VeeBa FF 'Love You More Then My Life' part 16, page 43 Last part - Page 6

superb story...thnx for the pm!!!!!!😃

M so loving dese twists!😆I love twists as long as dey dnt separate Veeba too much,and if dey r to bring dm closer m up for any twists!😎
 Dis is truly a beautiful piece of work..!👏Dnt stop Saffa!🤗Nd Y dnt u change dis to a SS or FF..I think u will mk it more dan five parts right?Plz do!I'll love to read so much more!Nd I mean it!

This content was originally posted by: sparkle2985

ranvi ki baate??????????😕 i think tat is suspense 

This content was originally posted by: TehsinaJFJ

M so loving dese twists!😆I love twists as long as dey dnt separate Veeba too much,and if dey r to bring dm closer m up for any twists!😎
 Dis is truly a beautiful piece of work..!👏Dnt stop Saffa!🤗Nd Y dnt u change dis to a SS or FF..I think u will mk it more dan five parts right?Plz do!I'll love to read so much more!Nd I mean it!

of course twists will not separate our Veeba.. nothing can separate  them 😉  thank u sooo much for liking my story 🤗 trust me i didn't thought even once that u all will like my story this much.. im still feeling like its a dream.. and about ur request to make it SS or FF, believe me im just going with the flow 😃 don't know if it will be five parts or more,😳 i'll for sure think about it 😛 

This content was originally posted by: Lovelyvb

of course twists will not separate our Veeba.. nothing can separate  them 😉  thank u sooo much for liking my story 🤗 trust me i didn't thought even once that u all will like my story this much.. im still feeling like its a dream.. and about ur request to make it SS or FF, believe me im just going with the flow 😃 don't know if it will be five parts or more,😳 i'll for sure think about it 😛 

Its da reality sweetheart!We love ur writing and u mk Veeba come alive!Ur dialogues r so bang on👏!I literally perspire wn i have to write dialogues coz I suck in hindi,and dis is punjabi mix too!🤢So my dialogues sucks too!🤢But u wrote things so beautifully dt I cud see things happening infront of me..Literally..!Awesome work truly dear!⭐️

p.s.I hope u r updatn soon!I wanna read more!😳
Edited by TehsinaJFJ - 9 years ago

Loved it to the core. and mera bhi pachka...mujhe laga tha it was Ranvi😆nice twist...you are a very good writer👏...introducing twists in each and every update is really commendable.👏 Keep writing more and update next part soon...coz I am in love with your story...and can't wait to know what happens next😳

Loved the veeba parts jo veera ne imagine kiya k woh sach tha 😊 good job 😊again 

Perfect Lover=Baldev Singh ,lovely update

Aww! Baldev is so cute! Lovely Update! Continue!

This content was originally posted by: TehsinaJFJ

Its da reality sweetheart!We love ur writing and u mk Veeba come alive!Ur dialogues r so bang on👏!I literally perspire wn i have to write dialogues coz I suck in hindi,and dis is punjabi mix too!🤢So my dialogues sucks too!🤢But u wrote things so beautifully dt I cud see things happening infront of me..Literally..!Awesome work truly dear!⭐️

p.s.I hope u r updatn soon!I wanna read more!😳