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Sahil ss-When Tables Turn part 1 up n pg 3

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey guys I am totally new here to this part ..I decided to scribble whatever came to me..This my shot in writing the background is after the completion of 2 and half months of contract marraige

 

   WHEN TABLES TURN an Sahil Story

 

Rehaan and Ahil rushed into the house ready to tear up Sanam, she was the reason of it all.

Ahil-"Latif Sanam kahan hain?"

Latif -"In Badi Begum's room "

Both the brothers were about to burst the door open and hurt her when they heard the conversation

S-"I will never forget the kindness you showed on me by saving my Badi-Ammi. Eventhoug I married Ahil for the very same...  I owe it to you"

Tanveer-"Nahin beta I should be the one thanking you for saving my family's reputation and marrying my Ahil for 3 months forgetting your future...(In a honey clad voice)

These words looked simple but it shook the very foundation of feelings Ahil and Rehaan had.Ahil slowly processed that Sanam's Badi ammi  was hospitalized during their marriage...

Realization stuck as he realized that he had tortured an innocent girl,the one he loved  to  a worse extent.Rehaan realizing his error of judgement  felt ashamed.

Sanam walked out of the room at the precise moment and walked past  them only to be pulled back by Ahil. There was pain, guilt,hurt and so many other emotions in his eyes ,which she could not understand.

Ahil-"Did you marry me for your Badi ammi's treatement.?Are you not behind my property?"

Sanam was hurt and shocked and something in her died that second..

Another voice-"Why would she want your property when she has her father's inheritance?"

All of them came out to watch what was going on..Tanveer to did..

Sanam-"Ishaan its not funny..." addressing the guy..

Ishaan-"It is the truth Sanam you are an heir to crores of property from your parent's side.."

Tanveer looked shocked and so did everyone..

Sanam-"Inheritance .. parents it does'nt make sense.."

Ishaan grew a bit aggressive-"What is wrong with you Sanam I have shown you the proof of all the property   papers. Why is it so hard to believe.The date was before your father's murder" and he bit his tounge

Sanam was shocked-"M...Murder..My parents died in an accident..."

Ishaan-"No It was a cold blooded murder"

Ahil gasped with the turn of events..His heart broke seeing the pain and desbelife on Sanam's face...

Sanam felt everything around her go darker and  the room spinning before blacking out she heard  3 different voices calling for her and everything went dark.

 

Should I continue ..If so should this be an SS,OS or an FF please comment..Buddy me for PM's

 

 

 

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Posted: 9 years ago
Pls continue as ss or ff
Lovely concept
sanam knows abt parents interesting
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nice concept
u should continue
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This is really good and make it a FF
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It's superb. U should continue.
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Teaser for chap-1

Sanam sat up slowly to see  the worried faces of many.Ishaan was sitting very close to her and was completely pale.

Sa-"Ishaan.. li.."but before she could  complete Ishaan hugged her.

 

Ishaan-"I am going to appoint a security guard for you Sanam.."

Sanam-"You mean.."

Ishaan-"Your life is still in danger "Ahil gasped .

 

Ahil just got near the gate when he heard the conversation

Ish-"She doesn't know it.. Prithvi is her personal body guard..."

Anonymous-"She is more important than any of the others.."

Ish-"I know ,I will take care of her ..Don't worry."

 Ahil couldn't make a head or tail out of it but knew one thing, his Sanam was in danger and he was going to protect her.

 

Sahil's first hug in cool rain

 

Edited by smritiz - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow sahil hug...nice teaser..plz continue..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice concept
Conti soon
If possible pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
Interesting concept - loved the prologue!
who's Ishaan?

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Teaser amazing pls update soon