉


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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 49

Morning Rose Babli and Kalpi sat ant the Breakfast Table watching their husbands,Zayne and Raghav sit back and watched them
Kalpi-You both are Idiots,You know that!
Babli-You both got drunk!!
Raghav-Look it isn't the first time I was  Drunk and i Have a reason to be.
Kalpi-What is that?!!
Raghav watched Zayne and Babli
Raghav-Noting,I was just thirsty
Kalpi and babli watched him
Kalpi-Come with me in the kitchen I'll get you some Coffee
Kalpi took Raghav's hand forcefully and left,Babli watched Zayne,He sat up and watched her.
Zayne-What's my punishment??
Babli smiled
Babli-That you have to buy me new Jumpsuits
Zayne closed his eyes and put his head on the table,Babli smiled,Raghav snickered at Zayne's Misery,Kalpi folded her hands and watched Raghav.
Raghav-Whats mine??
Kalpi-No more Going away,And I'm canceling our trip to Toronto
Raghav watched kalpi shocked,Kalpi smiled and Left,Raghav ran after kalpi.
Raghav-Ya,Kalpi you're not thinking straight,Are you drunk too??
Kalpi watched Raghav and Smiled sarcastically
Kalpi-Yes I'm totally Drunk
Kalpi left,Raghav watched on.

At Kapoors Mansion
Simran watched a Sad Avinash.
Sim-You Met her After 11 Years,And i still see you love  her.
Avi watched her.
Avi-Is it so??Did she noticed?
Sim-Maybe maybe not,But Avi you need to move on.
Avi-Our Marriage...
Sim-Is a big lie,You may be married to me  but you love Babli
Avi chuckled
Avi-she's Pregnant,I thought that she'll always be with me and that I would've been in Zayne's Place.
Sim-But,She choosed Zayne not you.
Avi-I have to tell her that our child was just an accident,that we weren't even Married when I got you Pregnant.
Simran sat next to Avinash
Simran-Hey don't ever say Vihaan was an Accident,Vihaan may never be a love child but He's everything for me,and Avi you don't need to tell babli about us and what happen,she has a husband and Kids and she's pregnant
Avi watched her
Sim-This,Us what we did isn't babli's Concern,Our Marriage isn't a love marriage,you saved me Avi and I'll always be thankful,for giving me Vihaan and a New Life.
Simran kissed him and Left,Avi watched her,He took out his phone and Texted someone "I need to meet you now"

At The hospital,Babli sat down.
Doc-Mrs Rathore You have healed up alot.
Babli-And my Brain??
Doc-It's healed up,Just Make sure Mrs Rathore that you don't ever Fall,and hit your head otherwise...
Babli-What??
Doc-Mrs Rathore please don't get worked up just relax,I'll tell you the few Damages,If that happens you can get A Brain Hemorrhage,Memory Loss or you may slip into a coma
Babli took a deep breath.
Doc-Just please take care of yourself and your Unborn child.
Babli-Thank you and I will,Just please don't tell My Family about this.
Doc-Okay Mrs Rathore,Just come in Next week for a Check up.
Babli left and remembered what the doctor said'I'll make sure I don't ever hit my head"

At Singhaina Mansion
Paakhi sat with Rian and Played with Him,Kalpi came and sat with them.
Kalpi-Paakhi Your Grandson is so cute
Paakhi-And where are yours??
Kalpi-Babli send them over to Aai's
Paakhi-Sometimes I feel she sends them so she can get some peace.
Kalpi-Who told her to make that much.
Paakhi-I blame Zayne
Kalpi-Raghav as well.
Paakhi-He still hates Zayne?
Kalpi-He's happy that he's getting a grandchild Again but...
Paakhi-Zayne,I Understand that.
Priya Came in And saw Rian with Paakhi
Priya-Rian!!!
Kalpi and Paakhi watched her.
Priya-Go outside and play.
Rian left,Priya watched Paakhi coldly
Priya-How dare you Talk to my child!!How dare you!!
Paakhi-Priya he's my granchild and I love him
Priya-Paakhi Kapoor you don't love anything but yourself!!
Kalpi-Priya...
Priya-Kalpi Mom Please don't.
Paakhi-Priya I'm sorry about what happen Please forgive Your mother.
Priya watched her.
Priya-Stay the Hell away from Rian,He is my son.
Priya was in tears
Priya-I don't want him to become cold and cunning like you.
Paakhi was hurt,Priya watched kalpi and Paakhi coldly and left,Paakhi sat down and cried,Kalpi sat next to her.
Kalpi-Hey Paakhi don't cry,Just don't cry.
Kalpi hugged Paakhi.

At The Park,Avinash turned and saw Babli comming,He watched her stomach and looked away,Babli smiled seeing him
Babli-Hey,Whats wrong??Are you okay??
Avi watched her
Avi-I'm Okay,I just needed to talk to you,Lets sit.
Avi helped babli and both sat down,Babli watched Avi's Tensed Face.
Babli-Avinash?? Are okay?? 
Avi-Simran and I...
Babli-Simran??Is she okay??
Avi Cleared his throat.
Avi-Ummm Vihaan was An Accident.
Babli watched him confused.
Babli-Accident??
Avi-I got Simran Pregnant Before Marriage,11 years ago.
Babli watched him shocked and speechless
Babli-Avi...
Avi-I'm sorry
Babli watched him
Avi-Babli i only loved you and will always will,Please don't feel hurt.
Babli got up and held her stomach in pain,Avinash touched her hand.
Avi-Babli are you okay??
Babli-Moved avi's hands,he watched her.
Babli-Why are you telling me all this Avinash? I don't care who you sleep with or...
Avi-What?
Babli-You love me??It's been 11 years, and what was the need to tell me about Simran and you???
Avi-Babli I just felt bad to you.
Babli-Why?? Avinash I'm married and I'm Pregnant for Zayne and I love him.
Avi looked away.
Avi-Simran was right i shouldn't have told you,But stupid me felt bad.
Babli watched him,Zayne who was in his car passed and saw them both,Jealousy and Anger build up in Zayne,He told the driver to leave.
Babli-Avinash this was too much to tell,I'm sorry if your'e hurt,But your Intimate Life and whatever Isn't my...
Avi-Concern.
Babli-Yes.
Avi-You May say you aren't hurt but you are,You may not admit it but you too Love Me.
Babli watched him shocked,Avi went closer to Babli and hugged her.
Avi-I understand your commitment to Zayne and your children.
Babli stood and listen
Avi-But what about me??i need you in my life
Babli watched Avinash
Avi-I'll say it again babli I love you,I want you
Babli was in tears,Avinash leaned closer and Kissed babli on her lips,Babli pushed him away in shock.
Babli-What are you doing??Don't forget I'm Zayne's wife and your Simran's Husband,How dare you kiss me??
Avi watched her calmly
Babli-I think we should not meet like this anymore.
Avinash watched her
Babli-And i Think you should love your wife and not me.
Babli was leaving,avinash held her wrist tightly
Avi-Don't do this Please.
Babli-Avinash let me go,Otherwise I'll scream.
Avi watched her and let her hands go,Babli quickly left,Avinash stood feeling Guilty.

At Singhaina Mansion,Zayne Sat by the bar Drinking,Flashes of Babli and Avinash surrounded his head,Then he saw his Evil Conscience smiling at him.
Evil-She Went behind your back without telling you she met her Crush.
Zayne got angry.
Evil-Imagine what those two could be doing now behind your back,Touching and You know
Zayne started to Drink More.
Evil-She didn't even tell you,Infact maybe that child could be His,Your so called Unborn child.
Zayne eyes got redder by the minute.
Zayne-I'll Kill her.

Raghav and Kalpi stood in the Elevator,Raghav kept watching kalpi and Looking away,she watched him and noticed
Raghav-Kalpi,Did you forgive me yet??
Kalpi watched Raghav
Raghav-Kalpi I'm sorry,Please don't cancel the trip.
Kalpi watched him
Kalpi-The car is ready.
Raghav-So have you forgived me yet??
Raghav and Kalpi walked to the car
Raghav-Kalpi??
Kalpi-Get in the car.
Raghav-Kalpi Talk to me.
Kalpi-Raghav If you don't get into the car,I'll have to use force
Raghav watched her and laughed,Kalpi watched him annyoed.
Raghav-I'll get into the car
Kalpi watched him, and sat in the car.
Raghav-Kalpi Please,I wanted to got toronto with you.
Kalpi took her earplugs and listened to her music,Raghav watched her sadly and thought 'I'll have to do something for her to forgive me"

At Kapoors Mansion,Avinash was pacing up and down in his room,Simran watched him
Sim-Whats wrong??
Avi-I kissed her ,i passed all my limits now she won't see me.
Simran watched him
Sim-You what??Kissed?
Avi-She won't see me
Sim-If Zayne Finds out what you did he won't spare you and Even Babli.
Avi walked up to Simran angerily
Avi-That won't happen,Because if Zayne ever hurts babli's I'll kill him.
Sim-Well you better sort this out,We have to go on the beach later with them.
Avi watched her.
Avi-I'll talk to her.
Simran watched him.

At Singhaina Mansion,Babli came back and saw Zayne Drinking
Babli went up to him.
Babli-Zayne why are you drinking??
Zayne watched her and moved away from her.
Zayne-It's none of your business
Babli-Zayne Stop it.
Zayne-Just shut up! Stop being a nagging wife!
Babli watched him shocked
Zayne-Since your'e questioning me,Where the hell were you!!!
Babli watched him
Babli-I was with Priya...
Zayne watched her and smirked,He then slaped her,Babli held her face in tears.


So I'm thinking to continue in a few more chapters than ending off early😉 what you think? It's because well,I'm making an SS and A FF based on RagNa,and you reading my FF means alot to me and thank for reading even though it may be crappy😉
I'm thinking of a small quick story to end off Kalpana's Love with Zayne becoming Inscure and Jealous and pushing Babli on the edge.It's gonna be a quick track will end off soon😉
And forgive for my Errors and Bad spelling
Love you all🤗

PS don't blame my Zayne😆 and always love My Avinash😳,I love him more than Zayne😆





Edited by ariarai - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fantastic update!!! Do continue the story as much as you can. 
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Posted: 9 years ago

Nice update. Omg Babli is having health issues and she hide this from her family, Zayne why he is hurting her and Avinash messing Babli's life. Worrying for Babli hope she not get hit her head due to Zayne's anger Raghav won't spare him for hurting Babli. Waiting for next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
THANKS DEAR FOR CLEARING MY DOUBTS WITH THE KID'S NAMES.
 
AND  A WONDERFUL UPDATE.
 
A WRONG MOVE BY AVINASH AT THIS MOMENT AND AFTER KNOWING BABLI AS ZAYNE'S WIFE AND NOT CARING ABT HIS OWN WIFE AND VIHAAN.
 
SECONDLY,EVEN AFTER 11 YEARS ZAYNE COULDN'T TRUST HIS WIFE. REALLY VERY SAD!!!!!!!!!!!!.
 
THIRDLY,RAGHAV SHOULDN' DRINK QUITE OFTEN AND SHOULD BOND WELL WITH HIS SON -IN-LAW,
 
THE RIGHT TIME HAS COME FOR THE TRIO TO LEARN A LESSON FROM THEIR BETTER-HALFS AND FOR THEIR BETTERMENT.