MY LIFE IS INCOMPLETE WITHOUT YOU [ PART 37 ( A ) UPDATED ] - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
is RD is our randhir??? ofcrse i know he z our rd, but he z not acting as prevuous & more over sanyu didnt realise him...is that our randhir???? plz tell na !!!! dont ask me to wait...
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Posted: 9 years ago
part 13 and 14 
were awesome 
love the way that both of them interact with each other 
can't wait to see what happens next 
update soon 
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Posted: 9 years ago
SWA1992 of course he is.. No doubt... V all know ds bt sanyu vl know ds after few epi... May b in part 19... Till den enjoy der romance... N tysm 4 showing excitement 2 read ds...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Az soon as I get time I vl post it... After 2 days or so..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey! Nain
Lovely, lovely, lovely written dear👏⭐️
Love it😳
Love ur work❤️
Thanks for pm
Update soon
Love
Bushra
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it's amazing...pls update soon
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PART 15

I squeezed my eyelids and face him.

"URL.. It will be late for you to reach home", said RD.

I got a great relief and replied "no sir my home not much far".

"you act dumb or really you are", his words pinching.

"i didn't get you sir", I voiced confused.

"i meant that you are not going home now. I am going club and you are with me"
"but I don't want to go"

"i am not asking you. I just said before doing. And is it necessary to remind you about the contract"
"aaa..no..i..i am coming"

"good", he said while changing gear.

"oh god. Why you remind me that this piece is the reincarnation of yamraj. I wish to change our places like radha did with kanha. What a day it would be. I will rule YAM", my mind was talking with god and my golden dreams were interrupted by the live YAM.

"inform your parents about your late arrival", he said concentrating on roads.
"i am orphan. They passed away in an accident when I was in school leaving my younger sibling for me", my lips bent down.

"answer that much you are asked to. Non-stop blabbering machine", he said making an angle from his head.

"you live alone", again he queried.
"yes. Upto 4 months. Then my sis will come to stay with me", I replied.

"again time wastage. I am asking you general questions. This not history that you explain everything", he disgusted.

Meanwhile my phone rang and it was none other than sid.
"is it mentioned in your rule book that I cannot pick my phone"
"excuse me"

I displayed him the phone and he nodded and not to forget in his YAM manner. I received the call.

"heyy sweetheart. How are you? I heard you are in mumbai"
"fine. Yes in hell"

"what happened. You are sounding tensed. Where are you now", asked sid being tensed.
"near YAM", I murmured biting my teeth.

"what?"
"no nothing"

And our conversation continued for a few minutes. After the call RD busted.

"you bro calls you sweetheart"
"no. He is my best friend. Why are you wasting your valuable one minute in asking me silly questions inspite of driving or thinking your evergreen thoughts. Actually I don't want to spoil it", I replied and my face red.

He remained silent and we reached club. I was among the biggest clubs in the city. Without wasting a minute he made his way to billiard table.

I saw his another side. He was looking like a gentleman and for me the club was a new experience. For a while I forgot that I was forcefully drifted there. I was continuously staring to the gentleman who was a egoistic angry man before sometime.

"want to try", asked RD taking me out of my dreamland.
"are joking with me", my statement confused him.

"this is the first time I am entering a club and you are asking me to play with this pool stick"
"cant you be clear that you dont know how to play"

"yeah fine. I don't know"
"come, I will teach you"

"are you serious"
"why? Are you getting any signs of joke from my face?"

I marched towards him and I felt the same feeling when I was waiting to meet randhir. My environment was surrounded with melody and I blent in that mesmerising look.

Nahi jeena tere bajun
Nahi jeena tere bajun

I went to the table and picked up the pool stick.

"you have to learn first how to pick up the stick", said RD and handed over it to me. I was still lost in those coffee brown eyeballs.

Main tenu samjhawan ki, Na tere bajun lagda jee
Tu ki janay pyar mera, main karaan intezar tera
Tu dil tu yun jaan meri

In a lost state I clasped the stick staring at him. His aura was washing my breath. I was holding the stick and he was behind me clutching my hands. His chin was right placed over my shoulder. I eyes were still fixed in his charm.

Main tenu samjhawan ki, Na tere bajun lagda jee
Tu ki janay pyar mera, Main karaan intezar tera
Tu dil tu yun jaan meri

Main tenu samjhawan ki, Na tere bajun lagda jee

He asked me to concentrate on table but I could not take off my eyes from his grace. He stared me back and our eyes blocked. I was feeling he was singing that tune from his extra rosy soft lips.

Mere dil wich reh k mere dil da hal na janay
Tere bajun kalyaa bay k ronday nain numanay
Jeena mera...hayeee, Marna mera naal teray si
Tu kar aitbar mera, main karan intezaar tera
Tu dil tu yun jaan meri

Main tenu samjhawan ki, Na tere bajun lagda jee

"I know I am extra hot to attact thousands", taunted RD and I came out from the depth of his eyes. Finally I concentrated on table.

Ve changa naiyo kita viba
Ve changa naiya kita viba
Dil mera tod k
Ve bada pachtayian tha
Ve bada pachtayian tha
Tere naal jod k


We drooped down a bit and hit a ball. It was a super shot and we came back to our position.

I started my happy dance and he was glancing me now. I hugged him in excitement and to my surprised he hugged me back.

Sunjiyaan sunjiyaan dil di galiyan, sunjiyaan meriyaan baawan

Aaja teriyaan khushbuan nu, Labdiyaa meriyan saanvan
Tere binaa...hayeee...
kiven karaan door udaasi
Dil beqaraar mera, Main karan intezar tera
Tu dil tu yun jaan meri


I left him and marked that he was still gazing me. I spotted him back and my smile disappeared.

Main tenu samjhawan ki, Na tere bajun lagda jee
Tu ki janay pyar mera, main karaan intezaar tera
Tu dil tu yun jaan meri

Main tenu samjhawan ki, Na tere bajun lagda jee

After a few seconds I adjusted my hairs and narrowed my eyebrows to see him that he did not withdraw his eyes from me. Finally I spoke..



PART 16


"i dont look as hot as you. No need stare my face", I taunted and smirked.

Finally he withdrew his vision and scretched his forehead with his forefinger and spinned back.

We left for the squash tennis. RD brought two rackets for both of us.

"are you sure you will play with me. I mean according to you I am terrain and you are sky", I evoked raising my eyebrows.

He glanced me for a minute.
Taakte rehte tujhko saanjh savere
Nainon mein haye
Nainon mein haye
Taakte rehte tujhko saanjh savere
Nainon mein bansiya jaise nain yeh tere
Nainon mein bansiya jaise nain yeh tere

It was again a delight to me. His eyes were swepting a cool breeze to my hairs and I went deep inside his sight. He was calm and devine. I felt a lots of secrets hidden inside those as if there were a lot of loneliness inside them.

Tere mast mast do nain
Mere dil ka le gaye chain
Mere dil ka le gaye chain
Tere mast mast do nain
Tere mast mast do nain
Mere dil ka le gaye chain
Mere dil ka le gaye chain
Tere mast mast do nain


Suddenly a player hitted me from back and I fell on RD. We landed on ground now and I was on top of him.

Pehle pehal tujhe dekha toh dil mera dhadka haye dhadka dhadka haye
Pehle pehal tujhe dekha toh dil mera dhadka haye dhadka dhadka haye
Jal jal utha hoon main shola jo pyaar ka, bhadka haye bhadka bhadka haye


I gave a soft cry as my elbow attacked the floor. I sqeezed my eyelid and a warm tear drop fell on his cheek. He concentrated on my face, shifted my hairs behind my ears and wiped my tears. This side of him was quite shocking to me as it was a soft one hidden behind his rudeness.

Neendhon mein gul gaye hain sapne jo tere
Badle se lag rahe hain andaaz mere
Badle se lag rahe hain andaaz mere
Tere mast mast do nain
Mere dil ka le gaye chain
Mere dil ka le gaye chain
Tere mast mast do nain


My teary eyes noted his thundered ones. I was feeling as if I would drop myself there, I will be lost in that whirlwind. He understood my thinking and suddenly stood up stroking my elbow.

"aaa..are you fine? Stay here I am asking for ice", he lipped.
"no sir, I am fine", I snapped.

"did I ask you. I just ordered", he raised his eyebrow high with a sort of anger in those eyes pointing his forefinger towards me.

He took me to the garden and we sat there. After a minute or two a care-taker brought ice alongwith a towel.

My eyelids were still shut so that wrinkles appeared on it. He took my elbow and dipped inside the ice full of buckets.

Tere mast mast do nain
Mere dil ka le gaye chain
Mere dil ka le gaye chain
Tere mast mast do nain


"what a crap you are, aching so much and behaving simply like your name URL. Silly girl. Now dont take it out till a minute", he taunted.

Tujhse shuru huyi, tujhpe hi khatam ho
Duniya meri, duniya duniya meri
Tujhse shuru huyi, tujhpe hi khatam ho
Duniya meri, duniya duniya meri


But his taunts were now caressing me much as I was not pampered so much after my parents. I was staring him trying to understand that person.

Yeh baat dil mein thi, nainon ne bol di
Main hoon teri, main hoon main hoon teri
Tujhko hi yaad kar ke aanhein baroon main
Milke bhi mil na paun ab kya karoon main
Milke bhi mil na paun ab kya karoon main


"how difficult is to understand you. Why are you so clumsy. Sometimes you are behave so rude that I named you YAM just like an enemy of childhood and now so much care. What to say you how to understand you. You are being more myterious as I spending more time with you", my mind was repeating these words again and again but I could not ask him.

Afterall I met him just a week ago and hardly this was our second meet. Such short period was enough to understand a new person. Those thoughts brought a lone tear from my eyes and he noticed it.

"what happened is it aching more? Dont worry nothing much", he continuously started worrying.

"relax.. I am fine. I was just thinking that after my parents no one was there to look after me like this. I am such an orphan who was a parent to my sibling without a hand of blessings over my head", I interrupted and he gazed me hiding his care behind his eyes. It was a long eyelock.

Tere mast mast do nain
Mera dil ka le gaye chain
Mera dil ka le gaye chain
Tere mast mast do nain


Finally it broke due to the water sprays from fountain which dropped on us due to wind. He left my hand.

"is pain quite less now", he quered.
"yes. But can we leave? I am tired", I said making a baby face.

He nodded and we left for my home. The whole time there was an awkward silence spread in the environment. To make both of us comfortable he finally spoke.

"aaa..so where are you from", he asked.
"are you sure your time will not be wasted", I taunted and giggled.

"oh come on. I am not always angry young man"
"it means you know you are that"

"aaa..my gfs taunt me with this"
"oh so you have gfs"

"depends on time. I mean how I look"
"ok but you can abbrevite yourself as YAM. It suits you"

"what?"
"ya I mean you can call me URL so I can also give you a name right"

I giggled but he was on in his YAM look.

"can I ask you something if you have time"
"stop taunting. I am your boss"

"ok. ok. why dont you smile? I asked you before also but you were did not answer", I asked and he kept silent.

I continued "you must try. I am sure it will suit you", I grinned again. He oscillated his head continued driving concentrating on road.


TO BE CONTINUED...

cmnt zarur karna plzzz...

Edited by Nain5000 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey! Dear
lovely, lovely written👏⭐️
love it😳
keep it up👍🏼
Update soon
Thanks for pm
Love
Bushra
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Posted: 9 years ago

it is so cute update☺️

awww randhir ki gfs 😆

thanks for pm me

next part soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
is that our rd??? i think so!!!!