FF: Ilzaam |Thread 1 | Chapter 23(A)&(B) Pg 140 - Page 5

OMG ... what a story! Beautifully written .. you brought out the pain in both so well! Thanks for the pm and please continue soon .. 

WOW!! it was so heart wrenching...I just feel disgusted about how everyone betrayed madhu...She is so helpless because of her brother...& RK again came back to her & madhu responded to her...well they have something in common...pain of betrayal...& this will make them to depend on each other...

AWESOME UPDATE 👏 Madhu's past is too painful. even her present condition is also too bad . lets see wat hpns nex. may b rk wud buy her frm them . atleast she wud b wid only one man n that too whom she atleast likes.

nice story! 

This Is Fabulous Update Teekay! 👏 👏

Awesome updates...

MADHU HAD A PAINFUL AND TRAGIC PAST

Tell me a thing, are those lovely shayaris written by you dear?

Originally posted by: Jyoraj

Awesome update.

Madhu's painful past , the acceptance & finally the escape.

it was also amazing that she understood he was going through pain.

I please continue soon. Are the shayari lines written by you?

 

Originally posted by: drashtifan1

Tell me a thing, are those lovely shayaris written by you dear?