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Posted: 9 years ago
Kisha os ..

It was almost five years after college .. Kd and Rv 's joint buiseness was a great success and now they had their office in a Porsche building and Kd bought his own place too .. Kiya became a famous dancer and choreographer .. 

Prasha were sitting in a jewellery shop from past one hour .. Kd was looking at a rings with a confused face .. Piddhi and salesman were looking at Kd , their eyes widen and smiled wen they saw Kd happily looking at ring but then in a moment Kd kept that ring down with a confused face ..
Salesman : sir this ring is of latest design .. I am sure mam will like it ..
Kd while looking at rings : no but still I want something different for kiya .. All these are ordinary .. 
Salesman had defeated expression on his face and Piddhi well damn irritated ..
Piddhi murmured : Kd Bhai bhi na har bar different Karne ke chakkar main mujhe phasa dete hain .. 
Kd heard that and said : shut up piddhi .. It's my bad luck that no one is here .. Panchi in uk , sheeba at her town and Rv in Delhi and I have to come with u .. And I am getting no help from u .. 
After abt half an hour Kd smiled as he got a perfect ring for Kiya .. He was smiling but it semmed dat the salesman and piddhi were happier than him . 
But after sometime Kd again gave confused expression .. 
Piddhi and sales man at same time said : now what happened ?? 
Kd: will Kiya like this ring ? What If she don't like this . 
Piddhi : u just make the bill and Kd Bhai kiya will love it now come. Other preparations are left too .. 
Kd while pointing at another ring : piddhi wat abt dat ring .. 
Piddhi face palmed and Kd sighed and said : okay this is also good .. He paid the bill and prasha made their way to Kd's house .. 

NEXT DAY AT THE RESTAURANT 
 
It was evening now and piddhi took Kiya to restaurant by making an excuse .. 
Kiya and piddhi came to the restaurant .. 
Kiya: okay piddhi  so we will meet the manager and than will book a banquet for u and sheeba . Oh she is so gonna love u r surprise ... Come .. 
Manger : mam that way garden  area .. 
Kiya: what I am here for booking a banquet ...
Manager : mam plz someone is waiting .. 
Kiya turned around and saw that piddhi wasn't there .. 
Kiya made her way .. As soon as she went there  she saw that whole place was decorated with candles and there was a table for two . The soft music was playing in the background . She saw Kd standing there .. He came to her and held her hand and kissed it ... He lead her to table and both sat there ... They had their dinner... 
Kiya : wow Kd thanks a lot for this wonderful date .. It's awsome .. 
Kd just smiled and thaught : now it's time for proposal .. 
As he took was about to take out the ring he felt a rain drop on his face .. And soon it was raining ..
Kd(thaught) : oh no this can't be happening .. Manager was so right I must have arranged this set up in a banquet .. But no I wanted to propose her under an open sky .. It's all my fault .. 
Kd saw that kiya was very happy and was enjoying the rain .. 
Hotel staff came to Kd and said : sir we may arrange a place inside .. 
Kd smiled and said : no we r fine .. 
Kd(thaught): I wanted this proposal to be different and proposal in the rain is surely different .. 
Saying this he went near Kiya and said : shall we dance .. 
Kiya: sure .. 
She took off her sandals and kept her feet on Kd's feet and her hands were around Kd's neck .. Kd held her waist and both were dancing slowly..  After sometime they stopped dancing .. Kd took Kiya's hand and said : u know Kiya I  just wanna hold this hand like this only forever .. U have always been by my side in every worst or best situation .. And I just want to make u mine now .. 
Kd took out the ring from his pocket and was about to say something when Kiya said with a broad smile : oh my god Kd r u proposing me .. 
Kd raised his eyebrows and said : so why do u think I said that speech and brought this ring .. 
Kiya: Kd I said that out of surprise .. Typical Stoneface can't even stop taunting at time of proposal also .. 
Kd held her waist and pulled her closer and said : chicklet .. I always need u in my life coz only u r who made me believe in love , who loves me and who i love crazily .. so chicklet will u be mine ? 
Kiya: yes .. Stoneface off course .. 
Kd slipped the ring in her finger .. 
Kd cupped her face and kissed her passionately .. They broke the kiss and they hugged eachother .. 

So here is my another os .. Just a random os  but plz tell me how's it ??

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Amazing OS Stavan,moi loved it.

It's kiShalicious,loved Prasha's scene in the jewellery shop and how Piddi and Salesman were tired,as Kd was unable to select the correct ring,because he want something different and unique for his kiya...aww so sweet.

Kisha in rains was a treat to read,it's indeed a unique and beautiful proposal.

P.s.I am really sorry for unressing lately Stavan.

 

 

 


Edited by priya1101 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

amazing os stavan...

proposal in the rain..wow
it was different ofcourse..
i love it wen u hav such random ideas
write more...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Really Loved it 
PraSha scene was 😆😆
Confused KD 😆😳
The date and the proposal was too good <3 <3 
I love ur writing alot.. 
Keep writing more :) 
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fab I loved rain scene
Amazing os
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice OS Stavan 👍🏼
Finally... proposal ho gaya 😛 😆
KD is always upto smthing new 😆
Now toh even nature supported him 😆
Cute one 😉
Keep Writing 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: snowflake..

amazing os stavan...

proposal in the rain..wow
it was different ofcourse..
i love it wen u hav such random ideas
write more...

thanks a lot kirti
i am glad u like it ..
i will surely write more
thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: krazy4KD

Really Loved it 

PraSha scene was 😆😆
Confused KD 😆😳
The date and the proposal was too good <3 <3 
I love ur writing alot.. 
Keep writing more :) 

thanks a lot
i am glad u like it ..
i will surely write more
thanks ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: ..WitchGrave..

Fab I loved rain scene
Amazing os

thanks a lot ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: Kishafan_4ever

Nice OS Stavan 👍🏼

Finally... proposal ho gaya 😛 😆
KD is always upto smthing new 😆
Now toh even nature supported him 😆
Cute one 😉
Keep Writing 😊

thanks a lot khushi
i am glad like it ..
i will surely write more ..
thanks ..