Arshi New ~ Best Laid Plans ~ (THREAD 1) - Page 64

Welcome back. Nice plot, I can see your writing has improved. Not that it was bad before. Its just become amazing by day :-). Looking forward for more.

Very intriguing chapter... Loved it...wondering what might be reason behind akash-arnav enemity.
Waiting for next part.
Do reveal sweetheart mystery...

Will be back to comment, just recieved your email in the middle of a lecture and couldn't stop myself from peeping in

^^you made my day with this chapter.

Very nice!!
Love the concept and very eager to see how the story unfolds.
For now will enjoy the ride since it is just the beginning.
Akash and Arnav at odds. Aman as Khushi's friend cum bodyguard and the formidable Arnav as a ruthless crime boss with a "concern" for Khushi should prove to be exciting. 
Happy to see you start this story.
👍🏼

Welcome back... No complaints or suggestion on how the story or characters should be.. U are too good a writer to be told so. I Trust your imagination and the BLP will be one exciting journey. I just hope u can update as per ur planned schedule. 

Marvellous update
Loved it
Plz continue soon
Thanks for the mail

You are back!!!!!! Yipppuuueee!!!!! Hearty warm welcome!!!!!Edited by babli0204 - 9 years ago

Wow...U updated!!!I It has made my day...😊

I hope you are feeling better now :)

A very interesting and intriguing start. I loved your take on Mumbai, it indeed is a very fascinating melting pot of all humanity. You've brought out it's restlessness very well. That hunger to achieve something that you've shown in Arnav is visible in various degrees all around you here. 

You don't miss what you don't know - trite but true. How is Khushi now going to come to terms with being back to living in a gilded cage? 

Aman may be romanticising Arnav's concern, but given the degree of animosity that you've shown between Arnav and Aakash, that prickle of unease about his true intentions perseveres. 

Unsurprisingly, I'm hooked :D Waiting for answers to all the questions you've posed ...